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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

WOW!!! AWESOME!!! AMAZING!!! story i LOVE the fact that renny changed her nickname and wasn't jakes imprint i always thought it was off just like it was said ;) PLEASE come back asap and finish this EPIC story for us ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I'm working on it. I decided to finish first other stories that I had pending before continuing with this one. I can guarantee next chapter coming soon (perhaps by Sunday) as I finished with one of my other stories. 

Thank you again for giving my stories a chance. I really appreciate it.

May

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

Interesting news from Volterra, but more trouble from the tribe!  Kind of a bad news, good news chapter I guess! Poor Carlisle, always the pacifist, hoping for a peaceful life!



Author's Response:

Yeah, but at least now they have a bit of information for their future plans. 

You have Carlisle pegged pretty well.

Thanks

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

please update soon !



Author's Response:

Hi!

I'll try, I just got my groove on this story back. I hope the next one will be posted before Tuesday.

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

Now things have gotten more interesting by the minute.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but they have to train before the action comes.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

:)



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 18

Jacob may just be getting what he deserves now, for messing up traditions and so forth! As for Renny, I can't wait to see what mischief she will cause, not that those girls don't deserve it!



Author's Response:

Jacob's punishment just began.

Renny's plan  will be fun.

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

If I we're this bullies I watch my back. And Jacob just doesn't understand how wrong he was for doing what he did.



Author's Response:

Hi!

That will be fun.

And about Jacob... he will understand ;)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Took time for nestor to trust other people.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's a bit wary but he'll do anything for his brother.

Thanks :)

Oh, I may write you later because I want your opinion on something :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

Now that all their secrets are revealed it's looking a bit better for cooperation between the covens. Too bad Aro won't let this go and learn to get along with the rest of the vampire world! Looks like it's going to be a fight to the death this next go around! The joker in the deck now will be the wolves, of all types! That bitter old man with the scars can't seem to grasp the concept that once the"good guy" vampires are all dead, Aro will wipe out all the tribes that shift!



Author's Response:

Yeah. They got a few new vampires on their side. I can't wait to writ Caius face when he finally realize there are still werewolves (at least one) running around.

Their problems with the scarred man will be dealt first, don't worry.

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 17

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: Arroyo4ver Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

this is starting to get real interesting can hardly wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

I'm working on the next chapter to post it ASAP :)

May

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love it Please update soon !



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter to post it ASAP :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

ARO power hungry and that is no lie.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that he is. And he's also full of pride and he feels like the Cullens embarrassed him. 

Thanks, as always you're there for me :)

May

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

Of course, Aro usually shows up to cause problems. Not very nice of him to kill Amun, supposedly his old friend! That alone should concern Carlise, another "old friend" of Aro Volturi! Looks like the Milford Creek coven and the Cullen family better join forces pretty soon! They may have to fight together to save themselves! And there's always the scarred old indian to reckon with!



Author's Response:

Hi!

Of course Aro wouldn't let them get away after what happened in Breaking Dawn. But he's starting with the ones who he deems weaker.

Next we will see what the Milford Creek coven thinks about the Cullens.

Thanks, your reviews always make my day :)

May



Author's Response:

Hi!

Of course Aro wouldn't let them get away after what happened in Breaking Dawn. But he's starting with the ones who he deems weaker.

Next we will see what the Milford Creek coven thinks about the Cullens.

Thanks, your reviews always make my day :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

Okay, why did Alice and Greta avoid touching until the very last minute, and then act like nothing happened? It must have caused a vision or something that Edward picked up. Now I'm gone to wonder what's going on until the next chapter!The meeting of these two family groups will set in motion a lot of things, I think!



Author's Response:

Hmm, I hope I'm not spoiling anything... Alice had the hunch to get closer but to not touch, the rest came from Greta, she will explain in the next chapter.

Alice has a lot to explain to her family :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

This is another good chapter. I think edward has a bad feeling about something.



Author's Response:

Hi! 

Edward is a bit overwhelmed, you'll see.

Thanks for your support :) It means a lot to me.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

It will took time for both group to trust each other.

Thank you again for the message.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 13

Look like Renny has found her true mate.

Sorry I don't review been busy spend time with my nephews.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Don't worry, I appeciate our conversation through mails, and I know you've been busy; but I'm glad you're having a god time with them :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Come on, neither your ideas nor your chapters are crazy! I reserve that labe for Jake and the old, scarred man. I think these two coven/families are going to get along just fine, once they get to trusting each other.



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Both familes will do fine, more with Renny and Adrian bonding ;) Jst wait 'til Jacob and the old scarred man find out.

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

so now Renny has a guy her mate perhaps. Good bye bye Black Bird.



Author's Response:

Hi! Yeah, she needed to meet someone better, right?

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

May

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

That went well, though I'm sure Edward isn't real thrilled his daughter has found her mate. He probably thinks it's too soon to lose his little girl. The two covens getting acquainted should be interesting all round!



