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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 26

really cool perspective with having it be jasper pov ;) i'm not an alice fan and i thought the killer was al because of his mysterious bathroom breaks ;) this was a great story thanks for sharing ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks. I like to change things a bit. I made it my purpose, to make every character at least one time the bad guy (or viceversa).

I'm so glad you got it (nobody suspects those bathroom breaks), you were the only one ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thank you, too, May, for another enjoyable story! I liked that Alistair popped back into Jasper's life for a bit, just long enough to give him some really good advice. Better yet, Jasper took the advice and moved on!



Author's Response:

Thanks to you for reading and reviewing. It always lifts me up to read what you think.

May

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 25

Would that new story be The Lighthouse, or One Day At Volturis? I have those two favorited and am reading Milford Creek, also! I had a chuckle at Maria trying her phony drama on Jasper. She ended up right where she belonged, in a mental facility! Now maybe the poor guy can get on with his life!



Author's Response:

Hi! It's the lighthouse.

I alway like to give the bad guys what they deserve.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 24

A really clever plan, which seems to have worked just as it was supposed to!



Author's Response:

Thanks, nobody suspects the whiny old man.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 23

Alistair sure has put Jasper in a difficult position! I think if it was me, I might be tempted to help him get away with it!



Author's Response:

You may be surprised with Jasper's choice ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh dear, it's never a good thing to lose power like that! Something bad could happen in the dark, perhaps another murder! It is a bit odd, though, that the blackout waited until the storm was past.



Author's Response:

Yeah, a bit odd, but necessary ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 21

I feel better now that even the professionals can't decide who the killer is! Maybe I'm not quite as stupid as I thought I was, a comforting notion!



Author's Response:

You're very intelligent. This story was written to be confusing, otherwise the mystery would be solved in the firsts chapters and it would be boring :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 20

Guess I'm too stupid to figure out who the killer is!



Author's Response:

Oh, no! I made it purposely very confusing. I even rewrote many parts to make it difficult to guess who's the killer.

Please, be patient because the killer will be revealed soon :)

Thanks.



Author's Response:

Oh, no! I made it purposely very confusing. I even rewrote many parts to make it difficult to guess who's the killer.

Please, be patient because the killer will be revealed soon :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

Okay, we are running out of possible murder suspects! If Riley is dead then who hid the bloodstained backpack and the boat?



Author's Response:

No, they have to rethink the list of suspects. I promise they'll find out.



Author's Response:

No, they have to rethink the list of suspects. I promise they'll find out.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 18

Let's hope Alice doesn't blurt out information in front of the wrong person!



Author's Response:

No, she won't. She's trying to change her ways.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

This just keeps twisting and turning and going in all directions!



Author's Response:

But it will be explained. It's just that everybody had their own agenda ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Jasper better get over this unreasoning dislike of Bella and Edward, they never did anything to him! All the supposed feelings about Bella were only in his imagination! If the rising young star in the crime world isn't Riley, then who?



Author's Response:

He will, it's just he's hurting.

Riley wasn't discarded, they just busy with the notes and Bella and Edward's story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Way to blurt it out, Captain Obvious! Those notes are a real puzzle, most being so far from true, and Rosalie's being accurate!



Author's Response:

Hmm, he didn't want to see the obvious.

You're right about the notes.

 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

What is Riley afraid of from the FBI? Maybe he's mixed up in this somehow!



Author's Response:

You're right ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 13

We who, and what do they think they know about Jasper and his uncle? Come to think of it, what is it Alice knows?



Author's Response:

That's another tiny mystery. The extirtion attemp.

Alice just heard something and in her jealousy she's making it more.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

It doesn't seem like anyone is too sad about the two murder victims, they are drinking and laughing as usual!



Author's Response:

Well, they weren't nice; and that kind of vacation costs a pretty penny. They just had to deal :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Most likely was whoever was dealing drugs, killed them both.



Author's Response:

It's a bit more complicated than that ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 10

It sure solves a lot of problems for Bella and Edward, both, but I don't see either of them hiring hit men to murder their spouses!



