Date: 09 Feb 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 30
Hi!! is my first time reading your story and i have to say, i loved this!!! i´m so anxious to know where are going, and see who is try to kill Bella, if the lost baby have something to do with that ? and Bella and Alice are twins ?? hope you can update soon !!
sorry my english is not too good hope you can understand me
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
Glad that Edward is back.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 29
I am loving this story! I am so proud of the both of them! I love Emmett even though he's young at the moment.
I know first pregnancies often end in miscarriage so here's to hoping for a safe and healthy second pregnancy!
Date: 29 Jan 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Edward and Bella. They are not to blame. Carlisle needs to find his son and be a dad, not king. Esme needs to help Bella.
Date: 27 Jan 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 29
Sad chapter! Love it though very interested in what purpose the miscarriage will serve. Hope this will make the two of them stronger!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
Could the cider that Bella didn't like (made by someone else) have caused the miscarriage?
Date: 27 Jan 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 29
OMG so sad for both of them but he should of went to her and told her he was leaving for a bit.
Date: 27 Jan 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 29
So his answer to his wife losing their baby is to leave without properly saying goodbye, without any explanation whatsoever? How is this supposed to make us feel sympathetic to Edward?! And he sends no messages telling her that he loves her and wants her still?!!! unbelievable..
Date: 27 Jan 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 29
Any chance someone is seasoning their meals with herbs to bring on a miscarriage?
Date: 27 Jan 2016 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Bella and Edward. I hate that Edward left Bella like he did. Did he even say goodbye to her?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2016 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wouldn't it be cool if Alice turned out to be Bella's twin!?!?
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh, what a great chapter... more soon please :)
Date: 13 Jan 2016 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow Bella is getting a lesson in life lol. I am so happy she is going to have a baby???
Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
I wonder if James and them will cause problems? Love the chapter. Hope nothing will go wrong with the pregnancy.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 28
I can't believe she sneaked away like that...no more! Glad she is expecting.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
I think Bella's worrying about her secret is unless. I am happy for them.
Date: 06 Jan 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward is so sweet. They will have a great life together.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
The forcd viewing of the consummation was standard practice for royalty at that time, although it was a little perverse.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Her mother is so unfeeling.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thank u thank u! For posting early I was so happy last note when I saw this chapter! Happy New Year!
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved this chapter.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
He is a good man he made her feel good like he should
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
Glad they got through the consummation and are on their honeymoon.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
OK. In a country where women ride astride on horseback how valid a measure of 'virtue' is blood at first intercourse? The hymen could have been broken from riding
Date: 23 Dec 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
She is very smart I hope she is not freaked out by what the bitches where saying and cant wait for her egg donner to leave what a nasty women
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
It is horrible that the consummation is public. Sad that she had to hear the bitches talking about her and Edward like that...at her wedding.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
They sure didn't view sex as pleasurable, huh? At least, some of them didn't...
Date: 22 Dec 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG!! Thank u thank you for posting early!! Merry Xmas! Can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
:) Happy holidays to you too
Date: 22 Dec 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad they are finally married. Hoping the Queen Mother will go home soon. Who were the 2 on the balcony?
Date: 22 Dec 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yay their marrried! Love the chapter was happy to see the notification in my inbox! :D Have a happy holidays!
Date: 21 Dec 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Renee is such a shrew.
Date: 17 Dec 2015 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
It seems to me that Queen Cynthia doesn't want the alliance to go through. Maybe even Genoa no longer wants it.
Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
Prince Edward is a keeper and he mom is a dud.
Date: 17 Dec 2015 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
I do not like the evil queen can say mother because she is not.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2015 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome! Love it! Love Edward's passion for Bella!
HATE Queen Cynthia! Can't wait for that bitch to be gone!
Date: 16 Dec 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love the chapter! Excited for the next.
Date: 16 Dec 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow, Bella's mom is a piece of work. I can't believe she said that about her own daughter. Can't wait for the wedding.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hooefully writing will give your brain a repreive from everything. Thoughts going iut to you.
What a raving bitch she is. No wonder Alice was so quick to jump ship. Jeebus.... But glad our girl has the supoort system to get thru this month. Although I'm sure there will he more frustration before she goes back home.
Date: 02 Dec 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
The queen is crazy. What mother wants to see her child have sex. That is so creepy.
Date: 02 Dec 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 24
That Queen is a bitch she is not a mother she was just a egg donner
Date: 02 Dec 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
Ergh, that 'mother'!
I am so sorry to hear of your mother's health problems. Of course I understand you have a lot on your mind~prayers for your Mom, yourself, and your family.
Date: 02 Dec 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
Soo sorry about your mom thank you for your explanation! You didn't have to do it and that was nice of u to explain! Great chapter great story! Look forward to the next one! :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Queen Cynthia is a real barrel of fun
Date: 01 Dec 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, her mother is a piece of work.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2015 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
Queen Cynthia really is a monster! I can't believe she is forcing them to have sex in full view of others! Way to f*ck up a wedding night!
Date: 01 Dec 2015 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Not really liking queen Cynthia but love the chapter really happy about the relationship of Edward and Bella. Excited for the next cchapter and I wish you and your parents well!
