Date: 23 Jul 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 81
Perfect chapter
Date: 23 Jul 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 81
Christmas in july rocks!
Date: 23 Jul 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 81
Awww finally maybe Edward can start healing!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 80
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 21 Jul 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 80
I really don't blame Edward. His mother was so weak. She can't expect him to just forget the horror she caused by her weakness. She thinks of him as her sweet boy. He is a man now and he is working on putting his life back together.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 80
This is really one of the best and most original Carlisle's I have read! Love this story ! Not sure if Charlie can redeem himself after the way he has treated Bella while she was so injured, but that is just my opinion . Keep up the great work !
Date: 20 Jul 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 80
I love that Carlisle called Edward out on his behavior.
Sherry
Date: 20 Jul 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 80
It is a working process
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 80
Freaking awesome
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 79
Wow. Very good
Date: 20 Jul 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 78
Wow great chapter
Date: 19 Jul 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 80
I loved how Carlisle put Edward in his place by just calling him out on his being 'a punk' - that was a very good thing to do; )
Date: 19 Jul 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 80
I still side with Edward re: his mother. She is weak, and failed him in every way.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 80
Will Charlie show up for Christmas and the trial?
Carlisle speaks fondly of Elizabeth. Is there something starting between those two?
Edward's plate is piled high with issues; let's hope celebrating Christmas will less his stress somewhat and being strengthening his strained relationships.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 80
This is great! :)
Date: 19 Jul 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 80
Carlisle is the best I love how he treats Edward like a son with unconditional love. I think that is the turning point for Edward with his mom he needed to be set straight.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 80
Glad he has Carlisle to talk too. I do think he's entitled to some anger. The grand jury just ended. Ores not been long.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 80
Good for Carlisle! Love how he's not coddling Edward and is calling him out on his shit! Moms always get blamed for their kids' troubles. Always. I hope he finds the strength to forgive her soon.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 80
I hope that talk helped him but I know he has a long way to go
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 80
I think Charlie should meet Elizabeth. She's strong enough, now, to stand up for her son. I think she would rip Charlie apart, and set his arrogant ass straight. Part of me wants to see him redeem himself, and part of me says no! Let him stay away with his carousing and perfect life, to die alone, without the benefit of relationship with his beautiful daughter. But that's throwing out the baby with the bath water, just like it would be if Edward chose to alienate his mother. *sigh*
Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 79
In a strange way, Edward and his mother are making progress. Their next steps will be critical in the advancement of their relationship towards a future which includes each other.
Edward is finally able to grieve the great losses he has suffered in his whirlwind existence.
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 79
The Jared part is really cool. Can't blame E for being pissed at his mom. Will take a long time and therapy to get over.
Date: 17 Jul 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 79
Poor Edward. One step forward, three steps backward.
Sherry
Date: 16 Jul 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 79
I know Edward has been hurt beond repair!! He is going to have to see a theripest or somehthing because as soon as he starts making procgress he gets angry with everyone and falls apart. It is going to take him time and he needs to find somewhere to aim that anger instead of taking it out on his friends and family.
Date: 16 Jul 2016 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 79
Poor Edward I hope the letter helps in the long run but as for his mother I think that will take a very long time to fix that relationship update soon
Date: 16 Jul 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 79
My heart goes out to Edward.
Date: 16 Jul 2016 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 79
Edward has to let go of his anger, you can't change the past only the future
Date: 16 Jul 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 79
I think they do need to go to family counselling
Date: 16 Jul 2016 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 79
forgive your mother, shes alive
Date: 16 Jul 2016 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 79
Edward definitely needs some counseling with his mom to help work through the anger and resentment he's feeling. He's justified in his feelings. And Carmen is right, everyone grieves in their own way. I think Jared's death is going to be doubly hard on Edward since he never grieved for his dad. Bless Carlisle for always being there for Edward. Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 16 Jul 2016 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 79
He has so much to get over and understand forgiving is a hard thing to do sometimes
Date: 16 Jul 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 79
Sometimes, circumstances cause such damage that we never fully heal from. Edeard and Elizabeth have love for each other, but the pain that her inability to cope causes for him scarred him. It was the unfortunate, because it WAS avoidable, but her grief clouded her judgement. She should have gotten herself into counseling so that she could be a parent for her son...but hindsight is 20/20. What they need in order to move forward is to let go of what's gone, and build a new relationship.
Date: 16 Jul 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 79
Maybe he could donate the money in Jared's name or start a foundation for a worthy cause.
Date: 16 Jul 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 79
Edward needs to find a way to move past his hurt and resentment of his mother or this will stunt his entire life. I know about these things....Great chapter. Very moving.
