Date: 04 Jul 2018 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 70
Cliffhanger, come on
Date: 04 Jul 2018 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 69
Need longer chapters
Date: 14 Dec 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 70
Keep writing
Date: 13 Dec 2017 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 70
How heartbreaking for Bella! I’ve got my fingers crossed that your muse starts talking to you again for this story. I live it.
Date: 12 Dec 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 70
Noooooooooo! Keep writing! Find your muse for this fic. 😱 Your going in a great direction with this story. Thanks for the chapters so far. 😉
Date: 12 Dec 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 70
I hope she is right
Date: 22 Nov 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 69
Great cliffhanger!!! Keep it coming!!! 😥
Date: 19 Nov 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 69
oh no :O :O
Date: 05 Nov 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 69
I read this story straight through and I love it! I’m so glad you posted another chapter. I hope the characters start talking to you again soon. 💜
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you loved it.
Date: 05 Nov 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 69
I hope Edward is alright
Author's Response:
Thanks, hun!
Date: 03 Nov 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 68
I love this story. When I have a bad case of writer's block I go back and read my story from the beginning like a reader instead of a writer. So pull your story up on the website (so you can't edit it) and just read it. Many times it helps me find the life in it that I am missing.
Good Luck!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice. I tried what you said & realized how my writing has changed since I first started Changes almost 3 years ago... THREE! Omg, I saw so many simple mistakes that I should have caught. It made me cringe. It kinda embarrassed me, tbh. lol I do have to say though, I do like this story from a readers standpoint, & I'm not trying to toot my own horn by any means. It definitely needs to be gone back over & cleaned up, but I'm still proud of this one. I've came a long ways in my writing, I think. Sorry for the long response.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 68
Please post the chapters. I hope your muse does speak to you soon. I really like this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 02 Nov 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 68
Great. Chapter, keep writing sooner and longer
Date: 02 Nov 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 68
Hey! Post what You have... I really like this story
Date: 01 Nov 2017 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 68
If the chapters you have don't end with a cliff hanger post them, if they do then hang on to them.
Love the story.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 11 Sep 2017 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 67
Thank you for updating. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 66
Come on Edward propose.
Date: 24 Jul 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 65
Love! It's a beanette!
Date: 22 Jul 2017 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 65
Aww. Can't wait the the next chapter.
Date: 22 Jul 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 65
Love! It's a beanette!
Date: 20 Jul 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 64
Please hurry and post.
Date: 09 Jul 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 64
Happy to read another chapter! 😃
Date: 10 Mar 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 63
So glad for a new chapter.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for the update such a great story. :-)
Date: 25 May 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 62
Such an exciting time.
Date: 24 May 2016 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 62
Of course he can do it! The hard part may be convincing her of his true feelings for her and the baby!
Date: 23 May 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 62
Lol think again
Date: 17 May 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 61
Edward better get there fast.
Date: 15 May 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 61
ooo the baby is coming!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 61
Hang in there, we're with you, just like Edward is with Bella!
Date: 15 Mar 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 60
Yeah. The baby is coming.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 60
Good chapter ! I suppose I should now go out and replace my smoke detector!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 60
Yeah! It's time! I can't wait to see Edward go into 'daddy' mode. Thanks Maria
Date: 12 Mar 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 60
Oh boy, now the baby is on the way! I'll bet Edward will fly to be with her now!
Date: 12 Mar 2016 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 60
Oh shit!!! Baby is coming
Date: 12 Mar 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 59
Hope being up late with Bella hasn't made him too tired. That could be dangerous in his line of work!
Date: 11 Mar 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 58
They are too cute.
Date: 07 Mar 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 58
I love this story and can't wait to read more!!! I hope you can update this again soon.
Date: 07 Mar 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 58
They're so cute
Date: 06 Mar 2016 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 58
So sweet! This is a great story!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 58
Good grief, who wouldn't? The guy is darn near perfect!
Date: 21 Feb 2016 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 57
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! 😀
Date: 21 Feb 2016 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 57
YAY Edward! That invitation turned out really well! I just hope Bella won't suffer from heart-burn, after the Mexican food!
Author's Response:
It sure did. Thanks so much. 😀
Date: 16 Feb 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 56
Love your story please write more! Can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 11 Feb 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 56
Glad Bella finally gets it.