Date: 01 Dec 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Boy, Bella's mom, well Alice's mom is a pain in the butt. Love Edward's idea of the shirt. I can not believe Bella's mother would want that for her child.
Date: 26 Nov 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
How often are you going to update? I feel like I am always checking and this story only updates one every two weeks I think. I love this story please post the next chapter.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
Is she going to be able to fool the mother it will be so sad that she can.
Edward is so sweet and worried about her all the time now.
Date: 18 Nov 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am glad that Bella is so happy in her new home. She now has a real family.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am glad thatCarlisle and Esme were not upset that Edward had spent the night in Bella's chambers. Wow, what is her mother doinghere. Will she know the difference between Alice and Bella?
Date: 17 Nov 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oops , not expecting her , we're they?
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wonder what's up?
Date: 17 Nov 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love the chapter I wonder if the Queen (Alice's mom) can tell that something is not right with Bella in the next chapter.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
I knew he loved her more than he cared what was in her blood so sweet that is after he had a fit.
Date: 11 Nov 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward can now be happy because he got his love marriage. No one needs to know.
Date: 11 Nov 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so glad E responded as he did. B needs to tell him that she was Vic's maid. I sense trouble to come from her & James
Date: 11 Nov 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love the chapter and I am happy that it worked out for the both of them! Love to read both of their views on the event.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
I AM SOOOOO RELIEVED!
Date: 10 Nov 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
So happy u posted the next chapter! Loves it can't wait for the wedding!
Date: 10 Nov 2015 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad that Edward truly thought things through. Realizedthat Bella really didn't have a choice in the matter but told him the truth anyway. Glad that they can be together after all.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
He needs to be careful with his temper
Date: 09 Nov 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Um, NOOO, she can't tell him! He over reacts to everything! Shit is not looking good. I would understand if they knew each other, trusted each other with their lives and loved one another, with a THICK, SOLID FOUNDATION, but not like this! She needs to wait! I have a secret that I have only told one person and that is the love of my life! He didn't overreact, yell, scream or anything. Just asked questions, which I answered. We never brought it up again. He also told me something that he never told his best friend about which surprised me cuz they are worse then old ladies. I brought it up to his best friend one time and he was confused so I changed the subject. I asked him about it later and he told me I was the only one that knew. We have a solid foundation though and have been together for 6 wonderful (not all, all couples have their little issues) years that I would not change for the world. But again, Bella and Sdwaed need that foundation before she tells him.
Date: 09 Nov 2015 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG how is he going to react. He loves her
Date: 06 Nov 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no hope she knows what she's doing
Date: 05 Nov 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
I know it will work out, but she made a promise to her friend.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Uh oh! This does not sound promising! Can't wait for next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2015 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
NO!!!!! DON"T DO IT!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my goodness, is she really going to tell him? Why now does she feel she needs to tell him. I hope shit does not hit the fan. What about Alice and Jasper?
Date: 04 Nov 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
That is a bad idea. A very bad idea.
Date: 03 Nov 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ohhhhhh!!!!! I love the chapter!!! But very excited for the next chapter! What a cliff hanger! I wonder if she will be able to tell him or will they be interrupted? I wonder how Edward will react!
Date: 26 Oct 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella has learned to talk to Edward and Esme. Her life will be better because of it.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
The truth is coming out about the people who dont want Bella to be queen. Edward loves her already
Date: 23 Oct 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
I really like this one . Glad you got rid of Tanya!
Date: 23 Oct 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh I so hope you write Esme POV for her confrontation with the Countess Denali and Tanya. That would be so awesome.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
It's about time that Tanya and her parents are outed!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am so glad that they are so honest with each other. I was afraid that she would not tell Edward, afraid of making waves 8n the new land. Boy Tanya has some nerve. I hope Esme takescare of her and her family.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
About darn time. I am glad she was able to get rid of Tanya.
Date: 09 Oct 2015 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank goodness they got that figured out I am so glad she let it out and Tanya is going bye bye lol
Date: 09 Oct 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
They all better learn not to talk bad about her . She is trying so hard to fit in
Date: 08 Oct 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad Tanya is gone, but I think she is going to be trouble.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Happy that they both talked and that Tanya is gone! But is she gone for good?? Love the chapter as always and I am excited for the next!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am glad Tanya is gone, but VERY upset that Edward f*cked her in the past :( Why in the hell did he think it was OK for Tanya to be a ladie's maid? Is he stupid? Edward talking shit about Isabella behind her back is awful, too. Edward had better up his game. I don't like him at all now!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
I feel so very sad for her.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Finally they are really talking to each other. Plus Tanya is gone!!!!!!!! Edward did not say anything about the drawing that Angela deliveredto him. I wonder what he thinks about it. Can't wait to see what Bella's surprise is.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Isabellais being kind of cold to her prince but I really don't blame her. I would be to if he burned something that belonged to me and then sent away my only 2 friends. Who did Isabella over hear from Edward's study? Why can't Angela not stay with Bella and be her head maid?
Date: 25 Sep 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
I would have thrown Edward's present into the trash. She has infinite patience with this jerk.