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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2020 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: handsonu22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 35

Nicely done!

Reviewer: Czar on Lyfe Conflicts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 35

Great story

Reviewer: telaviv Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!!!!

Please update.....

Reviewer: bzwifenmom24-7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 35

I love how Edward changed for the better. Thanks for sharing your story.

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 33

OMG   I CANT WAIT  :)

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 32

OMG    I LOVE THIS STORY !!!!  :)

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 30

OMG I CANT WAIT !!!!!!;)    LOL

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 30

Glad T is headed east instead of staying around to cause trouble

Reviewer: bzwifenmom24-7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 30

Tanya was furious! Good riddance though.

Reviewer: bzwifenmom24-7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 28

Your chapter 22 & 28 were reposted twice. 😖😕😢😩😪

Reviewer: bzwifenmom24-7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 27

Big Karma to Rose and soon to Emmett too. I'm laughing at them.

Reviewer: bzwifenmom24-7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 22

That scumbag Em! Hope he will go bankcrupt!

Reviewer: bzwifenmom24-7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love how Bella is fighting back! If it was up to me, I will pull Rose's hair and junk punch Em. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

So much for Rose being Ems soulmate. I would let love to hear what his mom thinks of him now

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

I just got out of the hospital, catching up. I am not sure about the route Bella is going with this. Trying to make a deal with a man who is willing to give up his child. I think that she needs to sit with her father and talk to a lawyer then make plans

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

Love your story can not wait for more.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 27

Omg. Love it. That's what's that skank deserves. Cant wait for Edward and Bella to get together. 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 27

SHE WAS SELFISH TOO. BUT SHE WAS NO FRIEND TO BELLA EITHER. ITS TO SAD SHE SEE'S IT NOW. MAYBE A LESSON LEARNED TO LATE .

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 27

I don't feel Em in this story deserves Charlie. Right not Em is acting like the child in this instance. I do think Rose is right but maybe they will work it out or maybe not. To be honest it almost sounds like if Rose isn't there with him. He should have parental rights terminated. He doesn't care. Hell showed it night no one could get ahold of him when charlie was sick. For him to say this or that and I have now the contract I want.. uggh. Rant over. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 27

Good one.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 26

thank you.   The person cheated in this story the most is Charlie.

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh yeah. I bet Tanya can't keep the trap shut. Edward was priceless with jaw open.. Did you drool there edward.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 22

Emments getting nasty. I'm glad Bella stood up to him and I can't wait for her to drag him to court. I hope she get everything she wants plus more and full custody.i I think Rose really wants Charlie since she doesn't have kids. Hopefully Bella can keep her away from her.

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 24

Edward is so wishy-washy in this story.  He can't make up his mind...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 24

Well until he splits and Tanya leaves I won't believe he will actually do it. Esme needs to know the Rose was part of the break up of Emmetts marriage.

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

ok rub hands together awhahaha what is going to happen when Edward pulls up to pick bella up with tanya there. I can't wait to read about it. evil laughing.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

Good for you Edward. I'm really looking forward to the car ride

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

my thoughts are she should have seen this coming with the way he never comes home. Why even talk. Call a lawyer and take him the evidence.. Oh did she collect it? I doubt it.

 

She should let that lawyer tear them apart. Rose and Emmett.

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

OH PLZ UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT TO HEAR FROM EDWARD !!!!!  LOL

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

Way to go at em with full fists. omg omg I can't wait to see how the event goes. Will edward go with tanya. O Please come up with that chapter soon. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

I hope Edward is right about Emmet & Rose will get tired of taking 2 nd place to work. Otherwise family gatherings at the Cullen house will get very awkward

 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 21

I LOVE THIS STORY CANT WAIT   

EDWARD & BELLA IM SO READY  !!!!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

Wow Edward really turned around in this chapter.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm so happy Edward is getting rid of Tanya. I hope Bella gets full custody and a lot of money from Emmett. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 21

Well that is a changed Edward. I must say with a child like Rose her parents should be ashamed I know I would be. Tanya is just another version of Rose.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is a great story. I hope something bad happens to emment. He's the worst.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 20

I am glad she saw a lawyer and told Her father. Now she has three people in her corner along with her lawyer. Jasper, Alice, her father, and her lawyer. Well I guess you might add to that Edward and Esme. Wait till she finds out what Rose has done.