Date: 10 Feb 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 56
Bella has a good therapist, one who bekieves in both love and fate! I wouldn't bet against either of those things! Hope Sherry is getting better! Seeyou!
Date: 10 Feb 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 56
Oh, girlfriend! TYVM for the comment and for the chapter. AMAZING, as always! Sorry to hear Sherry is sick, may she be healed quickly! As for Bella and Edward..............a beanie baby is on the way! Can't wait to hear more. I believe God puts people in our lives for special reasons, not that he took Jake from Bella..............the free will of evil men (terrorists) did that. Keep up the good story/fight, Sue! ILY!
Date: 05 Feb 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 55
Edward is so sweet and cute in this story. I like this Renee.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 55
Thanks so much for soldiering through despite awful pain from those migraines! This was a cute chapter, and I'm more than old enough to have seen Lucy and Ethel get in trouble the first time around, never mind reruns! Sounds like Bella is happier than she's been for quite a while!
Date: 04 Feb 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 55
Awesome update..............I love that Edward bought the "Hot Stuff" apron for mom. So cute. I watched I love Lucy growing up and it was a favorite, great reference. Your writing is the BOMB, Sue@
Date: 29 Jan 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 54
Edward is so cute when he is befuddled
Date: 27 Jan 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 54
Sure you can Edward, because now you two are not hiding any secrets. This should help a whole lot!
Date: 21 Jan 2016 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 53
WHEW! At last they leveled with each other! Yay! Now the honesty can kick in on both sides!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 52
now if she will listen to him :)
Date: 14 Jan 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 52
Renee seems to see that Edward is a good guy. I hope Bella figures it out soon.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 52
Love this story! Take care of yourself. I have a good friend with fibro and I have severe arthritis, so I understand your limitations. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It's difficult on good days.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 52
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 12 Jan 2016 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 52
No problem, we're in this for the long haul! I'm just glad Renee told him where Bella was and why!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 11 Jan 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 51
I love chicago music :) awwww he is sweet would melt my heart
Author's Response:
I'd be a puddle on the floor. :)
Date: 03 Jan 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 51
Oh how sad, my heart truly goes out to Edward. I'm hoping Bella gets her head out of the clouds and lets Edward back in and hopefully they can be together like they should.
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 51
That's just heartbreaking! I was hoping she would hear and come out to listen to an apology!
Author's Response:
Awww... thanks so much!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 51
So sad......
Author's Response:
((HUGS))
Date: 24 Dec 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 50
poor Edward feel sorry for him
Author's Response:
I know! : Thank you!
Date: 23 Dec 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 50
👍🏻
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 23 Dec 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 50
I hope she listens to him
Author's Response:
So do I? ;) Thank you so much doll.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 50
Don't you just love it when other people tell you how to write the story in your head? I suppose most of it is done in good faith, but still! I only hope they can talk to each other and thrash this all out. It's my humble opinion that these two are meant to be there for each other, they just need to realize that! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding. Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!
Date: 18 Dec 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 49
Bella at least has the pregnancy hormone excuse for acting irrational. Edward really likes her. He just doesn't want to make her sad and bring up Jake. Edward is a great guy.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 16 Dec 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 49
poor girl so many emotions
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 49
Oh how sweet and sad at the same time. I do hope though her and Edward can resolve this and afterwards get together as a couple x
Date: 15 Dec 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 49
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 49
Still, it's shame she thinks he wasn't really hanging around because he liked her! No self esteem there, for sure. Maybe pregnancy hormones? Looking forward to the next couple of chapters!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 48
I guess it makes sense to hide out for a bit and pretend to be asleep. Glad, though, that Rose and Emmett had a chance to meet!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 47
If I had a crystal ball, it would probably show some major groveling in his future!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 46
I was so afraid this very thing would happen, and sure enough, it did! Damn!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 45
Just as I suspected, he's falling for her! At least he's getting help and someone to talk to about it!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 44
Good for you, I'm on the same page too! That panic attack was most likely inevitable. I'm just glad Emmett was there when it happened. I also think Edward should listen to what he said!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 43
I sort of hate that Bella feels guilty for anything right now. Just another reason I wish Edward would confess his secret to her. It will, no doubt, be a lot to process.