Date: 07 Jul 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
Kept seeing this as it posted I love the banner. Read this and sequel such an original idea. This fandom has so many reincarnations of Edward and Bella I loved the idea of this. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'll be real honest and tell you I really didn't care for the way you ended this!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
That is just too sad, I feel so bad for him!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
Waiting until it's too late is not really the time for full disclosure!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
I understand why he did it, but it's breaking both their hearts!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
I just knew he would do the noble thing, especially since meeting her mother!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Homesickness seems to have a hold on Bella. Loving her, I'll bet Edward lets her go back!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm not sure Bella belongs to Edward quite yet!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
There seems to be such a thing as being too much of a gentleman!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, at least they haven't rushed into anything!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
They don't seem to know how to act quite yet. Hopefully, things will become more comfortable between them soon.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
Seems the whole story hasn't yet been told. There must be other rules to this bonding.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward is about to find out what has happened, I think.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh goody, they have found each other again!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looks like Bella has made some new friends!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sounds like he's good friends with Jasper and Alice. Too bad he's alone and likely to stay that way, if he never finds his leprecaun again.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh dear, Bella is about to get in trouble, I can feel it coming!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
So, Bella was affected as much by Edward, as he was by her!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Please tell me there is hope for their future!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, that could cause difficulty for Edward ever finding his lucky charm!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Boy, that happened in the blink of an eye!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh good, Bella is an elf! I'm glad there will be magic in this story.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
See, Edward, you should always listen to your mother!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds to me as if he had a pretty great childhood.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Sweet little story. Heartbreaking ending. Can't wait to read the sequel.
Date: 31 Dec 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
How can this be marked complete?!? That wasn't a resolution at all!
Author's Response:
Look out for the sequel. Thank you! :)
Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
WHAT YOU CAN NOT END IT HERE, HER MOTHER WAS THERE. SHE COULD HAVE GOTTEN TO KNOW HER....HER FATHER WILL BE HAPPY WITH WHATS HER NAME....SO EDWARD DIES OF A BROKEN HEART SO SHE COULD GO BACK TO HER BORING LIFE..
Author's Response:
Look out for the sequel. Thank you! :)
Date: 30 Dec 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well she should have told him before you let her go
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
What? NO!! No, that didn't just happen!?! WHAT!?! :( I...I...just can't...believe that just happened.
Author's Response:
Look out for the sequel. Thank you! :)
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
You can't do that it can't be over but if it is thanks
Author's Response:
Put me on author alert. Thank you! :)
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
This is so sad.
Author's Response:
: I'm sorry! Thank you!
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
It can't be over
Author's Response:
:) Put me on author alert. Thank you!
Date: 30 Dec 2015 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
:) loved this. I hope you add to it sometime
Author's Response:
Put me on alert. There will be a sequel. Thank you!
Date: 28 Dec 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Poor poor Edward
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 28 Dec 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
So sad
Author's Response:
Awww... thank you!
Date: 28 Dec 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
Poor guy makes me want to cry
Author's Response:
I teared up myself when I read it before I posted it. LOL Thanks!
Date: 28 Dec 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
Poor Edward
Author's Response:
I know! :( Thank you!
Date: 23 Dec 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
Nooooo
Author's Response:
Sorry! :| Thank you!
Date: 23 Dec 2015 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love will find away I want to cry now
Author's Response:
Awww... that is so sweet. Thank you! :)
Date: 23 Dec 2015 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
So sad for them both
Author's Response:
It's hard for me at times. lol Thank you!
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
Grrrr! Why would she assume he understood everything? Why didn't she explain it to him ?
Author's Response:
She is young & inexperienced. Thank you! :)
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
So sad for them both.
Author's Response:
Me too & I wrote it. lol Thank you! :)
Date: 21 Dec 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
Aah him she'll come back to him!
Author's Response:
That will be answered soon. Thank you!
Date: 21 Dec 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward is an honorable man. He loves her enough to let her be free. The question is does Bella love him enough to stay. She never tried to be happy.
