Date: 24 Sep 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella needs to watch out for Tanya and Lauren. They are up to something.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love the chapter but I hope Edward and Bella will be able to talk and sort things out. Also hope Bella can know soon if she can trust her maids or if she has to replace them. Excited for the next chapter!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
I do not blame Bella for being upset with Edward. I hate that Seth and Garrett did not get to say good bye. Hopefully Esme will speak to her son when he returns. I think he is a coward for leaving Bella after their fight.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope her time alone is not interrupted. I can picture James stopping in or Tanya starting rumors. Won't Tanya be surprised to learn that Edward isn't free to marry her
Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Tanya needs to be kicked out.. Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass
Date: 14 Sep 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
jealousy got the better of Edward. He needs to learn to listen to his future wife. I hope Garrett will be safe. Hope Edward does not do anything stupid to Garrett.
Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
Edward such a silly man and he did not make things easier for Bella to love him
Date: 13 Sep 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Just when I think that this Edward is not too bad he does something nasty and abusive like this! Someone needs to teach him some manners!
Great job !
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm confused what chapter did she ask for the fife? What's Edwards problem.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
What an asshole! I hope she can forgive him for throwing Garrett's gift.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love the chapter I hope Edward will hear what Bella has to say. Excited for the next chapter!
Date: 10 Sep 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is a controlling, abusive dirtbag manchild. Anyone who pouts because they believe a gift should be appreciated according to its pricetag is a rotten shell themselves. I hope he gets poisoned.
Date: 10 Sep 2015 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hopefully Edward doesn't decided to do something stupid to Garrett
Date: 31 Aug 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can understand Edward's jealousy.
Date: 29 Aug 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
i hope bella and edward puts tanya in her place right away before she even tries anything.
i dont trust her not a one bit. i hope edward protects bella from the likes of her and any other threats.
Date: 29 Aug 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love her temper she put him in his place
Date: 29 Aug 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loving this Bella. She is not taking shit from no body, not even the Prince.
Date: 28 Aug 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love the chapter! Glad that Edward and Bella are getting closer!
Date: 24 Aug 2015 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella seems to be adjusting well.
Date: 21 Aug 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hope Angela stays with her. She is stettling in nicely
Date: 21 Aug 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love the moments between Bella and Edward! Excited for more as always.
Date: 20 Aug 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad she and the Prince seem to get along.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
So glad that she and the prince are getting along so well.
I do hope they don't make Tanya one of her ladies" maids, but if they do, I hope she tells the prince of her objections and suspicions ASAP. She doesn't need that snake close to her.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope Angela stays. She's needs someone she can trust.m
Date: 05 Aug 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
He is so sweet and she is so brave
Date: 05 Aug 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
Surprise Surprise. She is going to make a great queen to the people
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love the little EPOV extra. They really need some time to get to know each other. I wonder if Tanya had anything to do with the mix up of the dates?
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Seems like our Prince is feeling a little ripped off! Guess I'm not sure what they expected sending trainers so many weeks ahead?time to step up, I say. I also smell some Tanya in the whole date snafu. Happy that Edward is so dedicated to her, and not just pompous.
fabulous story!! Thank you for the juicy, long update, it was a real treat!
Date: 31 Jul 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
My first impression of Edward is that he's a whiny little brat. I hope to develop a better opinion later!
Date: 31 Jul 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love having Edward and Bella 's POVs. Who told them the wrong date of her arrival?
Date: 31 Jul 2015 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Did Tanya have anythingto do with everyone expecting them in 2 weeks? I was a little surprised that Garrett and Seth both left the Princess on the ship without one of them staying with her. Why is the King upset and the Prince too? Can't wait to go read the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yay, they finally meet!! Looking forward to see how the story plays out from here, it has to be Tanya working behind the scenes. If Bella hasn't got Alice to guide her can she keep Angela?!?
Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
Perhaps Tanya messed up the plans.
Date: 31 Jul 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm so glad she finally arrived, albeit early according to some ppl... Fukin Tanya!!! Off with her head!!! Lol
Im also glad Edward is excited. There's some fics where he has to warm up to b, so seeing that was cool. No ice breakers or proving she's weigh it is necessary.
Date: 31 Jul 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love the two recent chapters! Happy that Bella got to meet Edward. I wonder why everyone thought she was just starting to leave? Maybe it's Tanya...
Date: 27 Jul 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
That's weird. Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 25 Jul 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Someone tryed to kill her good thing Seth and Garrett are there to help her. Why is no one there is it a set up??
