Date: 07 Sep 2016 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 93
Some much needed time alone.
Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 93
You did a beautiful job conveying their love. I loved it!
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 93
That was perfect so happy they where able to conect in every way.
Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 93
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 93
Great chapter!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 93
wonderful date. Glad she is being so patient with him.
Date: 06 Sep 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 93
Beautiful. Heartbreaking, but hopeful. Love your description of everything from the colors of their clothing, to the colors of the sunset, to their gentle and passionate lovemaking. Well done!
Date: 05 Sep 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 92
Wow great that he got into school. Trip sounds wonderful
Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 92
Loved the connection!
Date: 04 Sep 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 92
Esme is also wanted for international human trafficking, she will probably be tried by other countries as well. Unless they are all in agreement with a death sentencing.
Will Rose maintain the Washington location while Isabella follows Edward to Stanford?
How did Edward get a full ride to study if he is wealthy?
Date: 03 Sep 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 92
Tbh, I'm torn on Esme, life means she can suffer, suffer from loneliness, prison abuse that goes with others finding out how awful her crimes were (studies show that human traffickers, rapists, etc. receive the worst abuse of all other prisoners), suffer from having to face herself, suffer from many many things, but life means that people of Seattle would have to pay to keep her. Their taxes would go to keeping someone so awful and vile alive, or even protected from other inmates if the abuse became too bad, and even worse she can plot escape and probably succeed and reek havoc once again. Where do you draw the line on who deserves to die and who doesn't? At what point is deciding the plans of the cosmos okay? In the end weighing all the pros and cons of each option the death sentence is probably best for all the innocent that are or would become involved, including giving peace of mind to her victims.
Anyways, great chapter! I'm proud of Edward.
Date: 03 Sep 2016 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 92
I think either sentence is going too easy on that heinous bitch; she deserves torture and torment! But of course i follow wherever you lead my deaf😆
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 92
It feels a bit like the cowards way out, how Edward told Bella about Stanford... don't get me wrong, I don't begrudge him that success or even applying to these awesome colleges, but in a good/strong relationship these things are talked about before:(
Though I know how difficult and unique their situation is, I'm still feeling a bit disappointed that he didn't talked to her about these choices first - he knew he had her back up. So why the secrecy?!
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 92
A vacation in paradise is exactly what the doctor ordered. Edward's acceptance into Stanford was something he needs to move on to be the person he was meant to be.
Sherry
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 91
This was a nice surprise, though sadly a bit late...
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 91
Interesting twist Charlie presented. Edward won't know what to do with himself. Though Charlie should've said something once he realized who Edward was.
Sherry
Date: 03 Sep 2016 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 92
please don
please don't rush the ending
Date: 03 Sep 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 92
That was a huge break through for them. Im so excited for there life together.
Date: 03 Sep 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 91
Holy cow. What a bombshell
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 92
I hope she gets life instead of the death penalty. That will put her in gen pop whereas the death penalty keeps her isolated from other prisoners. I want her to get raped and murdered in prison, as slowly as possible....am I sadistic? maybe, but she needs to feel what Edward and Jasper felt. I'm so glad our lovely couple is having a good time in Hawaii. Too bad it is half over already!
Date: 31 Aug 2016 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 90
I'd really like to read an outtake on what happened to Esme.
Truly surprised Charlie showed up.
Sherry
Date: 31 Aug 2016 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 91
I think Charlie needs to just stay away. He could have prevented all of Edward's pain.
Date: 30 Aug 2016 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 91
I think Charlie had a lot of soul serching to do and didnt like what he was finding that is what took him so long. He loves his little girl. What a bomb shell Edward is a billonair WOW
Date: 30 Aug 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 91
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 30 Aug 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 91
Goidy! I don't care how badly Charlie felt, he'said had plenty of time to pass this information along to Edward rather than waiting until niw. I think I would be annoyed with him too. Great job on this story , by the way !
Date: 30 Aug 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 91
Wow. Wish Charlie had known about Edward Sr. death sof Edward would not have had to relay on Esme.
Date: 29 Aug 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 91
That was unexpected.
Charlie has a lot to account for and a bigger story to explain regarding Edward Sr.
Edward needs to aid Bella in keeping her father close. He is all she has from an immediate family perspective.
I love Rosalie's fierce protective stance of Bella.
Did Carlisle have any knowledge of the silent investment partner?
