Date: 11 Nov 2023 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Hello, I just found your story. It's been great so far but I wish you would continue it. We need to know what happens. Alice makes me mad with butting in. Lol
please continue this if you can.
~Ash
Date: 07 Jan 2021 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I really like this story it's so charming ,it's just such a shame you never got a chance to finish it! Good Luck!
Date: 01 Jul 2018 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I learned to drive a stick in a1980 white 280 my Mama called The White Pony.
I'm on board with Bella, indecent exposure be damned! Great chapter, forward to the next.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2018 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
:) loving this story. I hope you are able to update it sometime
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Hey! I just found this searching for something new to read. You should pick it up again! It’s a fun story. ❤️
Date: 14 Jan 2018 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Please lost again soon. Just found this story
Date: 10 Nov 2017 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Loved this chapter and can drive a stick cheers lou
Date: 21 Sep 2017 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
:)
Date: 18 Sep 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Alice needs to stop and give Bella and Edward a chance to get to know each other without her meddling comments.
Date: 17 Sep 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I had to re-read the whole story, it has been too long. Hopefully, the next update will be soon. I totally understand though. Soccer mom, Choir mom and Class mom here, so I get it... LOL!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I am loving this so far. I hope you continue to update
Date: 16 Sep 2017 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I really hope Bella does something about Alice. Seriously, this chapter had Alice controlling everything. It's just not normal... is it?
Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
good
Date: 12 Sep 2017 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 10 Sep 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I am so happy that you are continuing the story. I absolutely love it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 10 Sep 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I'm glad your back and wow Alice I can't believe her lol hope Bella gets some revenge look forward to next update x
Date: 10 Sep 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I'm glad you're back. Alice is pushing too hard. She made Bella cry and doesn't feel an ounce of remorse. I know how to drive a stick-shift, because they're the most common in Germany. Driving-lessons with Edward is something Bella can look forward to, the car is a gem.
Date: 10 Sep 2017 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Thank you for sharing this with us!
Xx T
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2017 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Oh my heheheheheh I am new an I just read all 8 chapters I love it I am looking forward to more
Date: 09 Sep 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Loved it! Looking forward to more soon!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Loving it so far! Looking forward to more!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I love driving a stick anywhere but steep hills with a stop sign at the top lol. alice needs some pay back lol. I am so happy you are back cant wait for more
Date: 09 Sep 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
So glad you are back! I really like this 2! Drive a stick? YES Mad at Enmett? Yes pummel Alice? Absolutely !
Keep up the great work !
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2017 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
Great to have you back and I loved the chapter.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
I think Alice crossed the line. She didn't even apologize to Bella. And Bella needs a stronger back bone when Alice is getting on her nerves. Thanks for coming back and updating.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man
OMG, I laughed so much it hurts. Awesome chapter. Update soooon!
Date: 07 Sep 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Can't wait to read more of this great story.
Date: 18 Aug 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
I just found this story and could not stop reading to review.....
Oh, what a cliffy just when things are about to change. I know Tanya is not finished with Edward she still wants her sugar daddy......I hope she is not able to access any of Edwards funds. But that girl spells trouble I know Bella will be able to take care of herself once she realizes who Tanya is Alice and Bella will have a field day with her.
Thank you for sharing......I'm hoping you update soon
Date: 28 Feb 2017 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
:) :) : ) please post more
Date: 13 Nov 2016 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Love it and can't wait to read more,xx
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
you can't just leave us with this big cliffhanger YOU NEED TO POST MORE!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Can't wait for more
Date: 20 May 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
I'm glad they reunited but what a horrible way. They need to really talk and get to know each other. I can't wait for more.
Date: 17 May 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
I just stumbled onto this story and I am already addicted. So cute!!!! I love that Tanya got the heave ho, however, I am convinced she is not gone for good. What will it be, she is pregnant with Edwards child? Can't wait to find out. Great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you are addicted, cause I'm equally addicted writing all these characters
Date: 16 May 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Great chapter!
Date: 15 May 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
And they're all in one place at last. Jake is his usual hostile self towards Edward, no surprise there, he, he.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
please send me up dates sharrer43@hotmail.com
Author's Response:
Sorry I dont send updates via email, but you can follow this story to get updates If you would like
Date: 14 May 2016 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Great story
Date: 13 May 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Ooh most lush chapter yet I sooooo love this story, it`s just beautiful, Thanks so much,xxxx
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
I checked out the pics on your blog. Bella's home is absoluterly beautiful!
Date: 13 May 2016 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Lol Edward was really cute then and emmett is going to get a concussion if he doesn't star behaving lol look forward to next update x
Date: 13 May 2016 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Edward just cant help himself love it
Date: 13 May 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
SMALL WORLD, I guess because Alice and Jasper live so close to Bella they would have became friends, they are one town over right
Date: 13 May 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Very good
Date: 13 May 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl
Wow.. Jealous Jake!
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Tanya is rotten!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
I feel sad for Bella. She needs a sexy man.