Author's Response:

His little daughter finding her mate... I think it still doesn't sink. It will very soon ;)

Thanks 

May

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

It will surely be. Can't wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks. If work and traffic let me, it will posted tonight.

May



Author's Response:

Thanks. If work and traffic let me, it will posted tonight.

May

Reviewer: Kaycy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 12

Renny and Adrian appear to be mates! No wonder Alice was smiling. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's sneaky like that. 

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Looks like they won't have to hunt for that other coven after all! It also appears that Renny and Adrian are imprinting on each other. Like mother, like daughter!



Author's Response:

You're absolutely right ;)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm glad everybody talk about Jacob. Now the Cullen's get to meet the mysterious coven.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Now everybody wants to kick his ass.

Thanks, you know why   :) May

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

That Layla is pretty awful, so I won't be the least bit sorry when she gets her just desserts! The snickering in the woods must be the talented one from the cave coven, for lack of a better name. I'm looking forward to them meeting the Cullens!



Author's Response:

Well, there's always one of these girls in every school.

You'll like the next chapter ;)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I appreciate it. It makes my day :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for laying all this background out for us, it helps. I still can't think why Carlisle was supposed to leave his wedding ring at home that one day, but hopefully Alice will reveal all!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know i wrote it in a confusing way :(

The ring, well Alice hs a lot of plans in her mind and doesn't plan to share them. But we'll see.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great job imagining another coven of animal drinkers, plus a real honest-to -god werewolf! I can't blame them for being cautious about reavealing themselves, either.



Author's Response:

Thanks. It's a really big world for them to be the olny ones who drink from animals.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yes, definitely a different school from Forks High! I thought it was funny that the math teacher already has a crush on Tanya and the girl tried intimidating Rose! Fat lot of good that's going to do!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it; I always pictured Rose dealing with the bullies in her own way.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

What a mess, brought about by Jake's stupidity, as usual! I the old scarred man wants help with a vampire problem, he really ought to ask the Cullen family for assistance! Most likely, he is too prejudiced for that!



Author's Response:

Yep, his jealousy brought all these problems. We'll know more about the old scarred man, he's a lot like the Quileuttes.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

At last, an explanation for all the mood swings and weird feelings!



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;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sounds like everyone is either surprised, relieved, or both! Jake sure seems happy they are moving and leaving him behind! I'm glad Ness isn't very upset about it, so far.



Author's Response:

They stayed in Forks for Ness, but they got bored. A change will be good for everyone.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Poor stupid Mike, still can't seem to get the picture! I think he needs "moron", tattooed on his forehead! If this is how Bella and Ness are going to be treated by Charlie and the haters of the tribe, they may as well move away. Wonder if Chief Swan will miss his daughter and grandchild? What an ass!



Author's Response:

Charlie will have time to reflect on his attitude. Mike... well, he will never change. Poor guy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

Something stinks to high heaven, besides Rachel's attitude. We always knew Paul bitterly hates the Cullens, now it seems they are even brainwashing Charlie! Frankly, I'm glad they are going to move!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the tribe wasn't as friendly as they should; and don't let me start with Charlie.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting reason for Alistair to avoid the Volturi. Here we thought it was just cowardice, but this makes a lot of sense!



Author's Response:

I wanted him to have a chance to redemption, and it's a twist I hope you like :)

Thanks.

May

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonder how long a bunch of smart vampires will take to figure out something is wrong between Nessie and Jake? Then, I want to know what is really bothering Bella so much!



Author's Response:

Hmm, well, for the first chapters that vampire intelligence will be missed ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 7:04 AM Title: Prologue

What the hell kind of a game is Jake playing with this fake imprinting? What is the scarred old man planning that will, no doubt, mess with the Cullens? Bad vibes coming off this plot!



Author's Response:

Oh, this story wasn't made for team Jacob ;)

Soon you'll see what's the deal with the fake imprinting.

Thanks

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

:)



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

Sound like they have more school bullies then at forks. I'm happy that Tanya,Leah,and Seth are happy with the Cullen's family. It's too bad that the La Push tribe pushed them both away, I guess when you push people away you lose more then you knew.

 



Author's Response:

It's more like now the Cullens care and they are more social :)

Yeah, I'm sure Sue misses them and she will have to work a lot to earn their forgiveness.

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

Okay well if the New Coven can shake the dumb out of Jake we will all be surprised



Author's Response:

There's a line of people waiting for it :)

Thanks for reading and commenting, and for being patient.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

I guess no one in the packed knew what jacob was up to. I have to agree with Sam that it will be hard to go to Billy and Sue both because I think both of them could never see jacob betrayal anyway possible, both are so blind to what going on around them. Jacob I think need a good kick in the ass.



Author's Response:

He's going to have it. 

The tribe won't be happy with him. Do you like how I finally post the chapter? I really rewrote it several times.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

New coven sound interesting.



