Date: 09 Aug 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
lol for horny toad edward. Go bad ass Ms Cope. Hope B will be ok
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
It's getting good. Update soon
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2017 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Wow that was intense, I'm glad Bella is OK and I hope if she's pregnant that the baby is also. I have a feeling Edward is going to make Satan look merciful compared to what he does.
Date: 07 Aug 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Love it! Thank you!
Date: 07 Aug 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Loved it
Date: 06 Aug 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Poor Bella is she Is a brave mom. Edward is going to go for blood
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
:)
Date: 06 Aug 2017 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Yeah, you've managed to update. What a great chapter and it was certainly worth waiting for. Please update soon as I can't wait to see Edward unleashing his fury on Aro and William and maybe being too overprotective due to Bella being injured and maybe pregnant x
Date: 06 Aug 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Great chapter. Great job with Bella keeping her head. Lizzie should have stayed hidden but I get it. Oh and so hot!
Date: 06 Aug 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Awesome chapter!! I've missed you!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Dawn Edward is going to give them hell look forward to next update x
Date: 06 Aug 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
At last. It has been a long wait but worth the trouble. The chapter is more than interesting but I am so curious what happens next. Oh, well.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2017 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
What an action-packed chapter. Though I do have to disagree with Edward telling Lizzie it was ok, he should've encouraged her to have done what Bella told her.
Looking forward to Edward unleashing his wrath on Aro and William.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Wow a lot of excitment in that chapter. If Bella's pregnant on top of being injured Edward is going to be even more angrier.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2017 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Holy crap that was a good chapter, I kept trying to read faster just so I could find out what happened. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Melissa
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Great chapter!! I hop Edward succeeds in getting Bella pregnant cause I wanna see her wild side!!
Date: 01 Jul 2017 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite stories. it is one that I can come back and read over and over again. thank you for taking the time to create and share it
Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I love this story. Can't wait for more lemony goodness.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2017 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I'm still with you and still love this story. I hope you still continue on. I love your story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Best chapter.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
; )
Date: 07 Jun 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Glad Sheila finally wised up and ran. Good on Claire coming through with the information
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
It's fun to see edward let loose & have some silly time in public with bella.
Date: 06 Jun 2017 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I am glad that you are still doing this story. Can't wait to see what happens in Chicago
Date: 05 Jun 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I will stay with you till the end. We all need to remember you all have a life and sometimes shit happens. I am so excited when you update so thanks so much. Sam is a great guy. I cant wait to hear what happens to Jacob I hope Bella gets in on some of the act.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2017 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Loved the chapter and know the next one will be just as incredible as we see what's in store for Jacob! Thank you once again for this wonderful story
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
thank you, thank you for this update. I check every day for an update on this story and was thrilled to receive one today. I love this storyline, this Edward and this Bella. This is the best Edward and Bella that I have read -- and I read a lot. Every day. Please keep up the good work and more updates if you can find the time. Regards, Pamela
Date: 05 Jun 2017 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
One jay baby making time whoop whoop he is Edward freaking Cullen right he can get he's wife over he's shoulder and run of with her yay second sam and Claire yay she needs her happy ever after I wonder how her daughter will react to Sam how would Sam react to her daughter third Jacob is an ass and he has disgraced he's family he's father the mafia family every thing he gets it's because he earned it so Edward let loose the lion inside you get him
Date: 05 Jun 2017 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Date: 05 Jun 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
:) :)
Date: 05 Jun 2017 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 05 Jun 2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Good chapter. Welcome back!
Date: 05 Jun 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I hope Sheila gets away clean
Date: 05 Jun 2017 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I am so loving your story; keeps you on your toes and waiting to see what happens next. So by your comments it sounds like Bella may not be pregnant yet but it also sounds like they are going to have a lot of fun making a baby. Ooh Jacob is in trouble now; ha ha can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 04 Jun 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Loved the chapter. Can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Jun 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Happy thoughts
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
:)
Date: 04 Jun 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I love his so in charge attitude. Plant away baby. Can't wait for Jacobs retribution. And the grove line from the family members that still supported him.
Date: 04 Jun 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Great update! I'm happy Edward is letting her in on everything!
Date: 04 Jun 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Thanks for the update, this is my favorite wip
Date: 04 Jun 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
Loved it!
Date: 04 Jun 2017 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
:):)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
As always a great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
As always a great chapter!
Date: 01 Jun 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Dying for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
I love the lion and his kitten! I can't wait for more!
I wonder who the rat is?! Bella is extremely lucky that Paul got to her in time I can't wait to see what's next for Leah and her girls. I look forward to the torture Edward has planned for Jacob!
Date: 19 Apr 2017 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Edward is honorable and Bella should have known better. Hopefully Bella won't be stupid again. She needs to break ties with Leah and Sue. They are not trustworthy.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
thank you for the update...well done...Edward ain't nothing to mess with...lol jacob Black will find out soon enout ..also the rat...I wonder who that is....Mrs Cope was lucky Edward didn't pounce on her for the way she spoke to him...until you post again
Date: 11 Apr 2017 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
OMG who is the rat cant wait to find out
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 10 Apr 2017 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Go Mrs Cope ! Jacob - dead man soon hopefully
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Makes me wanna know who the traitor is.
