Date: 14 Jan 2017 1:10 AM Title: Tension
hey anyone still waiting for the next chapter, she posted chapter 26 on her fanfiction! go check it out over there.
Date: 05 Nov 2016 2:07 AM Title: Prologue
you should read really really REALLY come back like it's been almost 3 months!
Date: 31 Oct 2016 5:36 AM Title: Tension
Just wanted to drop you a note and remind you of all the little people out here dying of anticipation!! PLEASE don't abandon us!! WE NEED ANSWERS (preferably in the form of more chapters).
(Sorry about posting on an old chapter - it won't let me PM you or comment more than once)
Date: 14 Sep 2016 8:25 AM Title: Shattered
Hi - it's been a while, and I just wanted you to know that I have been in constant anticipation since the last update (I'm literally dying for this reunion). I don't know how much longer I can physically withstand not seeing how this plays out so plz plz plz update. We gotta know! You gotta tell us! I CANT HANDLE IT AND ID RATHER HARRASS YOU THAN STUDY FOR MY TWO EXAMS TOMORROW plz help a girl out - throw me a bone! Update plz okay thanks :)
ps - you rock - love your work lol
pps- sorry apparently I already commented on the most recent few chapters and it won't let me PM you
Date: 01 Sep 2016 3:59 AM Title: Gestation
Just wanted to let you know that I'm losing my mind waiting for the next update. Losing. It. Literally can't wait. Please please please update soon!
Date: 17 Aug 2016 6:32 PM Title: Uprising
I am glad that Caius was not mean to Bella
Glad she is going back. Aro needs her.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:25 PM Title: Uprising
How can you just leave it there?!? Ugh! I need the next chapter - NEED IT! I keep hoping that if I re-read it, there will be more at the end of the chapter, but that just isn't the case! Please please please don't leave us hanging!!!! I need to know what happens next!!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2016 1:12 AM Title: Gestation
Can't wait for Aro reaction...
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2016 9:41 AM Title: Gestation
Really hoped Aro would come during the pregnancy :( but it was still an interesting and good chapter. I like that it wasn't so cliché.
Date: 06 Aug 2016 5:01 PM Title: Gestation
I love Ms. Cope. Glad Bella found her and has some support. How old is Lauren? Glad Ms. Cope's son could help. How old is his daughter, Jessica? His wife is never mentioned. Is he married? Glad Bella had been writing to Dora. I can't believe that Dora has not told her husband/Master yet. I kind of feel bad for Aro for missing out on the pregnancy. He has missed out on so much. Can't wait for another update. I was soooo excited when I got this one. I stopped what I was doing and had to read.
Author's Response:
Lauren is around twelve or thirteen. Jessica is about four years old. More information on Michael, including his marital status and background will be coming in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 06 Aug 2016 12:50 PM Title: Gestation
I'm still at a loss. As I'm reading the update my head is still stuck 2 chapters back. Aro's a jerk. I know he didn't know she was pregent when he kicked her to the curb but a night in a hotel and a plane ticket. Grrrrr. Make him pay. Please don't let him waltz in the next chapter or 2 spouting second thoughts of hearts, rainbows and life altering therapy sessions. Only for Bella to drop to her knees ready to server his ass again. Please. He don't deserve it.
Date: 31 Jul 2016 5:13 AM Title: Prologue
please update soon .. i really look forward to read this story
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:29 PM Title: Marvel
Please please please say you're going to update again soon- it's not a want but a need! Dying over here. Aros gonna send someone to check her room or have ties to the hotel and find the pregnancy tests and I can't wait to see what happens!!
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:07 AM Title: Marvel
I want a boy. I hope Aro is going crazy right now and Dora spills the beans
Date: 25 Jul 2016 3:02 PM Title: Marvel
ok im hooked cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 25 Jul 2016 12:36 PM Title: Marvel
Glad Bella call Dora. But she has put Dora in a bad position. I think Dora will tell her husband sooner rather than later. Hopefully Aro will come get Bella before the baby is born. I think Aro needs a little girl to spoil rotten.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 8:18 AM Title: Marvel
Let me know her flight times and I'll pick her up!
T....just out side Perth
Author's Response:
I always think it's so cool to see that people all over the world are enjoying this story! Thanks for your review Thirlestane!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 2:43 AM Title: Shattered
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i told my self i dont like aro bella storries and i was not going to read it and grrrrrrrrrr ......umm when does the next chappy come out? ok your golating that you got me hooked on a aro bella story may commence now.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 12:24 AM Title: Shattered
Now when he wants you back, make him grovel. So hard. Stay in the city and make him see what he just dismissed, dont even go and try to find someone new, just make him sorry
Date: 23 Jul 2016 7:36 PM Title: Shattered
Wow! He like Dr Jekyll and Mr. Hide with affection. Kicking her out with only her clothes and a plane ticket. I don't know how she can ever trust him again. Run Bella. You deserve better.