Author's Response:

You're right ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

Them not going on the boat with everyone else just makes it a more pleasant trip anyway!



Author's Response:

But it still turned out to be an interesting boat trip :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

Face it, Tanya and Michael both are just worthless!



Author's Response:

I hope you like what I had for them ;)



Author's Response:

I hope you like what I had for them ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

The unseen talkers , wonder who it might have been? I'm curious too about what Jasper found out about Tanya.



Author's Response:

You'll like it :) Tanya is an awful woman.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope you're liking my story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 6

So there's some connection between Michael and Tanya, and it appears to be drugs and maybe sex! This ought to be fun watching these two make fools of their spouses!



Author's Response:

I hope you like what they will find. It's a mess, but then where's the mistery if they were nice people?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

Victoria at least loves her husband, so she ignores Michael, but Tanya glommed onto him like a black widow spider! This is getting to be quite a mixed group of people!



Author's Response:

I like to change the character's personality. My Volturi's aren't always bad as my James and Victorias ;) This time it was Tanya and Michael's turn.

The mixed group of people came to me as memories of past trips. You always find weird people.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward and Bella both seem married to inappropriate people, I wonder if there is some connection between them? She acted like she wanted to avoid him, if possible.



Author's Response:

Hmm, you'll like the road the story takes ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

I liked that you had Carlisle smoking pot, that's pretty funny when you think about how straight-arrow he is usually portrayed! I knew Bella would have an interesting history!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's always so uptight...

In this story I can guarantee nothing is like it seems ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's always so uptight...

In this story I can guarantee nothing is like it seems ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

The summary for this story mentions murder and I really hope the victim can be Michael Newton! At least it would free poor little Bella from an absolutely awful husband!



Author's Response:

Well, just wait ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella Newton? What's wrong with this picture? Sounds like Jasper may not be having quite the restful vacation he thought it would be.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Just remember, I'm all for HEA and to give the bad guys their punishment ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

Tanya and Mike sure cause a lot trouble.



Author's Response:

Sure, but they got what they deserved ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 26

Edward and Bella got there happily ever after. Jasper need time to work through his life, but I'm sure some day he will figure it out.

P.S. Can't wait for the new story.



Author's Response:

Thanks hun. And I also want to say thank you for always being there :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 26

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading your new one



Author's Response:

Hi!

Thanks. I just posted the first chapter, I hope you like it.

Thanks for being with me all along :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 25

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

The bad guy sure is going to fool everyone but the only one who will know the truth is jasper.



Author's Response:

Yeah, and he feels bad aobut it :)

I'll write you later, I didn't have the chance to answer your mail :( I was a bit.... under the weather ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

Poor man lose everything that meant world to him. Guess all come down to what happen to you in life and who you will become.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he so bad after all :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

I think the killer is close by.



Author's Response:

He is. You'll see ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

Tanya and Mike were both evil to the core.



Author's Response:

Yeah, nobody will miss them.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

Very few clue to go on and very few answer to the three murdered.



Author's Response:

Hi!

It all come clear soon :)

Thanks, because I know you're really busy.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 20

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

Say the killer closed by. That Riley was killed by the killer.



Author's Response:

Hi! You're right, and they don't seem to get closer to who's the killer.

Thanks :) 

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2015 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

Look like there putting all the pieces together.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think it's Riley Biers that killed Tanya and Mike.



Author's Response:

Hmm, we'lll see ;)

Thanks

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)



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Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

That explained a lot about bella and edward. Now all we have to do is wait found out about the handwriting.



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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

ahh now they are going to own up to this. Makes them suspects for sure.



Author's Response:

Next chapter they will tell their story. You could be surprised ;)

I'm glad to see your reviews ;)

Thanks

May

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

ut oh.. Riley are you nervous?



Author's Response:

Yeah, Riley is a weird guy We'll see what's his deal

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

HUh?? around the bend and then another.



Author's Response:

The notes are another complication :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Well who would kill them?  Maybe the person they paid to kill them. Or perhaps someone they were screwing around with as they both did that.



