Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Cette fiction deviennent de plus en plus intéressant.
Date: 05 Feb 2016 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella ne peut pas résister à Edward.
Date: 05 Feb 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Maintenant, il sait, qu'il va faire ?
Date: 05 Feb 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella aurait dû tout dire à Edward.
Date: 05 Feb 2016 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
This Edward is charming. I think that the fire is its vengeance.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 45
Marcus is insane
Date: 04 Feb 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 45
Scary implications.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
his Edward is charming even if he hides something.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 45
wow There are so many evil ones in this story.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 44
hmm wonder if Em will do something on Kim's warning or not.
Date: 03 Feb 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 44
Whoa...I wonder if charlie will be back?
Date: 03 Feb 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 43
I get the sense the Edward might be playong both ends against the midde as his strategy.
Date: 03 Feb 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 43
Edward is losing it. How is he going to handle it when something bad happens to Bella?
Date: 02 Feb 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 43
Ugh Caius is going to be trouble for E. Hope B wont get hurt in the process.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 42
Dun dun dun! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 02 Feb 2016 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 42
This story is so stressful. I worry when this all falls apart.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 32
Heart breaking!
Date: 01 Feb 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 42
Yea Alice is gonna get some people killed
Date: 01 Feb 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh Em you are gonna pay for the trechery.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 40
hmm wonder who's side Em is on.....or maybe just on his own side and screw everyone else.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 39
Glad Bella is calling him on his behavior. Alice is gonna get herself and/or Jake/Jasper killed I'm afraid
Date: 01 Feb 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 42
I hope Edward can figure a way out of this complex web he has weaved, but I think someone will end up hurt or worse.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 41
Emmett's feathers are ruffled. Good to know Leah has some background in fighting. I'm sad that I'm caught up:(. This story is so addicting.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much for all your amazing reviews! I had been feeling a little bit down today and you have totally cheered me up. I had so much fun reading your thoughts after every chapter. And it's so helpful to me as a writer to get that chapter-by-chapter analysis and feedback. I learn so much about whether or not we are achieving the goals we intended with the story.
I'll be posting the next chapter tomorrow, and then the others every day or every other day up until chapter 48 or so, and then will switch to posting twice a week. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. I'm going to go back over your other reviews and answer any questions that I can that don't reveal spoilers. ;)
Thanks again for making my day. You've really made me happy. xoxoxo
Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 40
Looks like there are lots of Problems coming.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 39
If they only realized Jacob knows more than they give him credit for.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 38
That's probably way better than doing it in the airplane bathroom. Haha
Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 37
Is Edward going to try & marry her in Hawaii? That would change things for her application.
Author's Response:
Haha, getting married in Hawaii is a great idea. But it's a little too early for that now... :)
Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 36
He is totally going to mess with her application.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 35
He is so much more smarter than they all realize!
Date: 01 Feb 2016 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 34
She still needs to drink her mango shake. When she finds out about his leadership it's going to be bad.
Author's Response:
I'm afraid it is... :(
Date: 01 Feb 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
I knew he was going to be pissed.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 32
Will Jasper know his sister?
Date: 01 Feb 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
I think it's Emmett & I wonder if Edward is going to be pissed that he gave her weed & alcohol.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 30
So it was her spying on him .
Date: 01 Feb 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh my goodness Edward is laughing hysterically inside his head!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
I wasn't expecting Emmett to be against him to.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 27
I hope it's just Jacob. I forgot to mention in one of my reviews that I loved the way you said "I wanted him like paper wants to burn" that is such a great analogy! I haven't ever heard it before.
Author's Response:
Thanks! So happy you liked our turn of phrase. :)
Date: 31 Jan 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
Something in my gut tells me she is going to except him more than we expect.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Knowing that his mother suffered and he was there for it only makes everything worse. It does explain why he zip ties people to chairs.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
That's why he couldn't go home. I also wonder if Kim took a beating and was one of the girls.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
He was very sweet with her let's see if it continues.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
I can't get it out of my head that she killed her family. She said her apartment last chapter. And her having to remember to pay the utilities....