Author's Response:
You need to read the next chapter that I just posted. Thank you!
Date: 17 Dec 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
So sad.....
Author's Response:
: Thanks so much!
Date: 17 Dec 2015 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
she won't go
Author's Response:
I don't know... ? ;) Thank you!
Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
Why would he do that. Maybe she can stay of her own free will now?
Author's Response:
He thought it was the best thing for her? Thanks! :)
Date: 17 Dec 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
So sad but it had to be done
Author's Response:
Yes it did. Thank you.
Date: 17 Dec 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
By releasing her she has a choice to return home or stay with Edward. I beel it is like thesaying if you love something, set it free and if it returns it is ment to be!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
He loves her so he will set her free so sweet
Author's Response:
He only wants what's best for her. :) Thanks so much!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
No....don't do it as she will be unhappy leaving Edward too.
Date: 29 Nov 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so sad for her poor thing it has to break Edwards heart
Author's Response:
Awww... I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you.
Date: 11 Nov 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor man he is trying to carry on
Author's Response:
:) Thanks so much!
Date: 11 Nov 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
cute story.
i do want to read what edward is thinking. we saw that
he was obsessed in finding her for 4 years. we read about
his conversation with jasper right before the storm.
then all we get are bella pov. it would be nice to know
what all edward was doing and thinking throughout the whole
time. we were made privy to his earlier years then afterwards due
much to his mom's influence, then trying to find bella after
seeing her once. imho, it would be great to continue to give us
edward's pov since we have come to care about him through your writing.
not to say you havent done a great job, just a little bit of what i was
expecting as a reader.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. My muse jumps from Isabella to Edward. I can't make it stay with Edward even though his voice comes to me easier than hers? Thank you for reading. I truly appreciate it.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG, Love your story can not wait for more.
Author's Response:
Awww... thank you so much!
Date: 03 Nov 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
They are each others but he has to let her go??
Author's Response:
Maybe...?
Date: 30 Oct 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yum yum yummy
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 30 Oct 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
They are getting to know each other that is good but when is she going to tell him there is a way she can be set free or is she going to be able to see her dad.
Author's Response:
Will she want to be set free?
Date: 30 Oct 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
He does not want to be her master he does not want to hurt her in any way.
Author's Response:
That's true. :)
Date: 23 Oct 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
So why does Edward not want to be called master? I have my thoughts but I wonder if there the same as yours. Can't wait to find out
Author's Response:
He doesn't want to be her master, he didn't want to be in control of her. He never wanted to force her into a life of servitude to him, he only wanted to find her again & possibly get to know her.
Date: 14 Oct 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Lovely. Can't wait for next update. I love fairytales.
Author's Response:
Awesome. Thanks for the review.
Date: 14 Oct 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
You deserve all the support we can give. So sad for Bella
Date: 14 Oct 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Happy to see your post
Date: 04 Oct 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love this twist can't wait to read more post again soon👐👐👐
Author's Response:
Ahhh.. thank you so much.
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
He didnt mean to poor guy he will do the what ever it takes to set her free ??
Author's Response:
No he sure didn't. :
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward please say it is Edward
Author's Response:
*gasps* Was it?
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit did Edward save her
Author's Response:
OH no...
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
She just wants to be one of the girls
Author's Response:
That is exactly right. :)
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
It sure is! Thanks for the comments!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
It is good he has friends that care about him
Author's Response:
Yes, that he does.
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oops Shit is about to hit the fan
Author's Response:
You better take cover... ;)
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
What a tough life
Author's Response:
So very hard...
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor guy lol
Author's Response:
I know... : LOL
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
She will go back
Author's Response:
Hmmm... will she?
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Now he understands his mother better.
Author's Response:
He sure does! Thanks for the comments!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
So sweet and sad.
Author's Response:
Awww.. I appreciate that.
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
Dreaming is good and finding your dream is even better
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like a good childhood
Author's Response:
:) It was for him. Thanks for the comments!