Date: 15 May 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
A big stumbling block for me is whem someone glances down at the floor. Umm, you're outside...there is no floor, it's called the ground.
Author's Response: I have no idea why, but I just about pissed myself laughing when I read this review. My biggest peeve is when they mix loose and lose. Drives me nuts!
Date: 14 May 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please remember the authors on this site are amateurs and write for pleasure. Many do not have betas or pre-readers to help correct mistakes.
You've made mistakes too!
Author's Response: This is information provided to writers if they choose to use it. I make mistakes too, that's why I wanted to do this. I even partitioned the administrators of the site to add this subject so everyone who wants to add such things can. Thanks for the review.