Date: 13 Jan 2018 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Great chapter. I see that there is going to be a threat from the Russians. I’m glad I love this story so much.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
Bella is becoming bad ads in the office. Love how she manipulates Edward. Lol
Date: 13 Jan 2018 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Wow, I'm proud of Bella. I am surprised that Edward was able to hold his tongue with the way Charlie was speaking to Bella.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Awesome Bella.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Love how Bella handle Tanya's parents.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
Edward don't play. I wonder how Tanya's parents were during their visit.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
I'm glad he is giving her some responsibility
Date: 13 Jan 2018 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
I am really enjoying this story. I like how Bella was teasing Edward at the table by using what she said in bed to him. Lol.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
So glad Ms. Cope seems to like Bella. Little Elizabeth is very excited to have a new mommy. Glad Edward was gentle with Bella their 1st time.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous
Wow, lots of information in thus chapter. Im just wondering what little Elizabeth will think when she gets older and ask questions about her real mother.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Edward is one sexy man.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Edward is definitely showing his power here at this meeting. If Edward has a daughter where is the girl's mother.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Glad she finally knows now. She should punish him a bit. hee hee
Date: 12 Jan 2018 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Lizzie is too cute for words. James needs to tank Victoria before her mouth gets him dead.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Good chapter, but she did just what I figured she would. She brushed it off. It didn't matter that she might loose the baby she still should have been told. That was her child too. We're they just not going to tell her if she miscarried? We're they not going to let her grieve her lost child. She caved way to easily in my honest opinion and I really hope she starts thinking about his secret keeping and confronts him about it and he actually own up to it instead of distracting her with sex. You can always tell a good writer when they make you either like or not like a character with such emotion. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Great chapter although I can't believe he is still keeping it a secret from her. I really hope she doesn't just brush it off when she finds out he's been keeping such a huge secret from her. She had every right in the world to know and I can't stand it when Bella just brushes it all off like oh well he lied and kept secrets but it's okay cause I just love him so much.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Yay!!!
Sherry
Date: 11 Jan 2018 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
It's about time Bella got a clue. lol. The Woods are awful people.
Sherry
Date: 10 Jan 2018 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Loved it!
Date: 10 Jan 2018 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Loved it!
Date: 09 Jan 2018 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
WOW she took him knowing a lot better than I thought. That was such a relief thanks lol
Date: 09 Jan 2018 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
The Woods where lucky to walk out the door they could of been leaving in a body bag such hatful ass holes. Lizzie is so cute OMG. The seceret will be out of the bag about the baby. I think she is going to freak out when she finds out that Edward knew about it and didnt tell her.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
I love this story makes me smile every time I see undaye
Date: 08 Jan 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
I'm so glad he was honest with her too!
Date: 08 Jan 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
I LOVE this fic. I’ve been bypassing it and man am I sorry that I did. I just binge-read from the beginning to here and can’t wait for more. Amazing fic!
Date: 08 Jan 2018 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
I am feeling much better lol.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
totally love this story
Date: 07 Jan 2018 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
:)
Date: 07 Jan 2018 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
THANK you. T
Date: 07 Jan 2018 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Hot hot hot.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Oh wow, how sweet. Now I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, please don't take too long to update, many thanks x
Date: 07 Jan 2018 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
I'm so loving this story right now and I can't seem to put it down, can't wait for your next update however, please do it soon as I'm looking forward to how everyone will react when Bella tells them she's pregnant especially Edward as he's already in the know x
Date: 07 Jan 2018 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Great chapter.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
can't wait for next chapter!!! please hurry!
Date: 07 Jan 2018 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Jasper, Jasper, Jasper! I hope he survives...
Date: 06 Jan 2018 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
I am absolutely enthralled with this story. It flows so well, and the storyline is superb!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Lizzie is so adorable! I'm so glad the pregnancy is going to be out. I hope edward doesn't have to leave town. Poor bella needs some sex!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
THANK YOU! Xx T
Date: 06 Jan 2018 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
:)
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Glad Mrs Cope finally brought up the obvious. The Woods are really kind of horrible, and stupid, people!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
I really love this story so much!! I love these characters especially lizzie!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
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Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Amazing chapter, I am so happy to see the update but I am patciant person and this story is worth the wait.
Date: 11 Dec 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
I was thinking that she could be pregnant and I am glad she is
Date: 05 Dec 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Edward better do something quick or Bella is going to get angry at him for not giving her enough sex.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
First, didn't Edward just recently give Bella some lecture about how whatever she did proved that she didn't trust him? Well, pot meet kettle.
Second, as a future healthcare provider, I find it absolutely appalling that any health professional would treat their patient like that. I understand that dealing with a mob boss changes the game of this fiction, but a doctor's first duty is not to the person paying them, but to the patient in their care and it should be a huge red flag to Edward that he is employing a healthcare professional with such a skewed moral compass as to suggest keeping secrets from their patient. (Also that feels a little bit like the doctor is trying to move a person of their interest into Edward's bed like a Henry the VIII drama)
I was really happy to see an update, and I hope to see another one soon.
Date: 03 Dec 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
I think she’s going to be pissed if she finds out he knew the whole time that she was pregnant and he never told her, I can understand his protectiveness but secrets are never good in a marriage. Most of the time the secret comes out so I hope he’s prepared for that. Awesome chapter, can’t wait to read what happens next.
Melissa
Date: 01 Dec 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
He may be doing it for the right reasons in his head, but secrets always come back to bite you. If she knew that he has known all this time and didn't tell her when she has every right to know she could loose all trust in him. Once trust is lost it's hard to get back. Great chapter can't wait for the next one.