Date: 16 Jul 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 79
This chapter was amazing!! I could feel the depth of emotion in every word. Have I tld you lately that i love you? XOXO
Date: 13 Jul 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 78
I can't wait to see what Jared left Edward. He needs something positive and that shows Jared loved him. Here's his fresh start without relying on Bella to pay for things!!
Date: 12 Jul 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 78
It's so bitter that Jared did, though I have no doubt Carlisle will be able - and wanted - to fill the space he left in Edwards heart...
I'm glad Bella offered to take charge for the furneral and am sure Edward will feel better about it, too.
What did everything mean? I'm sure I'm having a good guess, that only shows even more how deeply Jared cared for Edward....
Date: 12 Jul 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 77
Loosing Jared was a bit of a shock, I really hope it was a natural cause, because I doubt it will lead back to Esme otherwise :(
Damn the talk Edward gas had with Jasper really did impress me. I'm glad he could help his friend to start see reason about his own situation...
Date: 12 Jul 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 78
I am very interested in finding out what 'everything ' entails!! Edward has been through so much. Too much. He needs some peace and quiet. He needs to be surrounded by those who love him and to be able to leave the past in the past.
*huggles*
Date: 12 Jul 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 78
Even from the grave Jared is still looking out for Edward's best interest.
Sherry
Date: 12 Jul 2016 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 78
thsnk God for angels they are looking over Edward
Date: 12 Jul 2016 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 78
My heart just hurts for them all. Jared knew what was going to happen and wanted to make sure he could still take care of Edward.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 78
Carlisle had stepped into Jared's role when he pretended to be the physician that stitched up Edward after his horrible beating.
The loss of another father figure is crippling Edward's emotional recovery.
This legal document from Jared stating Edward is the sole beneficiary of his estate reinforces the familial the the two men built over the years.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 78
Wow poor Edward he doesn't need anymore pain right now but maybe he got a little something to high ten him up and I am not talking abou money but maybe a letter
Date: 12 Jul 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 78
Poor Jared. Glad E will have somthing to make him feel more stable in his relationship with Bella...ie her paying for everything and him feeling worthless.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 78
I felt like if Jared had anything that he would leave it to Edward. Can't wait to find out what it is.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 78
All this sadness is overshadowing everything. He's been down so long, he can't see that there is anywhere else for him to go. We need some hope in this story soon. I need it. Maybe what Jared left to Edward will be that hope for him.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 78
Jared, always looking out for Edward.
Date: 10 Jul 2016 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 77
I'm having a hard time pitcureing Jasper's hands, I dont understand why he can't use them. Do you have a picture of what you had in mind when you were writing?
Date: 09 Jul 2016 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 77
Glad Edward and Jasper had time to bond. poor Jared
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 77
Jasper made some serious strides. He's right, though, Alice needs to be a little bit less co-dependent with him. She puts on the kid gloves and doesn't put any pressure on him to grow. He IS capable of healing, and forging a new life. It is a matter of mind set and choice. Alice needs to let go her need to baby him.
The loss of Jared is horrible. Hopefully, they find some family to care.
*huggles*
Date: 09 Jul 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 77
The talk between Edward and Jasper was awesome! Hopefully Jasper can begin the healing now. I'm proud of Edward for talking to him and helping him. Poor Jared and poor Edward! That was such a shock for Edward, but hopefully they can come up with something nice to do in his memory. Yay, Bitchme was indicted (as if there was any doubt about that)!
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 77
There is a lot of growing and healing and still so much sadness.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 77
I am so sad that Jared died. I hate that Edward did not get to talk to Jared and let him know how much he ment to Edward.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 77
Another setback for Edward. But, he found a way to encourage Jasper to push forward in his struggle to emotionally heal. Maybe Jasper and Alice should move closer to Bella and Edward? They can support, encourage, and fight together in the battle of regaining control over their lives after Esme.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 77
Poor Jared. I hope Edward and Jasper can both get the help they need
Date: 08 Jul 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 77
Wow poor Jared but he got to see Edward become free at least now how long will Esme get
Date: 08 Jul 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 77
Not Jared!!!! I was so looking forward to him and Edward building their friendship more. Edward was able to help Jasper, he should consider being a therapist for those type of victims. I can hardly wait until Edward and Bella will be able to move forward in their lives together. Edward is right, its been one thing or another for so long, no wonder he feels he can't move on.
Sherry
Date: 08 Jul 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 77
Holysh*t! This is great!!! :)
Date: 08 Jul 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 77
Good news that she's indicted on all couonts! Bad news that Jared died. I hope it wasn't foul play, but if it was, that would be another count to be added to what Bitchme has already done. I feel so bad for Jasper. Maybe he and Edward, being the only 2 who really know what they went through, can help each other to heal. Jasper being able to work would help, wouldn't it? Seems like this nightmare will never end...
