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Reviewer: MoiAndrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 25

Yay new chapter

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 25

well that was just wonderful!  

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 25

That was hot! He got so turned on watching her get off. I wonder how much of her he got on film. It obviously took a lot out of him as he came and came and came and dozed off after.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 24

OH MY GOSH! YES!!!  :D  Will you be posting those pics on here for us to see what you imagine it to look like? 

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2016 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG.....why most you tease me so.......I love it!!! 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 24

I just spontaneously combusted!

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

Give him an inch and he takes a mile. Lol

Reviewer: MoiAndrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love this so much cant wait for next update

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

oh yes. what a thing for me to read, first thing in the morning! that contraption Bella put on sounds fascinating. Can't wait to read them in action, using it! Thanks for this story. It's a doozie!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh my...what's Bella going to do

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 24

Your killing me

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

Edward was totally turned on at the thought of Bella using the harness with the dildo in it on him. Funny that he asked her about a drink so he could get away and take care of things. I'm sure he was very turned on seeing her wear it. I wonder if there will be some action after Edward posts those pics on his blog. Or will he post the action on his blog too. That's so hot.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 24

She'll probably end up agreeing after he assures her of anonymity. I bet his blog might explode after posting it.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

So pegging is all about physical pleasure. There's no romantic making love. It's all about giving Edward an unbelievable orgasm, and maybe giving Bella pleasure at the same time using the right toy.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

He wants, needs to be pegged but it sounds like he will love her regardless. I think she will do it because she loves him. But if she doesn't enjoy it will that be enough for him? Can he live with that?

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

Edward really did react to Bella's use of the word kinky. The way she said it made it sound negative. He's afraid that she will find her participation will horrify her.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

Edward got turned on thinking about his blog and what it does to her. Their conversation should be interesting. I bet he remembers talking to BBS.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love Love your story Can not wait to read more!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'd say she was open to try pegging. Especially if the strap-on had a built in clit stimulator!  I've hear of those, but never seen one.  Over all, this is quite an arousing chapter! Thanks!

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

Lucky beyotch.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 23

Ahhhhhh you tease you tease 

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

Holy SHIT!!!!!! Is all I can say.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

yay! that couldn't have gone better! fabulous! on to the pegging....just kidding. I'll wait!

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

Dang it to SHORT!!! Need more please!!!!!! 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 21

great story

looking forward to more

Reviewer: brandofcullencrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh wow hurry up and update i want to see her reaction!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 21

YAY! :) I'm sure that Bella will not yet be fully up to it, but I'm also sure that she will try playing with Edward and he will SO play with her as well :P *phew*

I think this brutal honesty is very important to their relationship and it will bring them SO much pleasure and trust.....

And BTW: My man is also not opposed to this stuff and it IS a lot of fun indeed, seeing him come apart like this! ;)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 21

I find it sad that what one considers normal is taboo to the masses. Don't knock it until you try it.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 21

Good for him!  I'm so glad he told her. I think she might be open to this. I hope so! I also think he senses the same or he wouldn't have told her his story.  Great chapter! Thanks.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

 Your Killing me

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

Ok I saw a rec for this fic in a different one and was hooked after the first chapter.

You write wonderfully and I really like the development of the story so far! Edward and Bella for once are quite normal people who act how real humans would. That Edward has some of the more special 'interests' that get him off is desribed very well I think, at least it feels like it.

I'm curious to see Bella's answer to his hidden enquiry - he does not know that he's going to probably have the time of his life coming up ;)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

😋😋😋😋

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Poor Edward! I feel for him.  I think he wants her to peg him and is afraid she'll run away, screaming!  I don't think she would, but I may be wrong.  I love this conversation they're having, everything from the ice cream to sex!  I wonder if he has been rejected before by another woman for this and that is why he's so skittish....great chapter!