Date: 30 Nov 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Glad Edward places the blame where it belongs and doesn't just mark entire families. Not sure I agree with him not telling her. Hopefully that won't blow up in his face
Date: 27 Nov 2017 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
If she finds out about the secret i think she will understand but mr. Mason will have to take a little punishment i'm guessing. I'm surprised her clothes aren't getting tighter yet.
Date: 27 Nov 2017 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Lizzie will be happy to know the gutting like a fish really did happen.
Date: 27 Nov 2017 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Ms. Cope is upset that her gun is missing.... Very funny!
Date: 27 Nov 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
I think he is messing up by not telling her she is going to be pissed.
Date: 27 Nov 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Love it! Update soon please! THANK YOU
Date: 27 Nov 2017 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Looks like they are all getting back on track after the failed kidnapping incident. Is Bella gonna be pissed at Edward for not telling her about being pregnant?
Sherry
Date: 27 Nov 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Well they are all underground now and perhaps Bella, Edward and Lizzie can start to settle down. I think Edward should just go ahead and tell her what the doctor said and please don't get mad it is what is best for everyone.
Date: 27 Nov 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Glad ur back...
Date: 26 Nov 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Love the chapter
Date: 26 Nov 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
I get why Edward has kept the secret, can’t fault him for that. The way this is written Bella seems to have withdrawn from the family a little, throwing herself into work. Or knowing Bella was prego at the beginning of this chapter, her working so much could explain why Edward hasn’t had sex with her. Just throwing it out there.
Date: 26 Nov 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Love it can't wait to read more.
Date: 26 Nov 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Secrets have a way of coming back to bite you in the ass. Edward needs to be reminded of tissue fact.
Date: 22 Nov 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
I definitely didn’t see THAT coming! Wow! Great chapter!
Date: 13 Oct 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
WOW! It was so good I immediately reread it twice. It was more than I looked for, but then you are one of my favorite authors. You always make me feel your characters' emotions intensely and although there is violence there are such sweet and loving moments. This is one of my favorite stories which I have read more than twice.
I hope life treats you better ... you certainly make mine better with your wonder stories.
Wishing you all the best.
Susan
Date: 10 Oct 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow I did not see the Charles part. Awesome chapter.
Date: 09 Oct 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Can I ask, how old is Edward in this story? I know Bella's 21 but what about Edward? That has just been bugging me in the back of my mind.
Date: 09 Oct 2017 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad you updated, love this story!!
Date: 08 Oct 2017 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
I actually did think it was Charlie.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMG I never thought it was Charle! Wonderful story can't wait to read more
Date: 06 Oct 2017 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it!!! As I said before, I absolutely love this story!! I hope life vets better for you soon. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
Prayers and hugs for you!
Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Date: 06 Oct 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
Prayers and hugs for you!
Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Date: 05 Oct 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
As always, a great chapter and great storyline, great writing and exciting to read. I love this story and I love your writing style. Never any mistakes in either english or punctuation etc. I know you are updating as quickly as you can and I appreciate this. Just please keep it coming until the end, which I hope doesn't come for a looooooong time.
Your Edward is so sexy and strong and just WOW. Thank you again, Pamela Hanley
Date: 05 Oct 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
Whoa...so much happened...excellent!
Date: 04 Oct 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
Well that was a surprise I thought it was William and Aro lol look forward to see how Bella takes the news of her dad's treachery x
Date: 03 Oct 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
I didn't see Charles being the traitor, nor did I see Jacob being his son. Oh my word, SUCH a good story!
Date: 03 Oct 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow that's awesome! What a chapter
Date: 03 Oct 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
Charles was a bad father from the beginning. He got what he deserved.
Date: 03 Oct 2017 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Excellent as always...
Date: 03 Oct 2017 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope life starts treating you better. Edward is something else OMG take charge or what. It is so sad that Bella's father didn't love her and tried to have her killed I am so glad Edward did gut him
Date: 03 Oct 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
Did not see Charlie. What a waste of oxygen. Brilliant chapter. Thank you
Date: 03 Oct 2017 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
No, I did not see that coming. I just started this story I am so happy that I did. I hope you update soon!!
Date: 02 Oct 2017 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
thank you for the update...well done
Date: 02 Oct 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow!!! Didn't see most of that coming.
Sherry
Date: 02 Oct 2017 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
I really am enjoying this story! Thank you for another great chapter.
Date: 02 Oct 2017 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
wow...wow...wow!!!
Date: 02 Oct 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, I love how Edward handled that and that Charles finally got what he deserved. Thanks for the update.
Date: 24 Sep 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
This story is amazing!!! I love it so much!! Please update soon...i have to know what happens.
Date: 18 Aug 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Damnthat was some showdown...so who was the rat?
Date: 14 Aug 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
OMG!! Please hurry on that next chapter!! I know I am selfish cuz I understand RL really can suck at any given time so just want to say, I have missed this story!! I hope you are able to continue with updating regularly now cuz I really enjoy your writing!! Thank you for sharing your gift of story telling with us!!
Date: 14 Aug 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Te Blacks are going to regret getting on Edward's bad side.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
I loved the chapter. thank you. I will miss Alec.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
OMG can't wait for the next chapter. Love your story.
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Wow!! My heart is racing! That was an intense chapter, AND I LOVED IT! I'm glad Bella and Mrs. Cope are going to be ok. I think Edward needs to tell Bella who the traitor is. It may have helped her know who to trust. The Lion is beyond furious! I'd be very afraid if I was Aro, William, and Jacob!
I started over and read from the beginning to this point and I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope things are better for you.
Date: 11 Aug 2017 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Incredible chapter! Poor Edward must've been freaking. Lizzie is so brave! I love these three! Can't wait to hear how they are.... Great story