Will Edward give his mother any of the fortune or at least be the family keeper of the fortune?
Date: 29 Aug 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 91
This is a shock! Edward's dad and Charlie were business partners? It's a very clever plot point and comes seemingly out of the blue. It gives Edward and Bella equal footing, financially, and wraps up that part of the story nicely. To say I think Charlie should have revealed this long ago is stating it mildly. He didn't like Edward when he first met him, so this doesn't fit too well with that. Sorry. My opinion. I look forward to their vacation and the down time it will bring. Thanks!
Date: 26 Aug 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 90
First off, NO STORY UPDATE ALERTS so sorry it's late.
Esme had to be found guilty but I'm hoping the reason Charlie was MIA was that he was finding more victims, etc to really condemn Esme!
Date: 25 Aug 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 90
DEATH BY STONING!!! or whips! or the chinese thousand cuts thing or whatever its called!
Date: 25 Aug 2016 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 90
Bella should punch Charlie right in the face. Thank God for a smart jury and judge.
Date: 24 Aug 2016 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 90
About damn time he returned! Kiss and make up? I hope not!
Date: 24 Aug 2016 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 90
Charlie better be a good dad or I will have to kick his ass lol. Death penalty but a lot of abuse before.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 90
I loved the judge! I think he will give Esme the death penalty based off his comments to her after the verdict. I was actually waiting for her to react after the verdict was read.
I figured it was Charlie that would be making an appearance, but I'm curious as to why he chose to show up at the courthouse and not somewhere less public.
As always, I'm left anxiously awaiting more! I think you have an amazing gift drawing your readers into your stories. I have loved all of your stories and still go back and reread some of them.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 90
Maybe someone on the inside will take care if Esme so the tax payers of Seattle won't have to endure the cost of her incarceration?
Of course Charlie shows up on the day of Esme's verdict. He's looking for publicity to clean up the Swan name after is was dragged through the mud during the trial.
How is Jasper doing?
Date: 23 Aug 2016 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 90
Let Charlie have his say and then disappear.... he does not deserve to be in their lives, or at least he has some major bonding to do and excuses to make! Let's hear what he has to say, but does he really have to appear at court for this? Maybe he has heard Edward's testimony and now really believes him...
As for Esme, the judge should decide on the correct punishment. Although I am no fried of death sentence, it probably is the only reasonable thing in this case since otherway she would weasel her way in jail and build up new alliances there...
Date: 23 Aug 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 90
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 90
Great chapter. I am excited to see what happens next.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 90
Too bad if she got a shiv in prison while waiting for the sentence to be decided. Either was she needs the death penalty.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 90
Well, it seems that Edward's body is starting to recover more. Glad he is starting to respond sexual. I think the judge will give Esme the maximum. I hope to goodness that Charlie does not make a scene in front of the reporters.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 90
I'm betting Esme will be killed I prison
Date: 22 Aug 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 90
I hope the judge goes for the death penalty. She deserves it. Looks like she's already getting beat up in jail while on trial. Good! WTH does Charlie Swan want? To heap more insults on Edward? To apologize for his behavior? We'll see, I guess. I'm not too fond of him right now. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 22 Aug 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 90
I'm usually for the death penalty, but in her case I think she should rot in jail for the rest of her life..... If her appearance in court today is any indicaiton, she'll be very popular in prison.
Charlie...... hmmm Wonder what the dickhead is going to say
Date: 21 Aug 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 89
Im glad that meting Mr. Molina did give Edward a bit of his self esteem back, that was a very good surprise at a cemetery; )
Date: 21 Aug 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 89
Edward needed to hear what Jose said.
Sherry
Date: 21 Aug 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 88
Bitchme is going down.
Sherry
Date: 21 Aug 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 87
Looking forward to Edward and Bella getting past the trial.
Sherry
Date: 21 Aug 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 86
Poor Edward, no one can blame him for not wanting anyone to know what Esme did to him.
Sherry
Date: 21 Aug 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 89
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 21 Aug 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 89
Is Charlie actually going to grow up and be a real man? I hope Lassiter gets fined way more than the $10,000! All he managed to do is make his client look even worse. Can't wait to see the jury say 'guilty' on all counts.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 89
Ooh I so love this journrney they are on , can`t wait for the verdict , Cheers Lou
Date: 20 Aug 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 89
I hope Lassiter continues to run his mouth and the judge moves to have him disbarred. excellent chapter.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 89
Lassiter should spend some time in prison himself, since he doesn't believe men can be raped. I'm sure it would be a useful education for his bigoted ignorance.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 89
The defense attorney needs the book thrown at him. The heaviest fines and longest possible sentence for his behavior. Possibly even disbarred from further practice.