Author's Response:

That's the million-dollar question ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

They are upset because they were spurned. Well I think behind closed doors Bella and Ed have some type of thing going on. Maybe I am wrong.



Author's Response:

You're way more observant that Jasper ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

May I am trying to understand this. Plenty of people here to not like. Some we don't understand. I am wondering the direction of this.



Author's Response:

I'm setting the precedent for a couple of crimes, well, by now you know some people died and we have a big drug dealer in the island. Jasper will be in the middle of the police investigation, and probably will help to solve this crimes and maybe he will find a nice girl ;)

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

what a bunch of screwing around people. Just get a divorce and move on.



Author's Response:

This time, there are reasons for why they can't get a divorce. Trust me.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well, it will take some time. Always gossip is cheap so I form opinions on actions I see.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Michael, screwing the maid.



Author's Response:

He isn't a nice guy

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am not worried about Edward. Bella and Jasper would be just fine. Just drop Mike in the ocean.



Author's Response:

Hmm. I can tell you that Jasper will have a HEA :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

interesting.



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well Duh Jasper!1



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, he really didn't want to see it :)

Thanks

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

Looks like Jasper finally notice that bella and edward are together in these chapter. But I guess the real question that going on in jasper head is how long have bella and edward been together? Look like Jasper sound hurt by the news.



Author's Response:

Hi!

You know me, Edward must have to be with Bella :)

They are going toexplain their relationship in the nxt chapter, but I don't think Jasper will be happy.

Thanks

PS I'm going to write you later :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

Thing have getting more interested by the minute.



Author's Response:

And I hope they're going to get better :)

Thanks

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

:):)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

There is more going on then what the police knew everyone else. Something tell me that Alice found out about some important information.

Thank You for the emails.



Author's Response:

Hi! There's a lot more going on, we're just looking at the tip of the iceberg ;)

Thanks to you. I'll write you assoon as I get home :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) loving this



Author's Response:

Thanks!

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

Think somebody hate both Mike and Tanya really bad to kill them.

Spend some time with my nephews.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, they weren't nice to anybody.

May

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

I think Bella knew about the DEA looking in to Mike

 



Author's Response:

Hi!

Sorry for taking so long to answer. 

Bella is an enigma, and with the next chapter you will think she knows more than she admit.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

That jacob what an asshole why did that two people make them look at the dead bodies. Could be anyone maybe somebody from both Tanya and Mike past let face it both of them aren't that GOOD of a person anyway.

I will soon you an email soon.



Author's Response:

Hi! 

I was so sure I already had answered you :( 

I'll post the new chapter tonight, hope you'll like it.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

Jacob sure is an asshole,but at least bella and edward are free from their worthless marriages. Now the real question is who killed Mike Newton and Tanya Denali? Could be anyone.

1 Do you think Leah was very happy,when she left Sam pack?

2 Think jacob wish he left bella alone?

3 If Jacob had never found out about the baby,did you think the pack would have bella and the Cullen's family alone?

 

 

 



Author's Response:

You know I wouldn't write a nice Jacob ;)

1 Well, at least she didn't have to hear Sam's thoughts about Emily. I think her character was always misuderstood. The author had something against strong women.

2 No. He's so self centered that he probably thinks Bella would had crumbled without him.

3 No, but then maybe the Cullens had left.

Thanks and I'm writing you a mial. You kept me thinking the whole day :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

I don't think jasper and Alice were in love with bella and edward,think it had more to do with lust then love.

1 Which couple in the twilight saga,did you think Don't belong together?

2 Did you think jacob and Leah would have never work as a couple?



Author's Response:

Hi!

You're right, they're just infatuated. You know I'll never pair Bella with anyone but Edward ;)

1 Hmm, that's a difficult one. Sometimes I think Rosalie made Emmett felt bad, but to think they didn't belong together... No, i think the pairing was fine, except Renesmee /Jacob. But you know my issues with imprinting. What couples you think don't belong together?

2 No, Leah probably would put him in his place. At the first sign of a tantrum Leah probably would kick his ass ;)

I'm writing you a mail :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

The more people hear about Mike and Tanya the worst it get.

My favorite edward story are? My personal possession by my baby blues it on twcs.