Date: 25 Jul 2015 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad she is finally going to meet Edward. But where is everybody?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Do King Carlisle and Edward think that Isabella is dead?
Date: 24 Jul 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
I been worried that Edward would be messing around with wenches while he waits on Isabella. I am sure the Princes and Kings had their go to gals that no one else could bed. Thus no diseases in their bodies.
Author's Response:
This Edward is not wenching around on her (love that by the way). He does have a past, but he has been a good boy as of late. As to why he isn't there, you shall find that out in the next chapter or two. Thanks for the faithful reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 24 Jul 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love the chapter! Wonder what Edward will think when he meets her! I wonder why the dock is empty...
Date: 15 Jul 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
So sad they are parting but time to be with there men cant wait
Date: 10 Jul 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am sad that Alice and Bella will not be seeing eachother again. But I am excited to see what is going to happen between Bella and Edward.
Date: 10 Jul 2015 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good bye to Alice and Jasper.
Date: 10 Jul 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
Excited for Alice, she's officially with Jasper!! Hopeful for a safe journey on the water for Bella… when might we get a POV from Edward on his side of things? I would love to read that as well. Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon please!
Date: 09 Jul 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
How sad, to think they'll never see each other again. :(
Date: 09 Jul 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
So exciting! Wow, that must be one heck of a guy to give up a crown for...who am I kidding, it's Jasper! Of course he's worth it!
Date: 09 Jul 2015 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the chapter kind of sad but sweet! I hope that Bella will have someone she can trust.
Date: 09 Jul 2015 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm so sad to see Alice go...
Date: 03 Jul 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm looking forward to the big journey, I wonder if we still get to meet Jasper?
Date: 27 Jun 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love the chapter! Very close in meeting Edward. I am excited for more.
Date: 27 Jun 2015 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
soon, now lets hope this goes well.
Date: 27 Jun 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Glad Edward and Bella liked their portraits. Glad Seth is thinking of her safety. Hope leaving a day early does not mess up Alice and Jasper's plans.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, to have to worry about people wanting to kill you...and deceiving everyone to your real identity at the same time. Sucks to be her.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Getting CLOSER to meeting Edward can't wait
Date: 17 Jun 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
That would be so hard meet a brother you never had and find out you are being threatened. Poor Alice not being able to claim her brother
Date: 14 Jun 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
d84;love your storyd84;d84;d84;
Date: 13 Jun 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is very interesting to me. I haven't read much of the way things were done back in those days~~nor thought of the day to day goings-on.
Date: 12 Jun 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think Bella will make a good Queen.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2015 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, I love the portrait idea!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder what Edward will think of Bella! Love the chapter as always and cannot wait to meet Edward
Date: 05 Jun 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Emmett will not get that she is not his sister??
Date: 31 May 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is great fun!
Thank you for sharing your work with us... And I look forward to the next chapter. T
Date: 29 May 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loving this story. I am glad that Alice handled being around her brother as well has she did. I was worried about how she would handle not being about to interact with him
Date: 28 May 2015 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love the chapter! I really wonder who the treats are from very excited for more chapters to come :D
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update quickly!!! I love this story.
Date: 23 May 2015 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter.. hurry hurry Thank you
Date: 23 May 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
So Garrett is Edward's brother? ? What did he mean the Edward did not know the danger he had put Bella in?
Date: 22 May 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love the chapter! I wonder what the next chapter will bring!
Date: 03 May 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
She has a lot to learn and not a lot of time to learn it in.
Date: 03 May 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Tanya must have had a relationship of sorts with Edward she was too informal. ugh
Date: 02 May 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love it I hope that Bella will be welcomed and I wonder what is up with Lady Tanya.
Date: 02 May 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Glad Bella will have at a friend or two in Garrett and Seth. Bells is smart to write to the Queen ahead of time. She better keep a close eye on Tanya.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
I hope she can pull it off. :-) look forward to more updates.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like seeing how Bella is cowing into her role.
Date: 24 Apr 2015 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love the chapter very happy when I saw the update in my email! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Alice knows the type of person Tanya is Bella is smarter than Tanya thinks
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very interesting chapter. I agree, Bella will have to be careful around Tanya.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it update soon.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Tanya is trouble with a capital "T". I loved the way Bella handled the tutors, artisans and especially Lady Tanya.
I think she'll perfect for the Prince.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love the chapter Tanya is probably gonna come back for trouble. Cant wait for the next chapter.