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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 10 life is good

amzing little story thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Not funny at all that you are Dutch!  But you told the story of so many of your countrywomen and those from other countries that had the fortitude to survive hell on Earth, married American servicemen, and became American citizens.  Our country gets its strengths from our ancestors be they from here or across the globe.  We cherish those strengths and it also ties us to our ancestral lands - however many there may be.  The Dutch people are among those we count strongest!



Author's Response:

I meant it in an other context...you said it was an  "A truly American story!" ;-)

 

But.... i take it as a compliment, all women are strong no matter where they are or go to.

nowadays all countries are a mix of cultures and therefor stringer than ever.

 

you're sweet for all your kind words and i thank you for it

 

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 life is good

What a beautiful ending to your fiction!  A truly American story!  Born in the horrors of a war in Europe, nutured by love and the friendship of others here in the USA, and built upon like the stone.foundation of generations and faith.  A truly marvelous fiction!!  Thank you for all your hard work!



Author's Response:

and the funny thing us... i am Dutch ;-)

but thank you, it is a great compliment.

thank you for reading

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 life is good

So sweet!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 life is good

Thanks for the story.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 10 life is good

:) loved this story



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: bakerusaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 10 life is good

This story was a real gem !



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 9 My Baby gets our baby

They have come so far.



Author's Response:

yes they have :-)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 9 My Baby gets our baby

Wonderful!!  It's the beginnings of life again!  War is about dying and trying to survive.  Afterward, if you're smart, becomes about life and it's many blessings!  The world must have balance.  Thank you for doing such a wonderful job writing here.  I look forward to more!



Author's Response:

thank you for your kind words.

it means alot to me

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 9 My Baby gets our baby

:)



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 5:42 PM Title: ch. 8 valentine's day 1946

I'm enjoying this story. 



Author's Response:

thank you.

glad you like it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 7:27 PM Title: ch. 8 valentine's day 1946

:):)



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:-)

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Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 7 Edward and Bella are getting a surprise

Wonder how Edward is going to take it with her being pregnant?  

 

Loved it and looking forward to more :D



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 7 Edward and Bella are getting a surprise

I think it's great - life reminding you at that IT is in charge, not you!  It may be unplanned, unexpected, and inconvenient, but these two have a great back up team and life renewing itself after a huge conflagration is always welcome and a blessing if you can just see it!  Wonderful chapter!  What I adore about Bella here is that she does not see Edward's limitations.  She sees the promise, just as he saw it for her!



Author's Response:

Yes! You got it. 

The glass is not half empty but still half full.

Life is full of chances and promisses.

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 Edward and Bella are getting a surprise

:):)



Author's Response:

hi

glad you still here to read my little story

:-)

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 6 home is where the heart is

In life there is always low points. This is a big part of marriage, the Better or Worse part.



Author's Response:

In the extreme i would say.

Not many marriage would survive something big like this..

And they married not more than 24 hours...

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 6 home is where the heart is

What I sincerely love about this fiction is that it is NOT!  This happened  throughout Europe and even the Pacific Theater.  These two value one another!  That must overcome all.  But even more interesting is that if you read JUST this chapter, start on THIS chapter unknowingly, it could be about the war today!  Things don't change that much do they?!  We need to learn to live together in commonality.  Wonderful work!  The I juries, the emotions, the effects on the partner, they are all spot on!   Kudos!



Author's Response:

Wow that is the biggest compliment given to me for a chapter.

Thank you!

 

I thank you for reading and the very nice review

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 home is where the heart is

AAAhhhh... so sad!!

 

Looking forward to more :D



Author's Response:

let's hope things will look better soon.

 

 

 

every monday and friday there will be an update.

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 3a Bella's loss

Ah, this is so good!!

Poor Bella, what a nightmare!

 

Glad she had Edward!



Author's Response:

poor Edward and poor Bella...

 

thanks for reading and reviewing

 

 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 6 home is where the heart is

Oh my, what a plot twist the explosion was to this story. They had barely gotten married. I loved how strong and loving Bella was during this ordeal. I know they still have such a long way to go. Love is what will get them through it.

Author's Response:

poor Edward...

poor Bella...

how strong is their love?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 home is where the heart is

:)



Author's Response:

;-)

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 3a Bella's loss

That war was so horrible. Hitler and his cleansing earned him a place in Hell.



Author's Response:

Front seat... 

Reviewer: vaganski vrh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 The Wedding

This is like a black-white old movie



Author's Response:

Oh wow thank you...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 the camp

many sad stories in Europe after the Nazi invaded.



Author's Response:

Yes just thinking about what those people went through gives me a cold feeling..

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 The facts

someone in occupied territory wrote that.



Author's Response:

Yes you are right :-)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

good start.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5 The Wedding

Lovely, Lovely chapter and so beautifully written, too.

Author's Response:

Wow thank you 😀

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 5 The Wedding

:):)



Author's Response:

you liked it?

:-)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 His present for Bella

Wonderful stoy sso far!  So timely with the 70th anniversary coming up.  Looking forward to future chapters.  Yes, I would marry this Edward in a heartbeat!



Author's Response:

Thank you glad you like it.

It is indeed 70 years since the end of ww2.

I wrote it as a reminder to those who lost their lives so we can be free.

 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 His present for Bella

Wonderful chapter. I'm so happy for them to find each other, love each other and marry.

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you lik it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 4 His present for Bella

:)



Author's Response:

:-)

 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 3a Bella's loss

It's a sad and panful story yet it's so very beautiful and loving between Bella and Edward. I am really enjoying it.

Author's Response:

thank you.

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 3 the camp

:)



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 2 The facts

Love it 



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 The facts

:)



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

:)



Author's Response:

:-)

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