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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

There is a lot more to Edward how much is Bella going to see?



Author's Response:

She is going to see more and more of him in upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hmm the psychic seems quite scared of E.   Yea those midway games are all rigged.  But ah well.



Author's Response:

Yeah they are all rigged lol. But I would be scared of the Edward in this story too... ;)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

He is sly



Author's Response:

Yes. Yes he is.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

Men do love to drive fat



Author's Response:

Some of them do indeed. ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

hmm is Edward really a student or is he like Jasper and undercover for someone I'm beginning to wonder.



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoy the wondering. :)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!



Author's Response:

You got it! Chapter 7 up today.

Reviewer: Zee McKenzie Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

I think Bella's intuition is just warning her about Edward. It's said the Quite ones are the most dangerous ones. Whats up with Leah an the 20 questions... Something is up with her, she seems off in a way.

Author's Response:

You are so right about Bella's intuition. But where will it lead her?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

hmm wonder if alice is going to get hooked on drugs maybe.   oooh Alice picked Edward to be her informant.  Wonder how that will work.  



Author's Response:

Loved your review, but I can't give any spoilers! ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

hmmm sure how E had nothing to do with that ladder. 

 

hmm Sounds like Alice and Jasper have some not so nice history.

 

hmm B's mom sounds like a piece of work.  Sigh.  Drama club huh?  wonder who will actually be there besides those too. hmmm



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, sure, nothing to do with it! 

lol

Bella's mom is definitely a piece of work. And there will be a lot of drama going on in this story. ;)

Reviewer: TriMom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

I LOVE this story!! Love it, love it love it.  I can't believe Edward is so creepy and there are so many little stories in it.  I have no idea what you have planned but suffice it to say, I can NOT wait.  Your spelling and grammar are amazing as well.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the amazing review! I have a lot planned, lots of twists and turns and I hope you continue to enjoy. But I promise there will be a HEA at the end for Edward and Bella. :)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

He is playing her??



Author's Response:

Mmmm, no spoilers! But there will be a HEA at the end.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

She knows there is something going on but what?



Author's Response:

That is indeed the question!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I love getting all those exclamation points! :)  Chapter 7 is out today.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

hmmm Lots going on.  And Jake is a good guy, interesting.



Author's Response:

Yup, lots going on, and more to come.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

interesting start



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Need to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Chapter 2 is now up. :)

Reviewer: arat Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

very interesting start, would definitely like to read more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

WOW!Sounds interesting,more please!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: oh my Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well this looks promising 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I hope you'll continue to enjoy this story.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this first page can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reviewing. This story is completely written so we should be updating rapidly.

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