Author's Response:

Hi! Hope they look fine. They're part of the good ones.

May

 

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 9

I hope for more info, because at the beginning of the chapter there are werevolfes, but then the are vamps, so it is confusing.



Author's Response:

Hi! There will be more, this was the first glimpse about them. They have a real werewolf, not shapeshifter, with them. I'm also working on a picture of the coven. I hope this will help.

Thanks.

May

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well like I said neuter the dog and be done with him send him to camp to guard duty. LOL



Author's Response:

:) Probably that's what will happen

Thanks.

May

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

good talk to that idiot and perhaps you can straighten him out.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Jacob needs someone who put him in his place.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

you know neuter the dog and be done with him.



Author's Response:

:) :) :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am glad they left Charlie and Jacob behind. He was no father to her. Your words are what I have been saying in reviews for years now. He was not a good father he was too interested in fishing and his friends. She was not his servant. It is up to the parent to help with the relationship of a semi grown child you have not been living with. Screw him!



Author's Response:

Yes, it will be a new beggining for Bella.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

Honestly I am a bitter old woman. To tell his daughter not to come. I don't like him anymore in this story. Charlie you are dead to me. LOL



Author's Response:

No you're not :) He was a horrible father. Though I may add Sue as the worst.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

You know If I was Bella I would call Charlie and tell him that she and her family  have been forbidden to come to his wedding by the Blacks. So Good luck and Good bye. He needs to grow some balls for His daughter. I am not a fan of the "PACK"



Author's Response:

Yeah, what kind of father treats his daughter like that? At least he sould be the one explaining why to her.

I also don't like the pack.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

PMSing vampire.. sounds dangerous. LOL



Author's Response:

Yeah. I'm so glad I don't live with her. :)

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

Another coven? Why they didn't know about it?



Author's Response:

Hi!

Well, they are part of the covens that are hidden from the Volturi; Alistair mentioned them to Carlisle and that's why they moved to Milford Creek, so they would be close to them.

Next chapter, we'll meet them and you'll see why they hide.

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

I guess bella eyes are wide open about Jacob.



Author's Response:

There will be more. She wil want to hit him ;)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2015 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

May

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

Well, I am very curious



Author's Response:

Thanks. There will be more answers on the next chapter :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

That old man sure laid it into Jacob, he right bella saw Jacob nothing more then a brother. That just goes to show you that some people don't know everything.

Your welcome!!!



Author's Response:

And there's more the old man has to say ;)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

:):)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

Jacob sure knew how to mess everything up.

Thank you for the message.



Author's Response:

He, he. I'm not on team Jacob ;)

You're welcome.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun! :)

May

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

Very curious by now.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Thanks. I hope next chapter will satisfy your curiosity ;)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

I guess Charlie has regret but that his own fault, sue she was just as bad too never giving Seth and Leah a second thought, and Jacob he something else.



Author's Response:

Hi!

You opened my eyes to Sue's selfishness. You know that now I admire Leah a lot. ;)

Thanks for always being there for me :)

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

May

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

Sorry but the POVs are confusing me: who is saying

My girl had starry eyes; going through the pain of high school again was worthy for her. ?



Author's Response:

Hi!

Bella said it.

I'll be more careful with the POVs.

Thanks.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

Jacob sure is angry with the La Push Pack. Sue and Charlie are both a disgrace when it come to begin a parent.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm getting ready for him leaving ;)

You know what I think about Charlie, and now also about Sue.

Thanks.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

:):)



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Yeah there leaving forks,Washington. Not that I blame them I think jacob sister Rachel has it all wrong it was jacob own fault as while he was the one who don't want to give up. Everything sure has getting a lot worse for the Cullen's family, the tribe don't know anything they lose two of their tribe members. The La Push Pack are nothing but full of hate and prejudices.



Author's Response:

Hi! Well, not all of them, but the mayority.

Next chapter will be on Jacob POV and will explain a lot more.

Thanks

May

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

So interesting and non prodictable. I am glad you will be updating more frequently



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you'll like where the story is going.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm looking forward to heard about Alice planned.



Author's Response:

Hi! For once, she's going to let the others choose :)

Thanks my friend.

May

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

I seldom get interested in post BD fics (albeit I wrote on once) but you managed to catch my attention.



Author's Response:

Thanks.You don't know it, but I valued your opinion since I saw you comment on ADF, you brought me to various amazing stories.

I hope you  like my story.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's sad that Seth tribe bullied, but at least he better off with the Cullen's family he was the only one who supported them when no else would, i think Seth is a better person then most of the tribe's. I don't blame renesmee for not when to be close to Jacob at all.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yeah, I knew you would like it. You know my opinion on the Quilleutes.

Thanks.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun :)

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 5:06 PM Title: Prologue

Now I'm ready for a new adventure.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I really appreciate your support.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 4:56 PM Title: Prologue

:) looking forward to reading this



Author's Response:

Thanks :) Remember virtual muffins.

May

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