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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Looking forward to it!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  If you'd like a pdf of it, let me know and I'll send it to you via email.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Loved!  Such fun and interesting reading. 

 

I am particularly surprised that I enjoyed it so much because,  I'll admit......I'm a bit of a rating snob.

 

I usually own read NC-17 material. Not because I'm a perv...well, I guess I kinda am! Hahaha but because the writing is usually more  mature and the stories are more appealing to me.

 

So KUDOS!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much! I am so pleased that you enjoyed the series  I understand about the rating thing, me too.  I also don't read anything that say "high school" romance.  I hated high school, and dealing with the drama on Facebook reminds me so much of that place!  I'm petty bored with stories that are all sex too.

I can't remember, did you read my "Out of Time-A Halloween Love Story"?  It's only a little over 5000 words so you should be able to get it read quickly.  I frankly feel my FBI Guy series and Out of Time are my best work.

Come find me on Facebook.  I'd like to get to know you better I feel.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

Fun chapter! Very exciting!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Looking forward to your new comments!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 3

Love this new case!



Author's Response:

You're on a real reading spree aren't you!  Not complaining mind you,  I am so happy that you are on the 3rd part.  There are several case files and I'll tell you that there is an HEA for B+E and children.  Enjoy and let me know what you think of the series.  It will more than likely be my next book, but don't know for sure.  My publisher wants "Our Holiday Tails" to come out next.  If you haven't read that one, you might enjoy it.  It's another B&E along with their respective fur babies - cats.

Thank you so much for your comments and your support.  It means more than you probably know.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Cheshire15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Thank u for an amazing series

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it!  I hope to hear more from you about some of my other stories also, if you would please.

Thanks again,

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4-Case File #16 - "Un vampir de energie" Continued

Great update

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hard Hugs

Dinia



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2016 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Case File #16 "Un vampir de energie"

very good

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Loved every word.  These are my kiind of people living in my kind of world.  Sad to see them go, but know there will be new friends to meet.  Thanks for writing such enjoyable and entertaining stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!  You have done so much for writiers ego.  I get dismayed sometimes because I don't feel anyone reads my stories.

Thank you again.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Case # 19 - Skin Walker Part 6

Good woman.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hope you continue and continue to enjoy it!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 4

Do like Michael's style.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  I hope you read everything I write because you are good for my ego!

Read on!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 14- Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 2

Shades of "Brimstone"?  Can't wait to see where you take this.



Author's Response:

Are you a Preston & Child fan?  I am too.  I love the Pendergast series.

Looking forward to how you like this case file.

Later

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Respite

Katie needs a serious  attitude adjustment.  Betting she gets it one of these days. 



Author's Response:

Yeah she's a bitch but then Edward's use to that type of treatment.

Glad you're enjoying this one too!  

Hard Hugs 

Dinia

Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 3-Case File #16 - "Un vampir de energie"

Already surpassing the last one.  Wish I were 35 years younger and lived in this world.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Oh no, another set of twins. Esme and carlilse are going to have a busy time babysitting on date nights. I half expected Edward to retire after Bella and the twins were in so much danger, you wouldn't want to risk that again. So happy for emmett and Lauren. I have enjoyed reading the series of these guys. Debbie

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 22-Dragomir’s End

So glad that they managed to destroy that thing and get Bella and the twins away from it. Debbie

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Oh my, with two more sets of twins the friends are going to have their hands full, especially if the babies are gifted :-D

Thank you.

I look forward to whatever you might write next.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Awe, I hope these guys talk to you some more later on. Maybe a storyline focusing on the next generation of gifted children, maybe Sam and Angela can adopt a gifted child as well. I love these guys. Great story.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

OMG!!! AWESOME!!! AMAZING!!! ;) i didn't notice this last chapter until now!! it made me feel like crying that this is the end though ;( but what a great ending thanks so much for sharing it all with us ;) i hope your next project is just as brilliant ;D

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

:)  loved this story, but I'm sad to read there will be no more 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Very nice wrapup! I sure have enjoyed reading all the stories, and thank you for pleasure! Take care and let us all know when you have another quirky thought!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  I have enjoyed writing this series and maybe some day I'll reword them into one book.  Don't know.  This one I've published recently has almost taken the joy of writing out of me.  *smiles*

I have been thinking of writing a new story about a alien cat family crash lands on earth about 20,000 years ago, but not gotten much further than that.  I think I'd try to make it funny, but will see what thoughts arise.

