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Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

Do you still have this story I want to read it but it says it’s temporary off line

Author's Response:

Thanks for your interest in my story. I'm sorry... I haven't had the time (RL has been crazy) to repost it here. I promise I'll try to get it back up as soon as possible!

In the meantime, you can read it on fanfiction.net at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11507600 (same author name, same story title).

 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Shocking start!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:35 AM Title: Epilogue

Really, really enjoyed this story.  Very interesting storyline with even more interesting characters.  It was fun trying tp keep up with all the twists, turns, and surprises.  Very definitely worth a second read in the future.

Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 25

Very interesting and intense.

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 1:50 AM Title: Epilogue

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 6:40 AM Title: Epilogue

good

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

Awesome



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for taking the time to leave reviews. )

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well I ma interested

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 10:08 PM Title: Epilogue

It was great!

Author's Response:

Thanks! XD

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 10:46 AM Title: Epilogue

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the rating! :) Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 6:19 PM Title: Epilogue

Nice interlude. Thank you.



Author's Response:

You are most welcome and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 6:07 PM Title: Epilogue

sweet ending.  TY for writing and sharing.

ty



Author's Response:

You are most welcome and thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 64

will there be another?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

a bit far fetched for high school

Reviewer: LadyLetters Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 64

Just binge read the last ten chapters after falling behind with this story.

How you have managed to keep such a large cast of characters and different POV's in place I will never know.

The plot was pacy, the romance convincing and there were enough funny moments to break the tension. I really enjoyed the whole thing.

Bravo! Looking forward to the hinted at new story...



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you so much for the very kind words and I'm delighted you enjoyed the story and are looking forward to a sequel. ;) Your review made me happy. :D

Reviewer: midnite serenade Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

I haven't been on TWCS in ages. Not sure why I popped in, but I'm glad I found this fic. I'm loving the storyline so far and appreciate that it's so well written.

Rondell



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words, Rondell, and I hope you continue to enjoy this story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved the story. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yay!!!  I'm so excited!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much  for your kind words!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 64

Thanks for writing and sharing

ty



Author's Response:

Awww, thank YOU for all the lovely reviews. <3

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 63

Glad B was able to help him figure it out.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 62

awww for the ily's

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 61

FINALLY James is dead.  LOl for Alice shutting Marcus down

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 60

ugh Someone take James out already. Jeez

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 59

ack  you are wratching up the suspense.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 58

Hope E or B find a way to reverse the oxygen isue onto Aro.  Poor Em

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 57

oh no.  Poor Em.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 56

Go Bella.  Smart girl

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 64

I really hope you write a sequel. I so didn't want their story to end! Looking forward to your next story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much and we are working on it now! :)

Reviewer: grneyedgrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 64

Awesome! Love that you've left it open for more. 



Author's Response:

glad you liked it!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 64

good



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 64

Happy ending! Yeah!



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 64

:)  loved this story.  I hope there will be a sequel 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all your awesome reviews and ratings! <3

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 64

Does thsi mean there will be a sequel?  Loved it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks and we are working on epilogues and possibly a sequel. :)

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 64

Do we get that 'story for another time'? I think this story was a nice ride! Thanks for writing and sharing (:



Author's Response:

Thanks and we are working on epilogues and possibly a sequel. :)

Reviewer: Crazyinagoodway Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 64

Aww I want more of them being happy and stupid and in love 😞 So you're posting an epilogue??



Author's Response:

Thanks and we are working on epilogues and possibly a sequel. :)

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 64

Well done!

Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 64

Good ending.



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 63

good

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 63

Good chapter.

Reviewer: twinkie_duh Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have really enjoyed reading this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

I just found your story today and so far I'm impressed. All through Edward's opinion spiel about teen gangs and adults reactions I heard My Chemical Romance's song Teenagers ringing in my ears. Hope if you don't know it you can youtube it. I Love that Song! (and I am 50)

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

Damn...excellent line lady!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 63

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 62

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 62

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 61

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 61

:)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 61

I am so glad that Edward has been able to redeem himself.  I am sad that Emmett had to die though.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 61

Yay!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 61

Very good

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 60

I hope the code worked!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 60

good

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 60

Good chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 60

Is it the lack of oxygen or was James always that insane!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 59

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 59

I hope he can do it 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 59

Really good chapter.

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 58

OH MY GOD! I LOOOOVE YOUR STORY!!!! WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE????



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comment!! :) The next chapter is a long and intense one from Edward's POV. It's important and we've been working very hard on it, but it's taking longer than we expected because it's quite difficult. We are very much hoping to post the new chapter tomorrow.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 58

Well someone better blow those doors. Someone that understands chemistry enough to make a bomb and blow that loading dock door.

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 58

Nice set up. Great story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 58

So sad.  Poor Emmett 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 58

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 57

They have to get the police to save these people and to put Marcus,  James and cause in jail.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 57

That's not what i was thinking was going to happen!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 56

I hope it's edward!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 55

They have hit the mother load & not in a good way.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 57

Awwww, emmettttttt!

Reviewer: KSesterhenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 57

He finally finds Rosalie and then that. *sighs* Poor Emmett. :( Here's hoping Edward finds Bella soon and maybe an HEA? Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 57

Poor Emmett.  I hope he will be alright 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 57

good

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 57

Nooo! After all of that, Emmett can't be dead. Alice and calvary need to hurry the hell up and get there! Thanks, Maria

Reviewer: Mannco Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 56

Ok plz update a new chapter... Bella is free from the plastic ties and she needs to get out of there. Please update soon!! 😀

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 56

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 56

I hope it's Edward 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 56

So glad Bella is active in her own rescue!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 56

Unique means of escape.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 55

They are sick.Edward and Emmett have to get them out. 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 55

Hmmmm

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 55

good

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 55

Oh wow, I didn;t see that coming.  I hope Edward can do some good for all his bad deeds

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 55

hurry Bella is in big trouble.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 55

I hope he can trust Emmett 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 55

Poor B. Hope they can get to B and R before they get drugged up

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 55

Building very nicely. A great story.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 54

I hope emmett is watching!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 54

good chapter. Qucik change in the plots.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 54

Christ where's her protection ?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 54

yikes

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 54

I hope Edward can get to her in time.  Happy belated birthday 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 54

Poor Bella.  Hope James pays for knocking her out. Caius needs to pay too

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 53

Poor Edward. He will win her back. 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 53

Go bella

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 53

So now a new & improved edward will Come ro life bc for the first time Love will be his challenge to conquer

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 53

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 53

hmm wonder how long he'll stay away.....or how long till emmett or james comes a calling.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 53

So sad........ 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 53

Stong move by Edward.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 52

Sad but true about the education BS and EFC.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 52

Talk to him Bella.  He loves you. 

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