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 20

Ok interesting on telling bella to take time for charlie. I am not sure if Rose is going to play a part of playing dirty on bella. I think rose is going to help em get an attorney and push him to do something bad to bella. I hope not but it seems like that is the path she is on. I have a feeling also esme is not going to stop with bella going to that auction. Esp is she doesn't show up with em and rose does. I am sure then esme is going to have heads rolling. 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

OH PLZ KEEP GOING  II CANT WAIT....TANYA ,ROSE, EM, AND EDWARD TOO.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

I am not really happy how this chapter went. It is your story to write. Bella has the fully court system in the USA at her finger tips. As I told you before she needs to get a divorce but first get her ducks in a row. Most women would have done what I said in the beginning. Why because of the assets they possess together.

 

Please update and keep it going.

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

Emmett and Edward are such wimps!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well I would rather she photographed and got information on phone calls and texts. Then a PI to fiollow them for one week and finalize it. Then give it to an attorney and then own him.  He might have a business but he will owe her child support pay for the house etc.. This is America and Judges award the houses to the person with the children. Some states she can sue Rose in public and make a mockery of her.

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ok I am shocked. I am surprised bella didn't call daddy to tell him. What is dear old dad going to do. Sounds like em and rose have been sleeping together. It is bad they didn't ask what edward was doing there. I mean he is still a doctor. I can say if they had look around and smelled. They would of smelled the lingering smell of vomit. I know I can even after it is cleaned up. At least Edward was there for little charlie. That gave him big bonus points for getting little charlie out of hearing range. Interesting bella got a little feel. lol hahahaha

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

she needs to file on him get the goods and take everything. Embarress Rose publically.

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

GOOD JOB !!!  

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ok you totally scared me with charlie lil... Omg that is every parents worse fear. Interesting em phone off. Then you have the balls to show up with rose. I still think he is cheating if not physical. Which is hard to see he is not. He is emotionally cheating. Great chapter.

A+ Edward stepping up for them.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

Glad they will  be confronting  each other now

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 16

Glad Bella is messing with them. I don't think she should let it go on too long.  I hope you do an out take of Em & Rose's conversation. Maybe Bella can have them bugged and use that as evidence is the divorce

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

At least you  posted. No problem. I can read it anywhere just glad it is not upside down or sideways..

 

Evil little Bella.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

I just love vengeful Bella.  They won't know what's hit them.  Mind you Edward might. lol

 

PS you did it again and posted the chapter in the author notes. :D

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yeah for Bella, I hope she gives them all hell.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

Has Bella worked out that Rose and Em are at it yet?

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

Very enjoyable.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love the Edward POV.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella but its interesting to see Edward being human.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

okay well if she can live with EM and Rose then I guess we all can. I still say be quiet and get information on Em

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2015 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 15

Way to go Bella!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love your story can not wait for more.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope she actually sees what her friend Rose and her husband have done. Whores the lot of them. I would smile and leave

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE .....LOL   CAN WE PLZ HAVE UPDATE SOON THIS IS A GOOD STORY.

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

What a witch rose turned out to be. I do wonder will she confront them or act like she never heard it. Or will she use this to her advantage at the right time. I still think I see em moving in with rose. I thought rose was good but after this nope just like cruel tanya. I do find it interesting even esme and car saw a change in edward. I can't wait till next chapter. I have a feeling it will be a doosey of one. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

yes I did enjoy it but Honestly she needs to know about the cheating so she can tell her lawyer get confirmation and then hang him by his balls. That would make ME totally happy She also needs to know it is Rose he is cheating with and file against her as well. In some states you can hit the person the spouse cheats with, with a  law suite. In our state if you catch them and get really upset you can hurt them both and I think it is called justifiable homicide.

 

I will be watching for your updates, probably way to soon. :-)

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

CANT WAIT FOR MORE PLZ

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am surprised she is making em move. I wonder if he will just move in with rose or alice or get a place of his own. I wonder if tanya is still planning on moving. Will edward see it in her face tonight with bella something is bugging her. Sounds like em may not of physically cheated but emotionally did with rose. Ok can't wait to see this party. 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

LOVE IT I NEED MORE  ....  LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

WHAT DID I SAY>> cheating.. Now I have a new person to hate on >>EMMETT I always Hate Rose.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

It is time Bella get it in  your head he is cheating and he has done something that Alice and Jasper know. Rose has admitted it to Alice and now Alice is furious.. WAKE UP

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

Rose is sad because Emmett is trying to make a go of it with Bella. Wait she gets pregnant by Emmett and then B will know.. See I just do not trust her at all. Her brother and her maybe more alike than you know.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

HE alluded to Emmett thinking the marriage was over. So he has gotten close to Rose. Think Bella, investigate what is going on with YOUR husband and your Friend.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

pretty sure that Rose spends moer time with Emmett and now her marriage is gone she will take over Em.. How very sad.