Date: 23 Jul 2016 4:47 PM Title: Shattered
OMGosh!!!!!! He will revert doing that. He will realize that he does love her and hopefully go get her. Where will Bella go? Please update soon.
Date: 23 Jul 2016 1:57 PM Title: Shattered
Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:44 PM Title: Tension
OMGosh!!!! Scarlett has some nerve. I would be pissed too. Thanks jsims4@utk.edu for the time line at the beginning of this chapter. I was wondering, how old is Aro? I hope you update soon. I have to wait on updates now. I have enjoyed reading chapter to chapter. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:02 AM Title: Passion
I am glad that he is understanding and nor upset with her. Loving this story.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:40 AM Title: Emotion
So glad that he is sharing his past with Bella. Glad his momma likes Bella.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:10 AM Title: Conqueror
OMGosh!!!!!!! This chapter was awesome. I think Aro has meet his match in Bella. She does not back down from him and she does not let him get away with things. I can understand Aro being hurt or worried when he saw Bella dancing with Edward. But he also had to unde
Date: 19 Jul 2016 2:36 AM Title: Acquisition
I think he is slowly falling for Bella and it scares him. I know she is falling for him, I just hope she doesn't get hurt.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 2:19 AM Title: Reassurance
I am glad that he opened up to her. Glad he let her read part of his journal. Hopefully they can move forward now.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:44 AM Title: Entitled
I am so glad that Bella stood up to Aro. She does deserve better.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:11 AM Title: Exchange
Soooo now it is an arrangement. In an earlier chapter he said it was not a business deal. I am not liking Aro in this chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:50 AM Title: Strength
Aro's wife? What was the incident? Glad that Bella has Dora to talk to. I am assuming that Bella quite her job at the restaurant when she moved in with Aro.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:27 AM Title: Demonstration
I am worried about Bella. She really needs to Google some things. Lol. She really should have read that document so she would know what to expect and to also known what Aro likes.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:58 PM Title: Procedure
I can not believe that she did not look over the document. How old is Aro? I have ever a feeling when they finally have sex it is going to be soo intense.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:26 PM Title: Belonging
She has called him Mr. Volturi on this chapter. In the last chapter he told her to call him Aro. He had not corrected her yet. Will we ever know what happened to Angela? Will she make another appearance? Does Bella know about BDSM or Dom/sub? Does she know that is what Aro is wanting from her?
Date: 18 Jul 2016 10:51 PM Title: Intimate
Glad he told her to call him Aro. Calling him Mr. Volturi sounded so formal and impersonable, especially after he had his fingers inside her pussy. Lol
Date: 18 Jul 2016 2:35 PM Title: Reign
Bella just left Felix at the winery. Did she at least tell him she was leaving. Why is Angela being so mean to Bella?
Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:38 AM Title: Declaration
Glad they straightened out who Diana was. But if I were Bella I would have been a little scared when Aro grabbed her and said she was his.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 2:52 AM Title: Misunderstanding
Who is this Diana?
Date: 18 Jul 2016 1:41 AM Title: Reoccurring
I have to keep reminding myself that Bella is just out of high school.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 12:48 AM Title: Collide
This story sounds very interesting but I am trying to picture Bella will Aro and I am having problems with that. But I am excited to see what you have planned for your story.
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:36 PM Title: Rebuild
I would be like the girls too. If the apartments for so affordable I would think their would be a waiting list for them.
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:54 PM Title: Misaligned
Wow, Charlie is a real jerk.
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:47 PM Title: Prologue
What did she dof to disappoint her Master?
Date: 10 Jul 2016 2:23 PM Title: Tension
OMG... I just can't wait for more!!!
More please?!
Love it
Date: 24 May 2016 6:55 AM Title: Prologue
This story is great! Please keep up the great writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2015 2:35 AM Title: Exchange
I got confused when Bella drove back to Aros villa. I would have thought it would be Doras driver and Dora. I see Scarletts name.
Bella is at her usual game pushing men to their extreme at her discourse
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2015 3:21 PM Title: Strength
I do appreciate your writing skills. The development of it has sustenance.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2015 10:10 AM Title: Demonstration
I will squrim and talk back for you Bella. I got your back! 😉
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2015 9:46 AM Title: Procedure
Thank you for the translations.
Your story is going very well. I am learning to appreciate the dominant.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2015 9:07 AM Title: Belonging
Is Aro taking to much advantage of Bellas innocence?