Reviewer: chavayj Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

No! Just as I was getting to the good part 😫. I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

OMG!!!! I need a everyday update because ONCE a week is KILLING me!!! 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh goodness yes

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

Omg

incant wait for part two of this convo.

handled very well 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

I think that went well!  I half expected him to be embarrassed that she was one of his followers, but instead, her telling him make him come in his pants! Wow! That was awesome. I wonder what more there is for him to tell her?  Can't wait to find out....thanks so much for both stories. I love them both for different reasons.

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

Holy crap! Whew!

Reviewer: Alternavation Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love it! The lemons, smut, and all. Can't wait for some of that link to finally reveal itself.

Reviewer: lizzielutz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2016 4:55 AM Title: The Body

I love the story. I find it very interesting and a huge turn on.  Thanks for sharing you story and keep up the awesome job 

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

ruh roh....

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Fun fun

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh, SNAP!  I cannot wait to see his further reaction!  :D

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

He did get a bit upset when she told him she knew, but I hope her explanation soothed him. I thought it sounded reasonable. Good for them!  Now he can be more himself with her!  Good chapter!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

OH no!!!!! Leave me hanging here!!! Of all places! GAH! ANd for the restaurant owner, if i were a patron embarrassed like that, i would have not given them a damn dime!!! Its not like they were humpng on the table. Snicker....

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 17

Cannot wait to see what happens next for these two!  

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

So now they're out at the office. Good!  I wonder how he will take the news that she knows he is "The Body" and about his blog.  He may not take it as well as she thinks he will, huh? We shall see. I think being straightforward with him would be best. Thanks for the stories you give us. I enjoy them all!

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

So ready for this conversation she is going to have with him and how she plans on revealing that she knows about the blog

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for the outtake. So it belongs in between chapters 9 and 10, hence the name 9a? It is good to see what is happening in Edward's mind. I'm SO glad he blew off Tanya...

Reviewer: lushlou Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

I`m loving this story and where it`s going but so hope that they find their HEA together, cheers Lou



Author's Response:

They will I love HEA x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

As always another great chapter I think she should bring up the adult store and wanting to go😋😋😋



Author's Response:

Ok I'll think about that x

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

I would wait and see if he 'fessed up on his own. It's a little early for deep dark secrets.



Author's Response:

But what happens if he doesn't tell ?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think that he is going to reveal himself to her soon. I don't think she will have to ask many, if any, questions about him before he reveals all. He is very into her and I think sees the potential here for a real relationship. I think maybe she should wait and let him tell her. Then she can spill that she has been watching him, I think. Just my opinion.  As for your reader's concern, I do hope one day you write a poly story. I like to read them. I know  you've already written That Night, which involved more than 2 people, but a true poly story where all 3 are in love and involved with each other would strike my fancy a lot!



Author's Response:

Do you think he will be annoyed if he finds out she has been a follower and not said anything ?

as for the poly story I'm throwing an idea around but I can't get the plot line to work as I want it so we'll see .

 

xxxx

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope that she is going to have the courage to tell him!



Author's Response:

She will be not quite yet x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

Mmmmmmm



Author's Response:

Good mmmm or bad  mmmmm?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 14

So now she knows for sure! How exciting to know it's really him!  I'm glad she decided to wait for him to tell her his secretes. She did, didn't s she? Thanks for the terrific chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes she is trying to decide how to tell him

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

Very interesting story. Like it a lot.

Author's Response:

Thank you glad your enjoying it 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

That was so amazingly hot it has me so revved up right now 



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it x

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

you removed the one-shot? wasn't it part of this story? I haven't checked yet, but i will. I want to save this story once it's done and I want that O/S to be part of it....so maybe he still is the man  in the video but has his ring out at this time? Still she would be able to see the hole for it to go through. I know this from personal experience with a pierced man....so this is a mystery! hot as hell, though. since you ended this chapter seemingly in the middle of a lemon, should I expect the finish of it next time? I sure hope so!



Author's Response:

Hi I have the one shot saved so you can have a copy don't worry. I don't know anyone who is pierced so I tried to goggle it . Does it heal up quickly if you take the ring out ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bella gets acquainted with "the body".