 

If I was Bella after this dinner party I would work out day care and go back to work so I can make a living for myself and my child. That is next he moves next door. Happy Liz..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Lets hope that EM does not cheat on Bella with Rose.. oh well.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Maybe it is time to just go by and visit the job. Take him to lunch or fib and say you were killing time to meet someone and they are not ready yet. See for yourself..

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

Edward is one messed up dude

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

OH THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT PLZ UPDATE REAL SOON ..HES AT ROSE'S HOUSE ?

 SHE NEEDS TO KNOW......  LOL

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

I wonder if Rose made a deal with Edward. Something like I've met a great guy he is in an unhappy marriage he won't leave his wife can you please seduce her so he'll have grounds for divorce?

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2015 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

No it didn't but it took me a moment to work out where the chapter was. lol

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Date: 22 Jul 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella, between Edward, Em Rose and super biatch Tanya its enough to give a girl a headache.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

Em and Rose obviously, what a mess.  Awesome if short chapter.  You do know you uploaded the chapter into the notes section?



Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying it. I did realise what I'd done after it was up. I must have been overly eager to write that chapter. Hope it didn't spoil it? x

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

Yep I think I am right. Em was getting chewed about how is treating more charlie than bella. I think bella's name was thrown in there too. I am surprised edward helped bella save her ass at the end. I have a feeling em was about to tell bella it is all your fault you got pregnant and I had to stay with you. I wish we would of not had charlie. I am sure that was about to come out of his mouth. Yes your story needs more views. There is a few places rooms you can put a link for your story. Make sure to check rules. If I see it in a room I will help with getting it out there. I am looking at the rooms rules to see which I can also. Good luck.. I believe there is a room called twcslibrary room. OR close to that. 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

Em red flag

Rose red flag

Alice red flag 

I think everyone knows what is going on. I do think they don't want to tell bella and hopes she will figure out soon. Maybe edward is not a pompous ass and he is trying to give bella an out. Due to him knowing what is going on with Rose and Em. Just thinking. Keep going. I am hoping you get more numbers. I am going to see if I can give out your story to a few I know. It a good one. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Queen Cullen. It's great your enjoying my story I'm really enjoying writing it. I have an idea where it's going but it is not pre written and I have no beta so all mistakes are mine. Thanks also for letting people know about it, your a star!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Interesting turn of events.  I love it.

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

Hmm ok didn't see that coming from edward. Although that was hot. Now I am not sure about affair. I do wonder what he meant with em comment. I wonder does he know more of what is going on with em and rose. I think tanya might think she is moving there but he won't keep her. I can't way to see edward pov. I do think also that rose is telling edward what is going on. I think maybe rose is trying to break em and bella so she can get him. Then maybe so soften the blow have edward swoop in. She had tanya for a day of shopping interesting timing. 

Reviewer: deepti Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved this update and the little hints about Rose and Em. Bella really over-reacted, but this is high on drama fiction, so it's to be expected. Can't wait for more interaction between Edward and Bella. Cheers

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ok Bella busting as to make dinner all day and no respect from rose, em, edward, tanya. That is bs. I do think something is going on with em and rose. If not sleeping together they are getting close. I feel tanya was rude. Should bella said anything maybe mabye not, but you can't blame her when her food she made by hand was demolished by comments. I think Alice and Jasper got a good look at what was going on in em and bella life. I do not like the in laws at all. I feel break up soon. I wonder if edward will man up and go by there and say sorry for being an ass with out tanya with him or em home. That would be the nice thing to do. I wonder what ed pov and rose pov of this dinner are. Tanya just made herself look like a high totty snob by saying we didn't see much but we did have sex. Then bella to stand up for em even though he is being an ass. I didn't even hear em say thank you to bella for all she did. I hope you can update again soon. 

Reviewer: ferret Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story! I get the impression that Emmett is cheating with Rose. Alice has picked up on something. Can't wait to see what happens when Bella finds out.

 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh snap. I can understand why she said it. I do think something else is going on. Rose I have a feeling there is more going on with rose and em. I do think they are using the excuse about not having time. I wonder if she showed up on site what would she find out. hmmmm

Reviewer: banned2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see where you take this!

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