Will Mr. Molina help Edward find a way to complete his education?
Date: 20 Aug 2016 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 89
Someone needs to butt fuck that Harold and call him a whore I dont like him at all. I am very proud of Edward he is moving on with life.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 89
Lawyers like that are the scum of the earth and should be banned. Glad he went to say goodbye to his dad
Date: 20 Aug 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 89
Yay! So happy!
I think that lassiter prick probably had some.back door dealings with esme on the side! What a prick!
Date: 20 Aug 2016 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 89
Way to go Edward. Your dad would be proud.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 89
There are actually witnesses for the defense? I can't believe anyone would stand up for her and her minions.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 89
She'll be convicted, no doubt. Did the jury see any pictures of Edward's injuries? Love Mr. Molina. Maybe he can help Edward find a career? Who is coming back? Jasper?
Date: 20 Aug 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 89
Please don't have douche canoe Charlie come back. Or does there have to be an a-hole in every chapter like Harold?
Date: 18 Aug 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 88
I think Edward needed the breakdown to get strong again for the trial. He had to release the pent up stress and self hate. He will put her away.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 88
I hope Edward will be strong enough to handle all the questions.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 88
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 16 Aug 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 88
Looks like Edwards time on the stand is only needed to put the last nail into Esme's coffin as her lawyer only pisses the judge off; )
Date: 16 Aug 2016 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 88
I can't wait!!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 88
OMG!!! I can't wait for Friday and Edward's testimony!! Esme's attorney seems like a real slime ball! She's probably having some sort of sexual relationship with him. LOL.
I've said it before and I'll say it again, this story is AWESOME!!! I've read a lot of fan fic and I love all of your stories. I've reread several of them and will continue to do so in between chapters. Thank you for your time and devotion to writing and sharing your stories!
Virginia aka Twi-sessed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 88
Sometimes I really hate lawyers.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 87
Glad you are showing E's struggle and him not just being ok after all he's been through
Date: 16 Aug 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 88
thank you for the update...Esme is going to die...lol...she deserves much more..are there other victims? will they come forth? until you post again
Date: 16 Aug 2016 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 88
I cant wait for Edward to take that bitch down.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 88
YAY YAY YAY!! Esme going down!
It's great that Edward gained back his inner strength and that he's going to show Esme that she did not destroy him.
Bella did a good job and the questions were not too hard I think - but let's see how Edward's testimony will be...
Date: 16 Aug 2016 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 88
Go Edward Go !!!!!!! Take that bitch down!!!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 88
OMG, OMG, OMG. Can't wait to read Edward's testimony! 😱 😀
Date: 16 Aug 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 88
OMG! I can't wait! ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 88
Please update soon. I want to see Bitchme gobdown
Date: 15 Aug 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 88
Was Edward able to view Bella's testimony via live feed camera in another room?
Esme's lawyer seems inept for the high profile level of this case.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 88
Atta boy!
Date: 15 Aug 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 88
Bella was a good witness! Esme's dick of an attorney should know better than to ask those kinds of questions. Guess he just wanted the jury to hear him ask them....
Date: 14 Aug 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 87
The verdict better be guilty as fuck. A person can only stay strong for so long and Edward hit his point of no return my heart just bleeds for him.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 87
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 14 Aug 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 87
I will be glad when they get this Testifing over with and then Edward can finally move on!!! I hope they find her guilty of all counts and she never gets out of prison. Then maybe someone can do bad things to her while she is there!! lol Fingers crossed!!
Date: 13 Aug 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 87
The the cross examination n behalf of Esme attempt to do emotional harm to Edward and Jasper? To get them to lash out and act violent? Or is belittling them still the method used to undermine their trauma?
Date: 13 Aug 2016 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 87
better be guilty
Date: 13 Aug 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 87
I'm glad Edward got to feel better after his break down, it's very good Bella did agree to stay at Jared 's house over the trial; )
Hm... the verdict. I'm not a too big fan of the death penalty, though I think this Esme does deserve to be grilled on the chair!
Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 87
She will be found quilty on all counts. Hopefully she will get the death penalty.