Author's Response:

She is trying to x

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 2:18 PM Title: The Body

I like this first chapter.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

Very  cruel !   Very  hot  scene ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much more to come x

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2016 12:38 AM Title: The Body

I would say that I think I might love u a little bit😝 !!!



Author's Response:

It's ok I understand it was very cruel. I'll update soon x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

So curl you have me so worked up😛😛😛



Author's Response:

I know but you know I'll see it through x

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

Very cruel   lol 



Author's Response:

I know but you love it really x

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

The cruelist! I'll forgive you because you gave us a lot this chapter and I KNOW you'll give us more soon! 



Author's Response:

Very soon I promise x

Reviewer: Mmmoyer Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

Exceptionally cruel 



Author's Response:

I know I'm sorry ( not really he he) xx

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

Just evil!!!!!! Can't wait



Author's Response:

Won't be long I promise x

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yes! Very cruel! Lol



Author's Response:

I know sorry x

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

Noooooooooooo!!!!



Author's Response:

What if I tell you the next chapter is so much hotter xx

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Great one



Author's Response:

Thank you xx

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

what a sizzling chapter!  yes, I think she is going to find out soon...unless he took his ring out to go dancing. I don't think so, so we shall see!



Author's Response:

As ever In tune with me !!!!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my, er, what was the question? *wiping drool and other fluids*



Author's Response:

Just the response I was looking for x

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

PLEASEEEEE update Super FAST!!!!! So DAMN good... In Need of new panties now!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes new panties all round

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Plz plz plzzzz let that be Edward dancing with Bella plzzz

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

Nooo must have more



Author's Response:

Hopefully tomorrow x

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh I sure hope it is Edward!  I think he's taken with her as much as she's taken with him. He may even know she has guessed his secret.  I love the way you described her outfit!



Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying it, I'm having a ball writing it x

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Let the fun begin 



Author's Response:

Oh definiely x

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

I don't know why I haven't been reading this all along  here, but I am now. This site won't censor or delete anything for graphic content like FFn will. 

So she finally gets a date, sort of, with Edward. How will she investigate the tattoo she thinks he has...? So glad his set-up with Tanya didn't work out!



Author's Response:

Sort of a date, it's up to them both now to make a move

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

This  is  really  a  fascinating  story  with a different  premise .   Very good writing .   I loved Deprivation . 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

I hope we get to hear the ear full Charlie's going to get 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love it as always 

Reviewer: LadyLetters Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love the new banner and love the intrigue of wondering exactly what Mr Cullen has going on under his clothes!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

Need some more soon

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

Such a tease 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Very  good  chspter, all THREE versions  of  it!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

I hope you keep posting 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

<3

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow

Hot stuff from our Edward 

Well done

 



Author's Response:

He seems to be pushing all the right buttons at the moment x

Reviewer: Auror21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very fun fic so far. I like the premis, don't think I've read about this kink in a fanfic yet. Definitely will be looking for an update.



Author's Response:

I've really developed the story but the link will be the same x

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 10:20 PM Title: The Body

Kinky!! :-)



Author's Response:

I know and I love writing it x

Reviewer: Mmmoyer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm curious to where the actual storyline will go. This chapter is a decent foundation for sure.



Author's Response:

It will follow the one shot 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

HELL Yes!!! Can't wait love it 



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

YES! THIS IS SO HOT! PLEASE CONTINUE. LOVE IT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

Yes, please !   Very  very  hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review we'll see where this goes

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

I was so excited to see a second chapter ... Again  hope you write more hot hot hot



Author's Response:

I'll definitely try

Reviewer: Bomsrocks93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:50 PM Title: The Body

Loved it hoping for more



Author's Response:

I am trying to see what I can do x

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 1:10 PM Title: The Body

hot hot hot



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it x

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2015 1:18 PM Title: The Body

I now you set on my favorites list and for notifications of updates and new stories. That was hot!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much

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