Date: 16 Sep 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not sure if this is what you think Bella should have done, but it's horrible. Considering each of the Cullen's past and how they became a vampire, I really don't see Bella cutting her wrist to force the change as being all that welcomed. Furthermore, if Edward didn't want Bella (Like Bella thought) then he shouldn't be placed in a situation where he's forced to choose between life or death for Bella. All around, her actions in this story were incredibly stupid, but they were in every Book after Twilight as well.
Author's Response: This is in no way my vision of what Bella should have done. However after months of almost catatonic depression, rescuing Edward, and then believing he STILL didn't want her, I would have thought that it was a possibility. After all Bella seems to be a bit of a drama queen in a lot of the origional stories, and I would not have put it past her to either try and force the issue or even genuinely believe she (and he) would be better off if she was no longer around. Thanks for taking the time to let me know how you view the story and I hope you enjoy my others more.
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes indeed, you silly girl, he wants you desperately! (no pun intended!) The aftermath of Bella's dramatic attempt would make for an interesting story, especially since Charlie watched it happen right before his eyes! Just sayin'!
Author's Response: I know! When I started it I fully intended it to be a full fic but dried up... it's been sat on my machine in this form for 3 years so I decided to publish as was. Thanks for reviewing.