Thank you so much for your continued support.  It is much appreciated.

Oh, I should have this final story line added to the others in pdf form and posted in my Dinia Steel Fan Fiction FB group's file.

Hard Hugs to you my Friend

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

What a wonderful ending to this, the third story in this trilogy.  It is good and fitting that it ended here, for the protection and environment to flourish for the family. More twins!  That in and of itself, the 4 siblings and their psi abilities, might make a juicy story down the road. J/S....thank you Carol for everything!



Author's Response:

Thank you Judy!  I have so appreciated your support and friendship.  I'll be adding this final story line to the existing pdf in my Dinia Steel Fan Fiction FB group in the next several days.  

I guess you're right about 2 sets of twins with all the psi abilities would make maybe a good out take, but I can't think about that right now.  LOL.  

I do have thoughts however about a new story long about an alien cat who crash lands on Earth about 20,000 years ago.  Don't have anything more than that going through my mind currently.

 See you next time.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Nice ending. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Darlin'!  I'll be adding this one to the other two in the next few days and post them all in pdf w/pic soon.  It will be posted in the files of my Dinia Steel Fan Fiction FB group at that time.

See you next time I come up with more weirdness.  

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 22-Dragomir’s End

I'm realieved the threat is gone and Bella and the twins are safe and well. Cheers to Emmett - despite his lack of special powers he contributed to Dragomir's demise.

No need to say sorry, I hope it was good life that kept you from posting.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 22-Dragomir’s End

You have been a busy lady!  It's good, very good, to see this Dragomir ended. How he miscalculated the human threat led to his demise! Good riddance. Thanks, as always, for the entertainment you provide with your stories!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 22-Dragomir’s End

:) 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 22-Dragomir’s End

cool chapter ;) but the twins were in carlisle's arms when he walked into the room before edward came in so how come he asked edward where he found them? looking forward to more but not the end ;D 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 22-Dragomir’s End

I just knew with all the help they had that Dragomir would be defeated! I liked that Emmett got to be a p-art of this also! Sorry to hear only a couple of chapters left!

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 22-Dragomir’s End

Great chapter 

Reviewer: cullenprincess Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

The start of the story is good.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 21-Case #20 - Ordre du Temple - Part 2

Let the battle commence. It seems like the twins have found their own way to annoy him. Bella seems oblivious as to what is going on, which is probably for the best at this point. Debbie

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 21-Case #20 - Ordre du Temple - Part 2

Arrogant he is!  Underestimating his opponents could come to teir advantage.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 21-Case #20 - Ordre du Temple - Part 2

cool chapter ;) i loved how the twins were dancing around him ;) thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 21-Case #20 - Ordre du Temple - Part 2

Good chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 21-Case #20 - Ordre du Temple - Part 2

:) 

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

So glad they have help coming to save the twins and Bella. Poor sam, no wonder he was so disorientated, but it was necessary...Edward needs him right now. Debbie

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

I love this. Your stories are filled with things most would call fantasy. I know better. Thank you for lighting the way through "fiction"

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

:) 

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

Ooooo...the Templar Knights. Very interesting.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

Good chapter 

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

I'm so curious about the Templar's and what they will be like. They're a literal ray of light in this dark situation. Bella was already so weak, they won't have too much time. Where are the twins? Now I understand why the babies were so upset and crying.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

OMG!  Who is at the door?!  Damn Cliffy!  Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Case #20 - Ordre du Temple

ooh!!! i'm squeeing now ;) i'm so excited ;) edward was a templar in a previous life!?? i thought he was just diffent humans??? thanks for the update ;D

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

Ooh ,  this  sounds  like  a  good  one !   Keep  up  the  great  work !  



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm very pleased you're enjoying this!

See you next chapter. 

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

Oh no!!  Terrible Cliffy dammit!  I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!  I hope Bella is just in a coma!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  I hope you're not disappointed in the next chapters!  Do remember please, I always have an HEA!  :)

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

Oh please tell me the twins and Bella will be ok



Author's Response:

*smiles*  I will always have an HEA.  That and I'll always finish my stories, are promises I make to my readers.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

Great chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

Omg, poor Edward and his family. I'm not sure personal anguish covers this. I hope he can connect with Bella and the twins and get them back. He really needs all the help he can with this and quickly before he loses his mind. Debbie

Author's Response:

Thank you Debbie!  I know I'm putting Edward through hell, but every story needs a little something to make the blood rush!  I promise an HEA always, but it just might take some angst to get there.  Edward has Michael on his side, and we know that Michael can do anything possible to help - but he can't do it himself.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

