Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
WHAT YOU CAN NOT END IT HERE, HER MOTHER WAS THERE. SHE COULD HAVE GOTTEN TO KNOW HER....HER FATHER WILL BE HAPPY WITH WHATS HER NAME....SO EDWARD DIES OF A BROKEN HEART SO SHE COULD GO BACK TO HER BORING LIFE..
Look out for the sequel. Thank you! :)
Date: 21 Dec 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward is an honorable man. He loves her enough to let her be free. The question is does Bella love him enough to stay. She never tried to be happy.
You need to read the next chapter that I just posted. Thank you!
Date: 11 Nov 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
i do want to read what edward is thinking. we saw that
he was obsessed in finding her for 4 years. we read about
his conversation with jasper right before the storm.
then all we get are bella pov. it would be nice to know
what all edward was doing and thinking throughout the whole
time. we were made privy to his earlier years then afterwards due
much to his mom's influence, then trying to find bella after
seeing her once. imho, it would be great to continue to give us
edward's pov since we have come to care about him through your writing.
not to say you havent done a great job, just a little bit of what i was
expecting as a reader.
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. My muse jumps from Isabella to Edward. I can't make it stay with Edward even though his voice comes to me easier than hers? Thank you for reading. I truly appreciate it.
Date: 23 Oct 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
So why does Edward not want to be called master? I have my thoughts but I wonder if there the same as yours. Can't wait to find out
He doesn't want to be her master, he didn't want to be in control of her. He never wanted to force her into a life of servitude to him, he only wanted to find her again & possibly get to know her.