1 Did you think edward vampire side should have claimed bella?

2 Have you read any stories were edward bullied bella and what are your feeling on that subject?

I know your busy some days when really to email me that fine.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wonder what jasper find out about Tanya,it most be bad.Plus there were this two people who were talking about something.

1 If Tanya had shown up would bella have changed her behavior through edward?

2 Even if jacob hadn't imprint on renesmee,did you think jacob would still kill her?

3 Who did you think Leah hate most the Cullen's or bella?



Author's Response:

The plot thickens!

1 Oh yeah. Jealousy is a powerful emotion. Maybe then she would had some idea of what Edward felt with jacob.

2 No, he was kind of a wuss. He would had thrown a tantrum.

3 Bella. Imagine all day hearing Jacob's lustful  and elusional thoughts... I feel bad for Leah.

Oh, I already asked you on my other answer. i have to put some order in my life ;)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

It's hard to pick who to hate more between Mike and Tanya,jasper should be happy to get away from home to rethink everything,and Alice crush will be just that a crush.

What did I like?In twilight I love how bella life wasn't going to be same ever again,like when bella and edward both are in their meadow,liked when edward invited bella to come and meet his family,and I really love prom at the end of the book.New moon like when bella and edward got back together in Italy.Eclipse love how we got to knew Rosalie and Jasper back stories,the engagement,the newborn fight,meeting Seth,and that jacob lose.Breaking dawn love the wedding,the honeymoon,that bella and edward were going to be parent's,meeting new vampires,and that bella and edward get their happily ever after.

If bella had a backbone?I guess we would have meet a different bella.

I never would have invited jacob to the wedding and I would have given bella and edward a son and daughter.

1 What would you have changed in New Moon?

2 Did you think the pack was getting sick and tried of jacob always thinking about bella?

3 Who would you not invited to edward and bella wedding?

If you have time could you email me I have something I need to tell you.



Author's Response:

Oh God I thought I answered you!

I'm so glad this keeps the record of my asnwers :(

1 Edward leaving. Or maybe he leaves, but he comes back begging for forgiveness, because as much as I like him, he was awful with Bella when he left. No closeness with Jacob too.

2 Yeah. and maybe that added to their hate toward the Cullens.

3 A part of me thinks Mike, Jessica and Jacob; but on the other hand, it was good to make them watch how they got married.

I promise to write you tomorrow and talk a bit (I also have something to talk about :) I have an early meeting, so  I promise towrite after that.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

Tanya look more like a gold digger,Mike only looked guilty because someone saw his hands all over another woman body.The other girls look like they want some action,bella is more hurt by Mike action then she let on,Edward and Bella looked comfortable with each other.

1 How do you think bella and edward relationship would have want,if bella cut ties with jacob sooner?

2 Which books in the twilight saga would not change?

3 Was there anything else you would have changed about breaking dawn,other than Jacob imprinting on bella and edward daughter?

1 I think jacob was more into bella;but I think bella only saw friendship with jacob then a boyfriend.

2 In eclipse book I wouldn't have let bella asked jacob to kiss on top of the mountain that night of the newborn fight.

3 I think I would made some small changes in twilight and new moon,then some big changes to eclipse and breaking dawn.

I was wondering if you could email me I have something to ask you.



Author's Response:

Hi! Could you believe that I was sure that I already answered you? Sorry for that.

Tanya iand Michael are awful. About Edward and Bella you'll see ;)

1 That would have been awesome. Their problems would be just the Volturi or Victoria.

2 Just Twilight. I would had made a few things different on New Moon and Eclipse.

3 A few things, maybe have the Cullens moving to a new town, a different approach to the confrontation with the Volturi. And you?

May

 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

Michael and Tanya seem made for each other but the jury's still regarding whose worse.

Interesting chapter with many new hotel guests. So many new players.

See you next post.

Author's Response:

Yeah, we could say that all our characters are here now.  Though  you'll have various chances to decide if M or T is worst. :)

Thanks. I appreciate your comment.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

Both of them think there better then everyone else,but their married hall's  look unhappy.