OMG really???? You stop the chapter there?! ugh post soon please



Author's Response:

Yep.  Really.  Got to have some angst goin' on!  I promise an HEA with all of my stories you know, so have faith.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

This doesn't sound good.   Poor Edward 



Author's Response:

Yes I know it doesn't sound good.  But trust me, the HEA is going to be there - eventually. :)

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

oooh!!! very intriging start to a new problem ;) thanks for your last reply and your prompt update ;D



Author's Response:

I try to keep it "interesting" :).  Gotta have a little personal angst to keep y'all comin' back! 

You are most welcome. I will always answer those who have question, and my reviewers.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

Poor Edward! He can't get a chance to even breathe properly before something else even worse happens.  



Author's Response:

I know.  I'm mean that way, BUT I always promise to give you an HEA.  Just need to have some angst along the way.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

Edward is going to have to pull out all the stops to save his family! What is after them? Whatever it is, I sure don't like it threatening to destroy Bella and the children!



Author's Response:

Yep he sure is!  Gotta keep it interesting for y'all!  You'll have to wait and see what's got them.  It's something familiar, just a lot stronger.  Remember, I always promise you and HEA.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Case # 19 - Skin Walker Part 6

I suspected it was going to take something this fierce to end Ahote. The big reveal was about Edward's evolution, that's exciting! I wonder of it has any affect on his relationship with Bella.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

What a shock! One of the three missing would be horrible, but all of them? Can't wait to find out more.



Author's Response:

Yeah I know.  I've got a really nasty one this time.  Edward is very strong and has powerful friends, so I know he'll bring his family out just fine.  Gotta have some angst for y'all!

See you next chapter.

hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Case # 19 - Skin Walker Part 6

I'm glad that was dealt with quite easily and Edward & Sam weren't in any danger. Especially as they learnt that they were only there to witness the events. Are the twins just missing daddy or do they have some form of deeper connection. Debbie

Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yes the twins have a very very deep connection with daddy.  More about them is coming in the next few chapters.

See you next chapter!  Thanks for haning in here with me.

Hardest Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Case # 19 - Skin Walker Part 6

Looks like the Hopi-God, too, wasn't happy with Ahote's actions and ended him the same way his victims were killed. Michael dropped quite the bomb about Edward's future. How do you live with such a prediction?



Author's Response:

Yeah, not a smart thing to piss off a god form!  How do you live the knowledge that Michael revealed about Edward?  That's going to be address before this story closes.  It's my understanding that people who are of that high a vibration have some fore-knowledge that they will enter into the next stage of their evolution in their next life.  Edward is being strengthened to be able to handle what is to come.

Thanks for being such a rock!

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Case # 19 - Skin Walker Part 6

I hope this doesn't mean that Edward is due to die soon 



Author's Response:

NO!  Edward is not dying anytime soon.  He's got a lot more things to experience before he can take his place as a guardian angel.  

See you next chapter!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Case # 19 - Skin Walker Part 6

OMG!!! is edward due to die soon!!! thanks for your prompt update ;D



Author's Response:

Did I say anything about Edward dying, soon??  LOL.  Fear not.  Edward will continue to live.  Who knows, I may want to write another story line with him as main characters.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 5

Wow, now that's a surprise! Grandmother Spider sounds like the perfect ally for finding and securing the fetish. Matters are serious if an entity like her is needed. Poor twins and poor Bella and Angela, staying back and waiting must be torturous.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yes she doesn't usually take on physical form, but when an Guardian Angel requesting help I think she'd take notice.  The fetish being used is very very old so I suspect that is what won her over to help the two friends.  

The families of both Sam and Edward should be use to the men being gone.  Won't be the last time either.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 5

Micheal has some cool friends! With Spiderwoman's help, I'm sure that Sam and Edward can find the fetish. Sounds as if their wives are anxious to see them home safely!



Author's Response:

Yes he does indeed!  Yes their wives are concerned for their husbands and want them to come home safely.

I hope you enjoy the next chapters as well.  See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 5

One of my friends here on Facebook is called Tawa. She is natlive american. I wonder if she knows about the origin of her name. I bet she does. Sounds like they are in for a hell of a ride with this one. I'm glad they have friends along with them. thanks, as always, for your lively and lovely stories!

You asked about M/M a awhile ago. tWCS doesn't allow more than one response at a time so I will  tell you here that it means male/male stories. gay stories. I love them!



