[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2019 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
Best Story Everrr
Date: 03 Oct 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it! Poor Rosalie!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Uh-oh! Poor Bella!
Date: 25 Apr 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great work, keep it up,really a good story.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this already!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
Looking forward to u finishing the sequel. I usually wait until a story is finished before I start reading-I'm too impatient...+ I've been burned a few times with good stories not being finished. :(
Looking forward to u finishing ur "Sin" story also.
:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm confused...when does this story take place? I can't tell. Based on the slang used & other settings, I'd say in the 1920s or so, but with the cars & phone, I'm not sure.
Intrigue is keeping me on my toes trying to keep everything straight!! :)
Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it
Date: 31 Dec 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is an absolutely amazing story line! However, you should really have someone edit it for you as it is filled with grammar errors. You can tell that English isn't your first language. This is not a criticism by any means (the story is amazing) but it's hard to read with the errors. My advice to you is to find someone to edit this story :)
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
très difficile à lire... il n'y a pas de paragraphe!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
French... Google Translate... merci pour les explications, je ne comprenais pas.
Date: 31 Aug 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
awww such a sweet chapter....sequel! yay
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
cute chapter
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yeah! They are finally married.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
woo hoo married finally
Date: 29 Aug 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
aww so sad its over for now but i cant wait foe th next one :)
Date: 29 Aug 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
it was beautiful. i listened to the song as she sang it!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
They deserve to be happy.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
their in italy and all is well update soon
Date: 08 Aug 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
cute chapter !
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
renee got off easy. hope she gets a back breaking job in a sweatshop or something.
Date: 07 Aug 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
THIS WAS FREAKING AWEEESOME I LOOVED IT! EEEEK!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
So Bella's real parents are alive??? Johnny is going to die a painful death dont forget about Renee she should be right beside him.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
What is it with Bella why is she so interesting she is not Renee's daughter???
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
They are pissed that's for sure... Too bad there are no sharks in Italy... Maybe throw him in the aquariium in crete?? It's convinient... With their jet it's only 3 hours from Rome (through Athens of course...)
I can imagine other deaths too and more bloody but let's see what you'll come up with! I can't wait!
On second thought. She will be able to get pregnant wont she?
Loved it!
xx
Marianne
Date: 25 Jul 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
That is low to go after them at a wake but they knew they would all be there. Who was the women in the fur???
Date: 25 Jul 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 22
If I was Bella I would be happy that Renee was not my mother, but I know she is sad about Charlie. I know that his promise to Bella is the only thing keeping Edward from killing him.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
omg, that is some serious new information! Bella's the daughter to the fucking top fucking mob boss !! jesus!
I hope they wack johnny and renee soon!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
im glad that the yare got to get him back and what a turn of events in bellas life
Date: 24 Jul 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow so the truth is out...how will all of this change edward and bella?update soon
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow Renee has a lot to answer for as well as marizano
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
hmmm Maranzano is in deep shite alright. Renee the skank needs to be snuffed I think
Date: 22 Jul 2011 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
why Bella's so important
Date: 21 Jul 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh now this is getting even moooore interesting. gah. i just love how brave bella is.
I hope Maranzano will be killed soon or worse lmao.
Renee is a bitch, off her too lmao
Date: 21 Jul 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
Okay, now I want to know who this is and why Bella's so important...again. What is Renee's deal and who the heck is the mystery woman. Okay I am sure you will tell us in due time, but I really want to know now! PLEASE!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
MArazano is in deep shit indeed!!! I wonder how the Volturi are connected with bella...
Date: 21 Jul 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
well thats intresting
Date: 21 Jul 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
a lot of stuff is about to go down!I just know it wow so who is bella related to?update soon
Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope Edward has something up his sleeve to get off.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
oh no not good :( enjoying your story
Date: 12 Jul 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh shit he got caught!wow tha sucks for them wonder how they are going to get them out of this?who was the women?update soon
Date: 12 Jul 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
excited to see what happens next chapter
Date: 12 Jul 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
shit with edward and his guys locked up, Bella and the other women have no protection what so ever, mostly Bella.
This was a huge set up.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
oohhhh some cop really wants to die. wonder who the woman was.
Date: 24 Jun 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
well i cant wait till the next chatper
Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
How very sad someone needs to kill Johnny and Renee just for fun.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh johnny....you really wanna die huh.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
omg!elizabeth is dead :'( thats so sad. jack is devistated as is edward an bella. and it started out as such a happy chapter update soon
Date: 23 Jun 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am getting so exciting because I wanna learn every fucking detail!
I am so sorry for Elizabeth!
is Seth gay? If not I would like seeing him with Rose... Emmet is such an asshole right now...
:)
xx
Marianne
Date: 30 May 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
Alot going on what was Renee doing???? Edward knows they are being watched????
Date: 19 May 2011 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to start reading!!
Date: 13 May 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh good thing edward saw them!he can't get caught theres no way update soon
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can I love me some good Conward you write him well see you next time....
Date: 12 May 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow. So much going on in this chapter. I really like this story and I am glad you updated. So Renee is going to Johnny now.... oh man. Can't wait for the wedding
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am glad they found out it was a set-op. Renee really is a piece of work.
Date: 11 May 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
Renee is a sad women. She will never find happiness. Edward needs to take James out.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
this is a interesting story! Kinda reminds me of the roaring twenties sort of!
Date: 11 May 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Should have shot Renee while he had the chance....bitch
Date: 10 May 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
well im excited to see what happens next chapter
Date: 10 May 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Good thing he saw them. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
So Bella's mom is with Johnny and trying to help him get her she is a twisted bitch. Emmett is lucky she still has his balls. Rose set him straight what are they going to do about the baby????
Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am happy for Bella and Edwqrd. It is about time Rosalie put Emmett in his place. I hope they take care of this baby.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! I cn't start to tell you how much!!
I think Emmet is in trouble!!! ***note the sarcasm****
lol
xoxo
marianne
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter. I am glad Rose went back to her self. Em deserved what he got.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
well all good things may come crashing down....glad rose and emmet are ok..and that rose kicked his ass into shape update soon
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Rosalie sure put Emmett in his place. Can't believe it's bellas mom that is against her.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
Awesome chapter! Cant wait for more!
Date: 27 Mar 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
I LOVE THE STORY BUT I'M NOT SO KEEN ON THE SONGS
Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
They talked so goofy back then. Glad Rose set Em straight.