I think edward very brave, strong and good to a fault.

Do I think edward should have stayed?Maybe it a little hard to decide.

1Why do you think jacob and bella could never work as a couple?

2 What would you have changed about the tent scene and the newborn fight the next morning?

3 When did you knew that jacob wasn't going to win bella heart?

4 Would have made it hard for bella to forgive jacob?

5 Did you find imprinting creepy?

 



Author's Response:

Hi!

1 Because there wasn't that little spark that made it work for her and Edward, they lack of passion. They were just friends. What do you think?

2 If I wrote the book, ther wouldn't be a tent scene. No. The fight with the newborns was fine, all of them needed to work together in something, just to make the wolves realize how dumb they were :) And you?

3 From page one? ;) I knew he didn't stand a chance because Bella never stopped thinking bout Edward. The way she dropped everything to save Edward, proved it.

4 Yeah, I still think Bella needed a couple of slaps. Maybe she would had forgave him, but stayed far away from him.

5 Yeah. Worst with the ones with a huge age difference.

If you had the chance, which book would you rwrite? Me, Breaking dawn, without a doubt.

May

PS Did you received my mail?

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

It's such a mystery about how this story is evolving. I'm enjoying it. I look forward to the next posting.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I really appreciate your comment. I'm working on the next chapter, I hope to post it tomorrow.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 3

Jasper sure doesn't like Mike,but I think there more then one reason bella is staying married to Mike Newton.

Yes I like Robert Pattinson he did a real good job.

1 Which book would you have rewritten?

2 Did you get mad when bella keep telling jacob sorry over and over again?

3 How do you think Renee knew bella and edward would get married soon?

4 Do you think bella and edward should have moved before there wedding day?

5 Why do you think bella let herself get treated like a doormat?

6 Would you have liked to meet Seth and Leah sooner then later?

7 Think was going through Jacob and Charlie mind when bella choice edward?

8 Where there other things beside the tent scene in the eclipse book you hated?

9 Did you think someone should have telled bella no matter what bella was going to hurt jacob one way or another?

10 Think the pack knew that things were going to end badly for jacob?



Author's Response:

Yeah, we only started to know about Bella and Mike. Next we will meet Edward. He will be nice, I promise.

1 Breaking dawn, and you?

2 Yeah, and don't let me get started with the night she spent crying after she told him she chose Edward in eclipse. Poor Edward.

3 I'm sure she was too perceptive, she noticed the obvious bond between them .I think she may had a poer like Marcus.

4 Hmm, maybe. I think they really should had move when they came back from the honeymoon.

5 I could think of millions of reasons, but I think the biggest one was the way her parents treated her. Why do you think she acted like that?

6 Sooner. Maybe they would have been friends.

7 Oh crap! He, he. I think in their minds they threw a tantrum of the size of Texas. What do you think?

8 The night she cried after she told Jacob she chose Edward. What did she expect Edward to think after all that crying? What did you hate?

9 Yeah. Someone would had made her see, how she affected Jacob and Edward.

10 Yeah, but they were all inmature and thought they knew better.

What scenes did you loved in the books but they weren't on the films? Mine was when they told Charlie they were engaged.

Thanks :)

May

 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

I have a feeling that Bella doesn't like being married to Mike.I hope we meet edward soon,and I hope bella kick Mike in the balls and calls him a worthless piece of shit he is.

1 Which one is my favorite book from the series?I like twilight the best.

2 Which character did I dislike the most?It would have to be Jacob I never like him from start to finish.Which character did I like the most?Edward you just find something in him just love about him.

3 From which character would I have love to read more about?Carmen would be my pick we knew so little about her.

4 What did I think?I think the quileute tribe thought they are way better then the vampire in the world.Hate to tell them this you don't knew everything.

5 What would I have made different?Would have never let bella tell the Cullen's family gifted to the enemy.second I would have made bella look more at her friendship with jacob,third I would never ever let jacob imprint on bella and edward daughter ever.

6 What did I think?I felt bad for edward I feel he was made to look like bella don't want him at all,I agree with you that if Tanya had show up maybe bella would have fight harder for her man and not her best friend.