Author's Response:

If your friend is a Traditional then she most surely would know where her name came from.  :)  

I hope you enjoy this one as much as you have the others.  I don't think this story line will have more than 10 more chapters and the final "case" is really a whopper.  My new beta loves the facat that I can cram a bunch in short chapters.  :D  Surprisingly many of my readers complain about the short chapters.

Well Duh.  I should have know that.  While I don't care about Slash stories I don't judge - as I think you know.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Carol

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 5

:) 



Author's Response:

:)  :)  :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 5

amazing chapter ;) thanks for the prompt updates ;) i remember reading the 1st sighting of michael in one of the previous stories (which i've read both) ;) thanks for the pronounciation of spider grandmothers' name and background ;) read you next week ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!  There are many new readers and they were getting lost not knowing who was who.  *Sigh*  I appreciate your having read the first two story lines.  I look forward to hearing from you more in the weeks to come.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 5

Good chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 4

I think the shaman didn't discuss his actions with the elders of his tribe, because he knew they would disapprove. I doubt he aims to restore balance. Doli told them a name. Maybe they should look into Ahote. Michael in his corporeal form is an enormous help.



Author's Response:

Yes you're right.  It's been my experience that people who use the dark side of magic have egos that will not allow them to think clearly about how things work.  All they usually are concerned with is personal power, and that power will always blow up in their faces.  Karma can be a real bitch!

Yes, Michael is a tremendous force of power for good and the Light, and like Mighty Mouse is always ready to help Edward "save the day".

Thank you for continuing to review and share your thoughts with me on my story.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 4

oooh!!!! this chapter was AWESOME!!! i was squeeling at the end ;) thanks for the update ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story line!  Have you read the two stories leading up to this third and final one using these characters?  The original story line just won an award for Other World favorite.  :)

See you next week?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 4

:) 



Author's Response:

:D  <3  :D

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 4

Sounds like Michael plays a very important role in sorting out this entity. That was a very clear warning to them from the apparition. I really hope Michael can stop them from getting hurt? Debbie

Author's Response:

Thank you Debbie!  Yes Michael is a very powerful sorce for Good and the Light.  Shows how special Edward is that he has his own Guardian Angel.  Sam and Edward understand what they are up against.  They will be as protected from the Dark to the fullest extent, trust me.  :)

See you next week?

Hard Hugs

Dinia 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 4

wow I didn't know Michael revealed himself in human form!  That's fabulous!  This rogue "fire-god" person is in trouble, I think.  I'm thinking that Sam and Edward can banish him, with Michael's help. Fabulously creative of you to write these characters! 

I haven't gotton to reading your book yet. I will. Sooner or later. I'm immersed in M/M stories at the present time....



Author's Response:

Yes, Michael has the ability to appear to as many people in human form as he feels is necessary.  The DOTB detectives may not see him, but they know from Edward that Michael is never far away.  :)  Any "fire-god" has great potential for being destructive because it takes great force of will to be able to handle the energy and power that comes from them.  Just look at how maligned Sekhmet has become.  She is one of the very few Fire Goddess, little to people know that she is a healing goddess.  All of the temples in Egypt was temples of healing.

Thank you I try to keep my characters fun and alive as possible.

What is M/M stories?

When you get to the book, you'll get to it.  You are refering to the paper back, right?  That has all 3 parts in it.  Next month the complete ebook will be released.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 4

Sounds to me as if this flaming figure doesn't care about the Hopi nearly as much as he cares about his own agenda! Loved that Edward's guardian angel showed up in human for to have a cold one with the guys!



Author's Response:

Yes you are right.  It's been my experience that people who practice the darker side of magic have huge egos that don't allow them to think clearly. It'll always get them in the end.  Karma can be a Bitch.  Yes, Guardian Angels of Michaels order were once humans who've risen high in the ranks of the higher planes and have requested to turn back and help humanity.  When I wrote the line about the beer, I actually was thinking of the series "Saving Grace" and her Guardian Angel who loved his beer.  :)

Thanks again for your support.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2016 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 3

I really hope they don't see or hear that either. Seems like she is resigned to her death, no matter how it comes. Debbie

Author's Response:

Yes she does doesn't she.  Better to know that you're going to die and prepare for it I guess.  Guess we'll have to wait and see what the next chapters bring.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Means a great deal to me.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 3

I hope her clues can lead them to protect themselves and catch this Powana!  Great stuff!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love being able to come up with so many different options for my detectives!