Date: 03 May 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Loving this story can't think what his secret is and the leg has to of been damaged overseas look forward to next update oh and Tanya so deserved all she got x
Date: 01 May 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
well onward
Date: 30 Apr 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
SO GLAD HE KICKED TANYA TO THE CURB
Date: 29 Apr 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Great story please update soon love your ed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Great chapter and glad Tanya's gone.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Glad Tanya is gone,can't wait to find out. Edward's secret
Date: 28 Apr 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Great update
Date: 28 Apr 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
Very very good
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Reads like it is going to be very good
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
I am enjoying reading the story, but you might want to spend a bit more time proofreading the chapters. It might help with the flow of your story more.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Good update
Date: 27 Apr 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
I think Edward did well and Tanya showed again that she's not just a mean, cheating liar, but also dumb. Edward should take her threat seriously, he provided her with a comfortable life she won't want to give up without a fight. If she was not following him she might have been at the clinic to get tested herself or worse because she's pregnant from whoever. As to Edward's leg, I think he was injured badly and now has a big scar or a prosthetic leg. Edward needs some Bella-sighting and some of her delicious baked-goods.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
I would have enjoyed him putting her down more... But I guess I'm just being mean. She did NOT get the hint... I see her causing problem down the road.
I can't wait to see how the story plays out... Background on all the key players.
Enjoy your new computer!
Date: 27 Apr 2016 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
I hope this will not sound rude but you're really dragging this out. Bella is going to be his rebound from Tanya, not fair to Bella. How did Edward fail to see how nasty Tanya is for so long? Edward must not have much self esteem.... Thank You
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
I like this story, but I think it woild benefit from having a beta and being flushed out a bit more.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
So happy Tanya is gone for now and I loved everything Edward said to her I wish she knew all he said. Love Esme she is a wonderful momma bear dont mess with her kids.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
I think his leg was either lost, or pretty damaged.
He delt with Tanya very good... couldnt believe he gave a BMW to someone in Rose's birthing class. Even if he has money to burn, that just wow!!
Loving it :D
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
I love me some EPOV!!! Can wait to see what happens when he finally talks to her!!
Date: 26 Apr 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Glad he came to his senses.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Love it. T got what she deserved
Date: 26 Apr 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
Loved it! Hope she's gone for good but somehow I doubt it ! Loved the different languages !
Date: 26 Apr 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
So glad the wench is gone!! But is she gonna stalk him or something? Loved that Esme smacked her!
I want the next chapter NOW! I hate waiting!! Lol
Author's Response:
Um Hello I'm deleting pics off my comp so that the tech guys wont see them tomorrow LOL, almost done and will get back to writing the next chapter
Date: 26 Apr 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper
He needed time alone to reflect....
Author's Response:
yes and can you blame the poor guy
Date: 25 Apr 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
I love this!! I posted the link on Facebook Cheatward Spot.. Since Tanya is a cheating witch it fits!! :D
I hope you come join us there. You are more than to post teasers of your fantastic story :D
Author's Response:
thank you, I will check it out, trying to get the next chaper edited today cross fingers for me
Date: 24 Apr 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
Great chapter!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
Can't wait for the crazy to happen.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
Looking forward to some Edward and Tanya action. How will he kick her to the curb is my most pressing question. I'm not particularly fond of this chapter, mostly becasue its a filler. But overall I understand the need for it.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
So is the blond bimbo Tanya
Date: 22 Apr 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
loving this, can not wait to read more
Date: 22 Apr 2016 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
I really hope he kicks her to the curb after he sees her in the video! We know Em will not hide a video like that from his closest buddies!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Love the story already
Date: 22 Apr 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
LOVE IT! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
I really hate Tanya! Poor Edward!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
Loved it!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Loved it! Poor. Edward! Tanya is a bitch!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Loved it!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
sprinkleofpixiemacic - I like, she's agreat friend, but don't let her burn the band-t-shirts. It's good to see Bella's awesome cupcakes get the attention they deserve.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
If Edward needs a breathing body next to him when he's having a nightmare he should get a dog. Dogs are faithful, don't request thousand-dollar-dresses and contrary to Tanya are cuddly. What more incentive does Edward need to get rid of the cheater? Cheers to Rosalie and Esme for everything they did for Edward.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
No you aren't going to make us wait! Ahhh.
Regardless I look forward to more... This is a very fun story.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
No, my Sundays are not a day of rest. Only mine usually just meaning working and missing church. Looking forward to hearing about Edward.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
Its a good life.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
There must be some other guy Bella can meet. Let Ed stay with that cheating big boobed woman.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass
I enjoyed it!
Nice touch giving an insight on the towns.
The only complaint I have is that I want the next chapter like right now lol
Date: 18 Apr 2016 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Edward better get rid of Herod Esme and Rose will beat him.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
oh bummer have to wait lol
Date: 15 Apr 2016 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Yes!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Can wait to see what's next
Date: 13 Apr 2016 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Really liking this x
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Just started reading it and I love it, amazing thanks so much cheers lou
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Cant wait to hear the next chapter.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
Fake Bimbo Barbie could she be Tanya? Cheating on the Ward??
I am hoping I am not making a mistake reading this before it is complete, after reading all those appologies.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
well I wonder if he does dump her? I am not so sure.