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2015 8:50 AM Title: Intimate
When she answers about boyfriends there is a question mark. Should there be a period instead?
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2015 12:55 PM Title: Declaration
Hope you are feeling bettter. The connection of Aro & Bella is hot. Although Aro is a bit forceful. However I get it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2015 12:20 PM Title: Reoccurring
Yes, i do like the story. Introductiona are made!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2015 5:40 AM Title: Rebuild
I like the characters you are using. Background for Bella is set up. Adventure plus new beginnings make great story telling to me. So Ms Jersygal 101.you have another reader to read this story! 🙌
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2015 5:18 AM Title: Prologue
Chp1..not clear as to what had her in that position. Did she look or not look at him? However the Prologue sets the scenario. I do want to continue reading. Thank you
Date: 05 Dec 2015 12:46 PM Title: Entitled
Good for isabella to stand up for herself she deserve much more from aro i hope that he understand this and that he want to be this person but that isabella can understand him too maybe just a little bit
I hope you understand my english is sadly not my first language i can read it but writing is so much harder
Date: 05 Dec 2015 3:57 AM Title: Entitled
Good for you Bella, make him earn you
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2015 9:55 PM Title: Entitled
Ooo loved the update! Can't wait for the next chapter :) eagerly awaiting
Date: 04 Dec 2015 8:19 PM Title: Entitled
Love the chapter. Glad she left. I figured she was going to run down the stairs and start apologizing for leaving. I'm happy she didn't and voiced her thoughts. Thanks for the update.
Date: 28 Nov 2015 10:12 AM Title: Prologue
Wow, Aro sure acted like an ass. I don't remember them discussing a time they would be in their D/s roles. This is really going to hurt Bella. So I guess she isn't his women or girlfriend then or that's how I would feel. I hope she withdrawals from him a bit. She seemed to just fall so easily into this submissive role with him. No real discussion of boundaries or limits. Truthful I like her to tell him to F off but with the title of the story I'm sure that won't happen. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2015 8:32 PM Title: Exchange
OMG! Aro's acting like a right git! Grr loved the update however. Hope another will be along soon!
Date: 15 Nov 2015 7:48 PM Title: Strength
haaaaa .... Vivement la suite !!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2015 9:59 AM Title: Strength
Diana is trouble with a capital T.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2015 3:12 PM Title: Demonstration
She has sooo much learning to do! I'm sure aro won't mind!
Date: 05 Sep 2015 10:53 AM Title: Demonstration
Oo loved it :) hope the next one will be up soon
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2015 1:16 AM Title: Procedure
I can not wait to hear her reaction!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2015 12:50 AM Title: Intimate
You are in his web now!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2015 12:24 AM Title: Declaration
Ok Aro is getting a bit more attractive!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:50 PM Title: Prologue
I'm not sure I can imagine Aro as being attractive... Maybe I'll imagine Aro with the looks of Edward. ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:21 PM Title: Procedure
I live it bring it on
Date: 03 Jul 2015 5:16 PM Title: Intimate
Outstanding work on this fiction! You write Aro as a multi-dimensional character, which few others do! Bravo! Thank you for all the hard work. It sincerely shows!
Author's Response:
That's one of the highest compliments that I've ever received on my writing before. Thank you so much for you review and I hope that you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 30 Jun 2015 5:53 AM Title: Reign
Aro,here, reminds me of the old saying, " Come into my parlor said the spider to the fly!". The web being woven around Bella is getting tighter and more complex without her even knowing it! Wonderful work! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I'm happy that you're enjoying it!
Date: 27 Jun 2015 10:12 AM Title: Declaration
Now we're getting somewhere
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 1:32 PM Title: Misunderstanding
Ah hell, I think I'd find myself flabbergasted, too, should he single me out. He's certainly got an air of authority about him that makes him seem all the more intriguing to the reader, and Bella. Definitely drool worthy on both counts. Are you emulating Christian Grey for Aro's strong personality, or just how commanding he appears in canon?
Great story so far. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
With Aro's character I just took the level of authority he portrayed in the books and amped it up a little bit. I'm glad you're enjoying the story though!
Date: 24 Jun 2015 12:45 PM Title: Misunderstanding
Oh oh who's she
Date: 22 Jun 2015 10:36 PM Title: Reoccurring
Oh I can't get enough
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:53 AM Title: Rebuild
So, are all the characters in this story human?
Author's Response:
Yes all the characters are human.
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:33 AM Title: Misaligned
What a nasty Charlie.
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:15 AM Title: Prologue
Not a fan of this paring but I'll give it a try.
Author's Response:
Thank you for considering it. I hope you enjoy what I've come up with.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 5:28 PM Title: Prologue
thanks...vivement la suite