[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 52
I bet Edward will be in her apartment in no time. Edward is to smart & focused to not win her over!
Author's Response:
He really is! But... what obstacles are still to come in their way?
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 52
Poor Bella
Author's Response:
I know, I feel sad for her in this chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 21 Feb 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 52
good
Author's Response:
Wow, tff, thank you so very much for the incredible kindness of reviewing on every single chapter! It may not seem like a big deal, but it is a huge deal to me. Seeing all those reviews today has made me feel amazingly happy and excited about writing more. I feel so supported here. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your fantastic generosity. If I could reach through the internet and hug you, I would!!! <3 xoxoxo
Love,
Alisa
Date: 21 Feb 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 47
wonder what he put in the cocoa
Date: 21 Feb 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 40
can't tell what em is up to and who he is loyal to besides himself. wondering where rose will fit into all this
Date: 21 Feb 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 38
wonder what em is going to do
Date: 20 Feb 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 51
This scheme sounds so funny. Edward does need to explain to Bella
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2016 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 51
This setup by Alice works perfectly for Edward! I can't imagine how he is going to make Bella believe.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 51
Laurent was an idiot to let her in. Wonder if Alice will talk to her
Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 51
Alice setting up Edward setting up Alice setting up Alec setting up: who's left?
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 50
Completely not what I was expecting! You have turned the tables on us!
Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 50
Alec is such a goober. Oh Laurent you are going to regret letting her in.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 50
This can't be good.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 50
Ugh is this the part where he's interrogating alice?
Date: 15 Feb 2016 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 50
This will be interesting. How do the kids fit in?
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 50
:) I'm happy to hear you're feeling better
Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 50
Oooh almost there! Can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 49
The prologue must be coming soon. I can't believe there are only 11 more chapters left.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 48
He better hurry up or Bella will be gone!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 47
Did Edward drug them both.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 49
The next few chapters are going to be tough.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 49
hmm now what is James going to invent for her to see.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 48
Edward is in deep. I don't see how he can get out.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 48
I really hope Bella will stick by Edward. Deep down I think she aoreadybinew he was Captain. I don't oiie that Edward is putting so kuch trust in Emmett and didnt Kim go to him and wouldn't that prove he's not to be trusted. I wish he would tell her everything and they can go to Jasper and Alice for back up. I think James will od before he can complete his job for Caius. Please don't let Edward cheat to prove he's over Bella to keep her safe. If si please give us a warning so I can skip that part. Excellent story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Don't worry, Edward will never cheat on Bella in my story.
Date: 08 Feb 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 48
yea not liking this Edward at all. E is too trusting of Em and James. hmmm Aro and marcus playing off each other....interesting.
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Yeah, he's making some big mistakes for sure. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08 Feb 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 47
hmm she should trust her gut. This lying Edward is going to get her killed or tortured or kidnapped or something
Date: 08 Feb 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 46
wow wonder what B will do next
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 48
Aro is evil
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He certainly is! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 07 Feb 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 47
He's gonna kill her. I hope not.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 46
Hope Edwards at the door.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 46
CRAP! It's all coming to a head & I'm on the edge of my seat!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 45
It's so interesting how all the players know each other but some are in the dark. I hope that's what Edward found proof of.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 44
Hopefully he can keep her safe.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 43
Edward & his acting abilities.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 42
All James has to do is act like he loves cats & Alice will be swooning.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella is a scamp, she would have of to drink that some fruit juice
Author's Response:
Dear Aelita, thanks so much for all your lovely reviews in both English and French. Please feel free to leave them in any language you prefer! I especially appreciate that you rate and leave a review on every chapter. xoxoxo
So wonderful to read all these great notes today. Thank you for making my day!
Hugs,
Alisa
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella calmed Edward, Jacob and has him almost fought.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Je crois qu'il est grave!
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bon chapitre!
Edward a également pris sa revanche.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah, too beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella the very developed sense of smell.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Est-ce chien bleu de Bella?
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Kim veut tuer Bella, je souhaite que Edward ne va pas la laisser (it) faire.