Date: 08 Jul 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 77
Poor Edward and Jasper.....more shit just keeps coming. I'm glad the bitch got indited, but she isn't locked away yet. A lot could go wrong.
Date: 08 Jul 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 76
thank you for the updates...well done..I can't wait for the reunion..until you post again
Date: 08 Jul 2016 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 76
I hate that there are people like that juror lady, who seem to think that a person deserves to be hurt in any way for prostitution. Being or using the services of a prostitute may be illegal, even immoral, but there is nothing deserving of rape and abuse. NOTHING.
Date: 06 Jul 2016 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 36
Noooooo i it's okay baby :(
BAD BELLA
WHY DID YOU HIT HIM!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 76
All in all I think Edward has made progress.
Sherry
Date: 02 Jul 2016 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 76
Sooooo happy they they talked and then were able to have a heavy make out session afterwards.
Date: 02 Jul 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 76
If the Grand Jury won't indict her, they need to be indicted, themselves...for corruption!! I am glad they had a chance to relax and reconnect. It is a shame that Edward had a flashback. It will take time for them to get to a place where they are really 'healed' of their brutalization. Thankfully, they have each other to walk through the process together.
*huggles*
Date: 02 Jul 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 76
Things when good with only one hick up.
Date: 01 Jul 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 76
That was beautiful but heartbreaking too I loved it
Date: 01 Jul 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 76
Glad you are showing that they both have a long way to go to be healthy and not just snap of the fingers all better.
Date: 01 Jul 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 76
This was a nice date ;)
Date: 01 Jul 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 76
This is great! :)
Date: 01 Jul 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 76
It's good to see them get back some measure of intimacy. Kissing like teenagers is fun and I miss it....Healing is coming slowly for both but they're on the right road. Can't wait to see Esme get what's coming to here, and more! I wondered about Jared and hoped they didn't kill him! Have a great holiday weekend and thanks for all the stories you give us!
also kudos on you success with your new diet!
Date: 01 Jul 2016 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 76
Is it too soon for him to think about getting another tattoo? Wouldn't the pain from the needle send him to some bad places in his mind? I heard there is supposed to be an endorphin rush but I never felt it through any of mine and I fear for his mental state.
Date: 01 Jul 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 76
The conversation about physical intimacy was poignantly timed. They need to enlighten each other to their needs and wants yet respect the current state of healing they are both experiencing.
They will make it through this exasperating time based on their mutual love and physical connection.
Date: 30 Jun 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 64
i realize this is a sad moment but...
bella was really dumb to do this on her own without
the reinforcement she could have had.
i know she wanted to help and try to get esme on
her own, but you never know with crazies, you need all
the help you can get to capture them.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 76
Thanks for the update crazy old juror
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 76
Omg!!!!! Absolutely love it! I hope Bitchme gets what she deserves. Maybe she'll get her turn in jail. Edward and Bella deserve a happily ever after. I hope Charlie comes around soon. his being an ass when Bella needs him most is just horrible. I love the Olaf pajamas. :)
Date: 28 Jun 2016 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 76
Being a witness on trial with a jury isn't fun, and this woman who dared to be evil to both Edward and Bella should think a lot more before opening her mouth again..
Date: 28 Jun 2016 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 76
Someone needs to kick that old bat for saying mean things to Bella and Edward. Love the way Edward is controling what is going on.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 76
wow, charlie is a real piece of work
Date: 28 Jun 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 76
Wow what a bitch on the jury
Date: 28 Jun 2016 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 76
I loved it that has to be hard on everyone to relive it than have someone be nasty to them about but Edward sweet sweet Edward you gotta love the guy his heart is so big
Date: 28 Jun 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 76
Thanks for the updated. Court was a bit brutal on Bella. But at least she had a wonderful surprise when she got back home.
Sherry
Date: 28 Jun 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 76
Loved Edward's surprise. That was sweet if him. Our can't believe that old bat said that about Edward and Bella.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 76
It would seem the older women has some personal bias towards the field of prostitution. How did she make the jury?
At least Liam set her straight.
Edward is very thoughtful even if physical intimacy is no longer tolerable. The Christmas decorations were a very special gift to Bella.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 76
I'm happy to have a new chapter of this story! Boo hiss to that Grand Juror who heckled Bella and Edward! She lost sight of why she was there, if I'm to be generous with her. Maybe the graphicness of what they endured from Esme will change her mind! Love the picnic. They need more romantic times like that. WTF is wrong with Charlie?