[Report This]Date: 14 May 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
AWESOME extra i love epov ;) you mentioned that in the sequel it goes off canon does that mean there is no renesmee? ;)
Date: 23 Dec 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Now I can go back and finish Prelude. You were right, this fits perfectly between chapters 22 and 23. I really, really, really liked it too!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
Perfect trust, honesty, and love. Mix in a mind-blowing orgasm or two and what could be better?I'm almost afraid to ask!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward, you sly devil, you! He may be blindfolded but it doesn't seem to slowed him down much. Oh my!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
There is just something about these two young lovers, gently exploring , touching for the first time, finding joy in each other. It just kind of brings a lump to my throat, it's so lovely.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
great outtake
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
I might have read this chapter somewhere elsebut nevere reviewed it, I think. The dialogue between Edward and Bella starting with masturbation but going much over it is astounding, mature, frank and incredibly full of love. Congrats
Author's Response:
Thanks Camilla! I wrote that little outtake on vacation while I was listening to a lot of Regina Spektor, and I think she's somehow infused into the story line. At this point in the story I think E&B are at a new place of understanding, and it's fun and beautiful to write about.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
The image of them and the storm raging outside is just beautiful. You have a gift, thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
And thanks for writing!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
It was super good
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
that was all more than just beautiful. superb.
Author's Response:
wow, thanks.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! Are you going to be finishing up this night? This is good practice for the wedding night!
Author's Response:
Yes, I'll be finishing the night... and going right up until the night before the wedding in my other story, Prelude. This is an outtake from Prelude. Thanks for reading!