Sherry
Date: 08 Apr 2017 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Great update! Thanks for the chapter! Way to go mrs. Cope!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
That was an evil lemon block!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2017 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
I so love this story
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Great chapter. I loved how they talked this out.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
I figured he was not cheating, but I am still pissed she left like that. I'm not sure that her doubt of him won't leave a crack in their relationship. Regardless of her insecurities, he has never given her a reason to doubt his love for her.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
I had no doubts that Edward would handle things. Cannolis with Edward now that sounds yummy.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
WOW! ;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2017 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
:)
Date: 05 Apr 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Glad B does have Ms Cope to stand up for her. But I can also understand why E is pissed
Date: 05 Apr 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Glad B does have Ms Cope to stand up for her. But I can also understand why E is pissed
Date: 05 Apr 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Glad B does have Ms Cope to stand up for her. But I can also understand why E is pissed
Date: 05 Apr 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
Glad Edward is so forgiving and understanding to these women. I'd be highly pissed if I was doubted and treated the way they treated him. Really do they not know him at all?
Date: 16 Mar 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Bella is stupid to go alone to aid of her friend.
Thank you, I like this fiction.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Keep writing
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Great chapter. I was worried there for a minute.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
I love the poem. Poor Bella she misses Edward, she knows there is something going on with Leah, and then she gets those emails. I'm glad she told him about them. I don't believe he is cheating.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Wow poor Leah. Glad Paul showed up when he did. Bella does need to stop and think
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
I'm surprised edward didn't give her a firm spanking. She def. earned one!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
I love this story can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
hmm, not a big fan of Edwards at the moment, nor Bella - shes too weak, I thought she could shoot, but she doesn't carry even though they live in a dangerous family. I guess the fact that im thinking about it all shows how well written it was. Well done
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2017 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Bella acted with her heart and not her head. Things could've ended very badly. I'm anxious to know what is on the footage from Russia.
Sherry
Date: 08 Mar 2017 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
A little more stupid than brave if you ask me !
Date: 08 Mar 2017 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
OMFNG!!! WOW!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Stupid Jacob!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Wow! Wow! Wow! It took my breath away!
Date: 07 Mar 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Yeah! I was hoping for another chapter this AM and you delivered in more ways than one. It was quite suspenseful with Jake's treachery and I loved how you resolved it so quickly...but what really surprised me was Edward's return. That was also tense as you left so many avenues for this situation to go down. Needless to say, once again you WOWed me with the sensuality, love and caring. I am looking forward to Jake getting his just desserts and what Edward has to show Bella.
You are a favorite author of mine and I have been following you for sometime.
Your appreciative and avid reader,
Susan
Date: 07 Mar 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
5%brave 95% stupid. She knows Jacob is violent. Going there without backup was stupid. That said, Jane or someone should teach Bella &Lizzie choke release and wrist release techniques
Date: 07 Mar 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Bella was so stupid. She knows better. They need to change their work schedules so they spend more time together. They can't spend months apart. She needs to work from home and only travel when they can go together. This is especially true since Elizabeth is now in school.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
I think all Bella was think was with her heart. I am so happy that Edward is the man he is and loves her so much. I cant wait for them to catch up to Jacob.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Great chapter,loved it!Cant wait to read more! Hope Jacob gets what is coming to him. Can't wait to find out about this girl with Edward.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
I hope he does it with a dull knife!
Date: 07 Mar 2017 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
She was stupid. So stupid. Can't wait to see what Edward does.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2017 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2017 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
I'm looking forward to more honey. I hope you are feeling better.
Sherry
Date: 05 Mar 2017 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Nice update!
He's got some 'splainin to do!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Hey !
This story is great...I just wish that you would update sooner
Date: 03 Mar 2017 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
Love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
She is no fool. Who was the women with him?
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
I think Edward is a fucking dumbass for not telling her what is going on, but I can see he would rather tell her in person instead of over the phone/email/text. But he better have a good explanation. I have a feeling that it really is his former in-laws or Jacob.
Date: 01 Mar 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
She was so lucky to get away from her family. Leah is in trouble and who is sending those pics? Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
God I just love this story so much! Every chapter has me falling more and more in love with the characters and the plot itself! Of course I wish the updates were faster and more often but at the same time that would mean shorter chapters and I love a good long chapter that I can read and tide myself over with until the next update! Anyway loved the chapter and can't wait for the next update! I can guarentee that the photos of Edward's so called affair are some ploy from Jacob and Charlie and maybe even Sue and Leah to drive Bella to doubt Edward and his love for her! So can't wait for a baby Masen to come! I want one so bad! But I don't see that happening for a little while until everything is settled down! Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds! I am definitely curious to know who the blonde is with Edward in Russia. Probably Tanya. But I seriously doubt Edward would ever cheat on Bella. No he loves her too much!
Date: 01 Mar 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
So maybe he is isn't actually cheating by having sex with someone else, but being out with someone, touching and carrying on in public is a form of cheating in my book. How would he like it if Bella was out doing things like that instead of taking care of his daughter? Edward could have explained what was going on instead of getting angry. I am a bit irritated with him right now.
Thank you for writing. I love this story.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
:)
Date: 01 Mar 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
UGH that son of a ..... GAH! It better be nothing ... But still i hate when they get all "It's not what it seems..." If he is "looking" at her in an intense way then shame on him.... Boooooooo on the Russian blonde!!!!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
I think it is either Jacob or Aro who is sending the emails