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Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 24

Kept seeing this as it posted I love the banner. Read this and sequel such an original idea. This fandom has so many reincarnations of Edward and Bella I loved the idea of this. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'll be real honest and tell you I really didn't care for the way you ended this!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 23

That is just too sad, I feel so bad for him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 22

Waiting until it's too late is not really the time for full disclosure!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 21

I understand why he did it, but it's breaking both their hearts!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 20

I just knew he would do the noble thing, especially since meeting her mother!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

Homesickness seems to have a hold on Bella. Loving her, I'll bet Edward lets her go back!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm not sure Bella belongs to Edward quite yet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

There seems to be such a thing as being too much of a gentleman!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

Well, at least they haven't rushed into anything!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

They don't seem to know how to act quite yet. Hopefully, things will become more comfortable between them soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

Seems the whole story hasn't yet been told. There must be other rules to this bonding.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

Edward is about to find out what has happened, I think.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh goody, they have found each other again!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 11

What now?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

Looks like Bella has made some new friends!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sounds like he's good friends with Jasper and Alice. Too bad he's alone and likely to stay that way, if he never finds his leprecaun again.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh dear, Bella is about to get in trouble, I can feel it coming!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

So, Bella was affected as much by Edward, as he was by her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

Please tell me there is hope for their future!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well, that could cause difficulty for Edward ever finding his lucky charm!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

Boy, that happened in the blink of an eye!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh good, Bella is an elf! I'm glad there will be magic in this story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

See, Edward, you should always listen to your mother!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds to me as if he had a pretty great childhood.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

Sweet little story. Heartbreaking ending. Can't wait to read the sequel.

Reviewer: Crazyinagoodway Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 24

How can this be marked complete?!? That wasn't a resolution at all!



Author's Response:

Look out for the sequel. Thank you! :)     

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

WHAT YOU CAN NOT END IT HERE, HER MOTHER WAS THERE. SHE COULD HAVE GOTTEN TO KNOW HER....HER FATHER WILL BE HAPPY WITH WHATS HER NAME....SO EDWARD DIES OF A BROKEN HEART SO SHE COULD GO BACK TO HER BORING LIFE..

Author's Response:

Look out for the sequel. Thank you! :)     

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 22

Well she should have told him before you let her go

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 24

What? NO!! No, that didn't just happen!?! WHAT!?! :( I...I...just can't...believe that just happened.

Author's Response:

Look out for the sequel. Thank you! :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 24

You can't do that it can't be over but if it is thanks



Author's Response:

Put me on author alert. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 24

This is so sad. 



Author's Response:

: I'm sorry! Thank you! 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

It can't be over 



Author's Response:

:) Put me on author alert. Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

:) loved this.  I hope you add to it sometime 



Author's Response:

Put me on alert. There will be a sequel. Thank you! 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

Poor poor Edward



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 23

So sad



Author's Response:

Awww... thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

Poor guy makes me want to cry



Author's Response:

I teared up myself when I read it before I posted it. LOL Thanks! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 23

Poor Edward 



Author's Response:

I know! :( Thank you! 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

Nooooo 



Author's Response:

Sorry! :| Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 22

Love will find away I want to cry now



Author's Response:

Awww... that is so sweet. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

So sad for them both



Author's Response:

It's hard for me at times. lol Thank you! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 22

Grrrr!  Why would she assume he understood everything?  Why didn't  she  explain it to him ? 



Author's Response:

She is young & inexperienced. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

So sad for them both. 



Author's Response:

Me too & I wrote it. lol Thank you! :) 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

Aah him she'll come  back  to  him!



Author's Response:

That will be answered soon. Thank you! 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21

Edward is an honorable man. He loves her enough to let her be free. The question is does Bella love him enough to stay. She never tried to be happy. 



Author's Response:

You need to read the next chapter that I just posted. Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 21

So sad.....



Author's Response:

: Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 21

she won't go



Author's Response:

I don't know... ? ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

Why would he do that.  Maybe she can stay of her own free will now?

 



Author's Response:

He thought it was the best thing for her? Thanks! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

So sad but it had to be done



Author's Response:

Yes it did. Thank you. 

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 21

By releasing her she has a choice to return home or stay with Edward.  I beel it is like thesaying if you love something, set it free and if it returns it is ment to be!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 20

He loves her so he will set her free so sweet



Author's Response:

He only wants what's best for her. :) Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 20

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

No....don't do it as she will be unhappy leaving Edward too.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

I am so sad for her poor thing it has to break Edwards heart



Author's Response:

Awww... I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor man he is trying to carry on



Author's Response:

:) Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 18

cute story.

i do want to read what edward is thinking. we saw that

he was obsessed in finding her for 4 years. we read about

his conversation with jasper right before the storm.

then all we get are bella pov. it would be nice to know

what all edward was doing and thinking throughout the whole

time. we were made privy to his earlier years then afterwards due

much to his mom's influence, then trying to find bella after

seeing her once. imho, it would be great to continue to give us

edward's pov since we have come to care about him through your writing.

not to say you havent done a great job, just a little bit of what i was

expecting as a reader.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. My muse jumps from Isabella to Edward. I can't make it stay with Edward even though his voice comes to me easier than hers? Thank you for reading. I truly appreciate it. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG, Love your story can not wait for more.



Author's Response:

Awww... thank you so much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

They are each others but he has to let her go??



Author's Response:

Maybe...?

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

Yum yum yummy



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm glad you liked it. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 16

They are getting to know each other that is good but when is she going to tell him there is a way she can be set free or is she going to be able to see her dad.



Author's Response:

Will she want to be set free? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

He does not want to be her master he does not want to hurt her in any way.



Author's Response:

That's true. :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 15

So why does Edward not want to be called master? I have my thoughts but I wonder if there the same as yours. Can't wait to find out 



Author's Response:

He doesn't want to be her master, he didn't want to be in control of her. He never wanted to force her into a life of servitude to him, he only wanted to find her again & possibly get to know her. 

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

Lovely. Can't wait for next update. I love fairytales.

Author's Response:

Awesome. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

You deserve all the support we can give.  So sad for Bella

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 14

Happy to see your post

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 13

Love this twist can't wait to read more post again soon👐👐👐



Author's Response:

Ahhh.. thank you so much. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

He didnt mean to poor guy he will do the what ever it takes to set her free ??



Author's Response:

No he sure didn't. :

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward please say it is Edward



Author's Response:

*gasps* Was it?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh shit did Edward save her



Author's Response:

OH no... 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 10

She just wants to be one of the girls



Author's Response:

That is exactly right. :)

Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

It sure is! Thanks for the comments! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 9

It is good he has friends that care about him



Author's Response:

Yes, that he does.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oops Shit is about to hit the fan



Author's Response:

You better take cover... ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

What a tough life



Author's Response:

So very hard...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

Poor guy lol



Author's Response:

I know... : LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

She will go back



Author's Response:

Hmmm... will she? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

Now he understands his mother better.



Author's Response:

He sure does! Thanks for the comments! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

So sweet and sad.



Author's Response:

Awww.. I appreciate that.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 2

Dreaming is good and finding your dream is even better

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like a good childhood



Author's Response:

:) It was for him. Thanks for the comments! 

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