Date: 31 Jan 2018 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 42
Best ever!
I did not mind Bella acting like a brat, I understand why, she is a 17 year old girl who has had her life turned upside down and not given any explanation. I actually feel sorry for her. Edward is also quite young 24 so I suppose he could also be forgiven for his misjudgments, I do think though in some chapters he steps up and acts like the Edward we all wish we had.
very much worth a read and don’t miss the sequel!
Date: 12 Jun 2017 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
It's about time bella takes responsibility for her shitty actions. When I read that the dog had died my heart broke in to pieces :'"(
Date: 04 Jun 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 42
That was awesome! I devoured every chapter and now onto the next book.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 42
Your sequel is out and so I had to find out what happened in the first part of this series.
Bella's life was turned upsidedown.
Not one of the men in her life seemed to understand what she needed to mold herself into the perfect mob wife. A little honesty and trust would have gone a long way to smoothing over her confusion.
Kate was the ultimate pawn. She had no idea how dispensable her life was in the eyes of her husband and the Russian mob.
Now comes the part where a young married couple has to learn how to balance their emotions and build a solid foundation to ensure a successful marriage.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 42
Wow pretty dick headed move ignoring her
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 41
Him leaving after was sooo not cool. At least Garrett is dead
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 40
Glad she remembered the passage
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ugh Kate is so pathetic
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 38
Can understand her needing closure
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 37
Glad shes letting him in
Date: 30 Mar 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 42
Ok im like but to short i want more
Date: 29 Mar 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 42
I LOVE THE BLACK WEDDING DRESS AND I LOVE THE CHARECTOR BELLA WHO IS NOT LISTENING TO EDWARD AT ALL
Date: 28 Mar 2016 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 42
Such a well trained dog. Haha
Date: 28 Mar 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 41
Go Bella! Poor Bella!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it! Kate is a selfish bitch!
Date: 26 Mar 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 42
Loved every chapter. Can't wait for part 2
Date: 26 Mar 2016 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 42
I love this story!! I am excited to know that you will be back with more!!! :)=)
Date: 26 Mar 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 42
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 26 Mar 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 42
God what a great story and it is one of the best. I love MAFIA stories about Edwrd and Bella but this had some meat to it, as thy say. Please don't wait to long to start Tied To New York because I will be so lost not knowing how these two loves work everything out.
Mickie
Date: 25 Mar 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 42
Enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for sharing your talent
Date: 25 Mar 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
Feeling really bad for Bella. Yes she broke her promise but she is only 18 forced into a marriage and wasn't given a reason. Afterwards she lost everyone she cared about. Even her own sister and her fiance was behind it all. Who could blame her for wanting to be the one to end them and if not for Bella Garrett may have got away. I'm sure Edward did what he did because he's scared of losing her. He shouldn't be pushing her away when she needs him most. But you gotta love Edward too and I think he will figure that out. Very much looking forward to the sequel!!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
pas geniale Comme épilogue y aura une suite jespere
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 42
Wow they gain so much ground to just be back to right after the wedding. Of course we don't know what is going on with Edward.
You and your family have a Happy Easter.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 42
There's making a point and then there's being a dick. Edward has crossed that line too many times for him to be on a high horse about Bella's behavior. Both need to have someone hand them their asses. Bella at least has the excuse of not being properly prepared to his wife. For all the meadling Carlilse and Esme do they should have stepped in before weeks went by without them talking. I hope Bella keeps some of her fire and doesn't turn into some sort of step ford wife like Esme. Edward likes her furry side. He just needs to better control it.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 42
Happy Easter! and Please write fast : ) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
Does Bella not realize that she could have died during that shootout? But Edward is wrong for ignoring her. Can't wait for the next story.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 42
They are on bad terms!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 41
Elle mérite bien sa fessée !
Date: 25 Mar 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 42
I can understand Edward’s anger to a certain degree. He loves her, but it is impossible for her to keep her promises to him even to save her own life. If I were in his position. I would be scared to death of getting more attached to someone that I might lose. Although I get why Bella did what she did, she could have died. He’s running scared because and fears that he will lose her because she is ruled by her emotions, and that is a death sentence in that business. She ran out in the middle of a gunfight with zero regard for her safety. How do you trust someone fully who you know will behave wrecklessly? Regardless of how he feels, he will need to find a better way to deal with these situations. I get needing to calm down, but he's barely spoken to her in weeks. That is not okay. They both have growing up to do. Great story.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 42
Loved reading this story looking forward to the new one. Happy Easter
Date: 25 Mar 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 42
loved it all. Good work, can't wait for the next one!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 41
Edward is probably more scared than mad. He was probably terrified that she was going to get killed. I don't blame him I would have been too. She deserves more than that spanking.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 42
Real good can't wait for next part
Date: 25 Mar 2016 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 42
Wow! They went from being so close to barely talking. I can understand Bella getting caught up in things and I can understand Edward being so upset. Can't wait for Tied to New York! Hope you and your family have a Happy Easter!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 42
:) Loved this. Looking forward to the next one
Date: 25 Mar 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 42
Edward was just so afraid he would lose her that he is cutting her out of everything not the best idea for him. I cant wait for more. Happy Easter!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 42
Cant wait for the next story!!! This one was so good!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 42
can't wait for the sequel
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 41
He knew she was going to do something she could not help herself
Date: 25 Mar 2016 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 41
This marriage is going to be fun.
Happy Easter.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 40
These two have come such a long way. I'm so glad. I can't wait to see them tackle New York together.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 41
I feel bad for Bella, she was caught up in the moment. Edward treated her like a child. I still LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 41
I really don't know what Edward's problem is. If he didn't want Bella involved in this side of his world. He should have left her at home. Not only did she get her sister to reveal her plan so they weren't ambushed. She's the one who saved all of their asses by remembering the hidden room and escape route. Of all people in life who should have understood why Bella reacted the way she did, it should be Edward. So instead of being grateful for her help and that they managed to survive he punishes her. He needs a swift kick to the nuts. I know he was most likely scared, but what a shitty way to show it.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 40
Looks like taking Bella has been valuable to them all. One would hope they would appreciate her efforts.
Date: 24 Mar 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 41
:) Happy Easter to you
Date: 24 Mar 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 41
WOW!!! I am so excited that you are writing more!!!!!! :)=)
Date: 24 Mar 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 40
OMG! I LOVE THIS! :)
Date: 24 Mar 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 41
I thought it might turn into something kinky but i guess he was really really mad!
Date: 24 Mar 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 40
So far their marriage is holding up even through all the CRAP! Haha
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 41
well he did wern her lol great ch's