See you next chapter!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 3

cool little chapter thanks for setting the angela not attending right ;) but whar is the hopi and how do you pronounce that hoz? word? i only just noticed this chapter btw;) looking forward to more ;D 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Well the Hopi are a Native American Tribe and share space with the Navajo Reservation.  Just do a search and you'll come up with lots of good facts about both Native American Tribes.  As for being to pronounce the names I'm at a loss.  I don't speak Navajo, I just copied the name.  LOL.  I'm glad you found me!  Don't forget to put the story on alert!  By the way, I have a Facebook page dedicated to this just, so come find it and me for that matter, Dinia Steel, and that way you'll see the alerts there.  

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

Hard Hugs

Dinia 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 3

Certainly sounds like dark magic, and not anything good, either! If Edward is that concerned, it must be pretty bad! Doli is accepting what she knows she can't change or avoid, and so is preparing herself, I guess. Makes me want to tell Edward and Sam to be very careful!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Always enjoy your thoughts and comments about the story line.  You are very informed.  I appreciate that and try to keep it as real as I can so those of my readers who are versed will be able to appreciate what's going on.  :)  Yes Edward and Sam are in for one hell of a fight!  BUT they are the heros and I love my HEA!  :)

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 3

Very ominous. I'm counting on the other detectives to help from afar. Doli's foretellings are not very encouraging.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for continuing to read and review.  Means a great deal to me.  Sam and Edward will always come out on top because, let's not forget that Edward has a special friend who helps to protect him.  :D  Doli is a very special woman.  Unfortunately the Navajo tend to not like witches very much.  :(

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 3

Poor Doli.   Loving this 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Love to hear from you.  You have become one of my rocks!

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14- Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 2

Oh my, Hastin is dead already. I hope that Edward counts as Sam not going alone. I wonder how long Angela will be able to stay away.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 3

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I do a great deal of research for each chapter to make it the best I can.  Gratifying when people think they are good.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 14- Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 2

All caught up now. Hopefully, Angela will feel better that Sam is not alone and things will go better for them. Debbie

Author's Response:

I can tell you that Angela will feel some better as time goes on.

Glad you're with us!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Respite

God she sounds a right bitch. No wonder Edward walked out and Sam didn't marry her. Unless she's just bitter because of Sam. Debbie

Author's Response:

I've been asked why I put that bit in.  It was to show again what Edward has to deal with with his peers.

Happy to be hearing from you again.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Case #16 - Un vampir de energie Part 9

Omg, thank god non of them succumbed fully to his powers. Although it was a close call for Angela and prob emmett. Debbie

Author's Response:

Glad you're continuing with the story.  I hope you're enjoying it too.  

Yep they all had a very close call!  Did you enjoy the history I made up to go with the energy vampire?

See you next chapter!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 3-Case File #16 - "Un vampir de energie"

Just started to read this new one and hope to be caught up tonight. This case is very weird, even more so than most of the others they have worked on. Debbie

Author's Response:

Gotta try different things you know.  I hope you enjoy this story line as you have the others.  :)

Thanks for joining me again.  If you get a chance come join the group on Facebook if you haven't already to see the pictures that go with the different chapters.

Hope to see you soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 14- Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 2

interesting chapter ;) why aren't the girls going with them tough? thanks for the update more soon? ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks!  The will sometimes just go out on their own.

Wondering, if you've read the first two stories with these characters in them?

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 14- Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 2

It seems Angela is right to be worried 



Author's Response:

Yep she sure did.

:)  :D  :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 14- Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 2

Finding Sam's friend dead by fire, perhaps even spontaneous combustion, highlights Angel's fears for her husnand's safety! I'm just glad he has Edward with him and foresee some of the others being needed also! Scary happenings!



Author's Response:

Yes, Angela is a very talented psychic and well known for her abilities.  Sam was just being a man, but one who wanted to protect his wife.

Edward is always there for the others when ever they require his help.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 14- Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 2

Spontaneous combustion??  Surely there must have been an evil force working to make this happen...fascinating, as always!  Happy Mother's day!



Author's Response:

Yes.  They hadn't encountered that as yet.  It was time to throw that at them.  :D  We'll be getting deeper into The Shady Shaman next week.  :)

Hope your mother's day was good.  my daughter was here and for the first time in 20+ years I had a mother's day with her.  They left this morning to go back to Canada.  They promised to come back in 6 months, but I ain't holding my breath!