1 Where do you think the problems first begin in bella and edward relationship?

2 Did you the imprinting on renesmee was a cop out?

3 What are your feeling on Jared,Paul,Embry,Quil,Brady,Collin?

4 If you could yell at Sue Clearwater,What would you say to her face?

5 Would you have send bella and edward away somewhere where they could work out there relationship problems?

while have fun with your family.



Author's Response:

Hi! Finally I have the chance to answer! :)

Hmm, You're going to hate Mike more with the next chapter. Just remember, I always go for the HEA for our favorite couple :)

1 When both assumed what the other wanted. Edward really messed by not talking to Bella, confiding about his doubts and his fears. Yeah, he messed first. But the mistake was from both.

2 Yeah, I felt that the author loved Jacob too much to leave him alone, no matter how absurd the whole imprinting with Renesmee idea was (Suposedly it was to garantee the wolves got descendence from their kind, and Renesmee was another very different especies.)

3 I liked the two who were friendly with Bella at the beginning, Embry? Quil? Paul was the example of what could go wrong with the shapeshifters. I disliked him, but at least he was comletely honest on his reasons to dislike Bella.

4 Go and take care of your daughter! You insensitive mother. (He, she and Charlie would never compete for paren of the year)

5 Yeah, but again, then we wouldn't have a book saga ;) 

This weekend I was discussing something with my cousins (his girlfriend loooves Robert Pattinson and he thinks Rob isn't that handsome).  Rob is the perfect Edward for you or would had chosen another actor? (Me, I liked him as Edward. I think he portrayed Edward perfectly, but that's me and he's not too young to make me feel bad for liking him *insert blush*)

May

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Date: 18 Mar 2015 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Jasper doesn't knew what he in for.

1 What do I think?Thought bella was really stupid for doing that,she just tell the enemy there gift's,bella should have known better than that.

2 Which one would I've picked?I had three choices Esme because I think bella need to see from edward mom of how much she hurt edward with her choices.Rosalie because she wouldn't held back her angry one bit give bella the cold hard reality,Jasper he could sure feel edward pain and give bella a bit of it to show how much she hurt edward.

3 What do I think?I think both Charlie and Sue need to think more about there children then worry about other people.Sue you have two kids who lost their father and your daughter got her heartbreaking by the man she love,you don't even care she has to be a bridesmaid to the two people who caused her pain.Charlie you need to learn how to love your child not tell her how to live her life or tell her who to spend her life with,she doesn't like forks,Washington get it thought your head.

Have I read cullenary coupling?Yeah I read it.IT was different from the vampire love stories.

1 What would you really have done to change both edward and bella attitudes?

2 Did you hate how Alice used bella to got what she wants?

3 What are your thoughts on jasper?

4 In New Moon when jacob at end betrayed bella to Charlie would you let bella say good bye to jacob after that?

5 Would you have change bella birthday party?

I'm excited to heard more about this story.



Author's Response:

Hi! Let me tell you that we didn't have the chance to go to the movies :(

1 Honestly, a few slaps ;) No,I would had forced then to talk. The whole problem was lack of communication. Then I insist if Tanya would had come to visit one book before...

2 Yeah, I'm not an Alice fan. I don't hate her like i hate Jacob, but I don't like her whole 'I'm going to be your best friend' attitude.

3 I really like Jasper. He made so much to contain his thirst... and Alice goes and throw a party ignoring how difficult it would be for him (see I don't like Alice)

4 Of course! He threw a tantrum and betrayed Bella. In that moment she should had know he wasn't a real friend.

5 Yeah, I would had made Alice feel mor guilty. But then, maybe the story would had lasted just two books :)

Let me tell you a secret about this story... t's about Edward and Bella, well, and about a lot of other people. But if I mentioned it i the summary it will lose something. This time we're going tohate Michael and Tanya. I'm not sure if Jacob is going to be nice or not, he's really a secondary character.

1 Which one is your favorite book from the series?

2 Which one character is the one you dislike the most? And which one you like the most?

3 From which character would you like to read more?

Have a nice weekend!

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