Date: 31 Jan 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
Or did Edward have her family killed....
Date: 31 Jan 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
They are the perfect Bonnie & Clyde!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm guessing it's a setup. I'm also beginning to think maye Bella killed her mom & brother? Maybe she has mental issues and nobody knows it yet....
Date: 31 Jan 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Just what I thought! Brainiac! Why is Kim still alive?
Date: 31 Jan 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
I really hope he kills Kim!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Alice's entrance was very comical! Edward has laid out his plan so completely it's honestly insane. I'm honestly baffled. To think the stuffed animal even was planned is shocking.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
Jacob just found them!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
I bet he kills her first.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
I almost expect him to have supernatural powers.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
I really just want him to be good bc she deserves it!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
James is making a play for the captains seat!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
That's weird why were they in the bushes? Or were they following Edward? Kim & Debra might be found dead!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
He burned down the fair. Holy cow!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love that he will fall for her & I believe he wasn't expecting too. That prologue you wrote still has my mind reeling!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella has good instincts even though she is a bit naive.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder if he wants Bella one because she is being noticed by everyone and two because she fits well with his nerd image.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
I forgot to mention last chapter that I think he made the ladder fall or had some way of helping her get hurt. After this chapter it makes me think he is a kid who is a genius & is using his brains in bad ways.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
It's really concerning how well he hides his gang leadership.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
James is total scum! I like that Jacob is just a good guy!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is going to be sooo good!
Author's Response:
So glad to hear that you especially enjoyed this first chapter!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 41
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 29 Jan 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 40
Did Bella tel Edward the lie she told everyone about this weekend? Edward better watch his back.
Date: 29 Jan 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 39
Jacob thinks Alice is crazy lol. Bella is so good a calling Edward out and gives him a consunce
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and you are so right. :)
Date: 29 Jan 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 38
Emmett is going to try to hurt Bella not cool. mile high club ;)
Date: 29 Jan 2016 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 37
Edward is playing his part well. He is so sweet to take Bella away
Author's Response:
Yes, he is. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 29 Jan 2016 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 36
Jacob is in to help Alice stop this drug. Edward just wants to make sure Bella is close to him.
Date: 29 Jan 2016 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 39
I'm enjoying your stiry. Glad the take down us in progress. It's also refreshing to watch Edwards character change.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reviewing and I appreciate knowing what you like in particular.
Date: 29 Jan 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 39
Well this is facinating!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review and it makes me happy that you enjoy this!
Date: 28 Jan 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 35
He is such a smart guy he needs to fix things
Date: 28 Jan 2016 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 34
Edward is trying to be a good guy
Date: 28 Jan 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 39
Alice is taking a big risk
Author's Response:
Oh yes, she really is. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 27 Jan 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 38
hmm wonder what Em will be doing?
Naughty E trying to get B into the Mile High Club
Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
So glad he's cooperating
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 37
hmm taking her out of town. Interesting timing
Author's Response:
Haha, all part of the plan. :)
Date: 25 Jan 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 36
alice is going to Jake killed if she's not careful. Sadly E is right. you can be smart as a whip but the person with money or connections is always going to get ahead of you.
Date: 25 Jan 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 35
oooh now what did E find I wonder.
Date: 25 Jan 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 34
Glad he is telling her some stuff. Sadly he's right about the school stuff. Too much money to "professional ball players" than to teachers, cops or military people who actually make a difference.
Date: 25 Jan 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 36
I think Edward will help give her an advantage to ensure she goes with him.
Date: 25 Jan 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wondering what he found now?
Date: 25 Jan 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 35
Anything leading to James?
Date: 24 Jan 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 35
Another twist. Good story.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow. Quite the conversion.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 34
I hope that Edward can find a way out of this as her really is trying to clean up his act. I suspect she will learn more by a situation out of Edward control.
Date: 22 Jan 2016 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 33
What is Edward going to do he has them coming at him from all sides now?
Date: 22 Jan 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
So sad that aunt needed bitch slaped
Date: 22 Jan 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 33
hmm James is going to regret betraying E and Caius as well.