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

Hi ;) I'm looking forward to this case ;) thanks for sharing ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I hope to hear more from you on how you're finding the story line!  Come join us on Facebook.  Look for the page with the story name.  :)

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

Ooh, a new case!!  So excited!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Me too.

See you soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

I'm looking forward to their next adventure. I guess it won't take long before Sam calls in the crew for assistance. Wouldn't it be cool to sit in the shade of a magnificent tree listening to stories from a Dryad?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm looking forward to it also.  I'll tell you that only Sam and Edward tackle this one, but they get some "special" help.  :)

My experience with a Dryad was I saw pictures of what she was saying.  I'll confess I have "fairies" in my backyard too.  Only they don't look like the beautiful creatures of the Victorian Age artist.  They are beautiful balls of colored light, and if they get pissed off, run!  

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

Being a fan of Tony Hillerman, I will be very interested in this particular case Sam is taking on. I would also wager that not only Edward will end up helping, but probably Lauren and Angela, too! By the way, the barbeque description made my mouth water!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I adore TH's writing, though now he is gone his daughter is writing and I found she is a pale refelction of her father's style.

As for who will taking on this case with Sam, remines to be seen.  *grin*

Looking forward to your future comments.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2016 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

:) 



Author's Response:

:)  <3  :)

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

So excited for another case.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I found it very interesting to write.  The Navajo have a wonderful way of viewing the world.  You might enjoy reading Tony Hillerman's body of work on the Navajo.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.  

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

This sounds interesting. Are all skin walkers evil? I have heard of the ones who helped in WWII and they weren't.  I have little knowledge on this and will be eager to see what you come up with! Your stories are always so different and very interesting!



Author's Response:

Maybe you are thinking of Wind Walkers who invented a code talk in WWII that the Japanese could not break beacuse the Navajo language didn't have a real written language at that time.  A skin walker is as black magic user.  I've posted a YouTube link to a movie about Navajo beliefs on the the Facebook page for this story.  Give it a watch.  To answer your question, yes in the Navajo belief system a skinwalker is evil.  They are black magic users.

Thank you Judy.  I try to come up with different story lines. Every writer it seems is writing the same basic story so I try to come up with unusal things.  I don't have many readers because I am writing differently.  

See you next chapter.

Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Respite

Interesting ending, but  why did  it  take  a half hour before  Bella and  the  others  met Edward  in the lobby ?   Did  we miss  something ? 



Author's Response:

Sorry you found the 30 minutes confusing.  I felt it would obvious that everyone but Edward was delivering the report the Director was wanting.  I hope you have enjoyed the rest and will stay tuned for the next Case File.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Respite

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Respite

A woman in Kate's position should have more manners, more grip on her emotions and her verbal filter. Now I kind of wish her to be in a "paranormal pickle". Shady Shaman sounds promising.



Author's Response:

Kate's attitude is one that Edward had to deal with when he was employed by the FBI but now he doesn't have to put up with that crap.  I wrote her into the story line to give an example of the what Edward had to deal with.

I hope you enjoy the next case file too.  Did a lot of research for it.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Respite

WTF? Just because the new director used to fuck Sam, she wrote them and their report and their abilities off, just like that?  Her loss!  I wonder if there is more to this story, between her and Sam, than you have written so far. 



Author's Response:

No plans to bring the "director" into the story line iwth Sam, just emphasizing how many of Edward's FBI counter parts disliked and dis-trusted Edward's abilities.  Also I wanted to make it known that Sam too had a past.  :D

See you next week when we start a new case file.

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Respite

Yay! Can't wait for the next case. I love these guys.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  *smiles* I'm wondering if you might have the first name of "Michael"?  LOL.  That's the FBI Guy's guardian angel's name you know.

I'm so happy that you're enjoying this.  Have you read the first two stories where these characters lived?  If not, I have a pdf in my Dinia Steel Fan Fiction FB group with both stories combined.  Just join and check out the files. I hope to hear from you more.  Do you belong to the Facebook group for this story?  come join us and check out the pictures and files there.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Respite

Not even a thank you, kiss my fanny or anything! What a greeting from the new director! Kind of makes me feel sorry for Riley, having to work with someone like Katherine Marshall! See you when the shaman story starts!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Just another example with the distain Edward's talents were met with within the FBI.  In the story and real life.  

The Shady Shaman will be another dangerous case in which only Edward and Sam participate.  Some very intersting things take place.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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