Date: 10 Mar 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was sensual and erotic and beautiful more please
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ich liebe diese Geschichte und kann nicht warten , für dieFortsetzung
Author's Response:
thank you! ♥
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Right up until Bella said how good it felt, I forgot about how good it felt when my milk would let down. My ex and I never considered having him drink from them ... but I bet it would feel REALLY good during sex. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 09 Mar 2016 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
ah, I see! poetic license! your chapters are short, but always pack quite an erotic punch. I love reading you...
Author's Response:
i love writing for you! lol hugs!♥
Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
are you going to use more images to the story?
it's so good that you are improving your story...
Author's Response:
its my trademark! definitely! lol
Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
aww thank you!
Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Lol would love my own Edward look forward to next update x
Author's Response:
I would love one too! lol...thank you!
Date: 09 Mar 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Please keep going and post soon
Date: 09 Mar 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm excited...cat wait to see what all happen next.
Date: 09 Mar 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
oooh E is def a lucky dude!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2016 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Your reply to my last review had me chuckling. If you only knew how my brain worked you would be shaking your head.
You write intriguing scenarios and most often plausible outcomes. They engage my mind and ask it to come play with your characters. Too much fun!
The feel of this rewrite is a bit more methodical in dealing with the extenuating circumstances surrounding Edward and Isabella. Laying the best possible groundwork for their continued success in the future.
Slow and steady wins the race, says the toirtise. 🐢
I remember how much Edward enjoyed this special treat from his little girl in the previous version. Will he need that extra workout to keep the calories down? Hehe
So far they have a good balance between communication and desire.
What will be their first hurdle to jump together? Her move in day?
Author's Response:
oh no...u surely remember...blow job class ! laughs....yeah this isn't going to sit well with Edward at all...
Date: 09 Mar 2016 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love this story the first time I read it and I think this new one will be just as great.. Please post soon the wait kills me 👐👐👐👐
Date: 09 Mar 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hot damn that was sexy more please
Date: 08 Mar 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
What the hell....you stop now!
How many chapters do you think this story will have.
Author's Response:
Laughs I wished I knew the Answer....I don't write the way most do but I am adhereing to 3-4 pagez a chapter that is all I know for now...I will update soon promise!
Date: 08 Mar 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh my! how unique of her? how is she able to do this without just having given birth? hormones? what man wouldn't like that? the pic you used for her body is nice and curvy. like a real woman....
Author's Response:
I will write a little about that in answer to ur questions in the future lol thanks in glad u like it...
Date: 08 Mar 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love it. I hope you update again soon. You spoil us so, giving us two updates in one day. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying it...I love this Edward..hes the ideal Daddy Dom !
Date: 08 Mar 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
oooh wasn't expecting that twist. Interesting.
Author's Response:
Neither was Edward! laughs.....
thanks! I am glad u enjoy this!
Date: 08 Mar 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
I really enjoyed the chapter. I'm looking forward to Edward's response to Bella's question at the end. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'd balk on seafood too. Blech. Glad he is being strong though
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good thing they have Carlisle and Ben as role models for him and Ang for her
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
There it is.........Bella's ready to put the pout into full affect to get herself situated in his bedroom.
Based on Edward's firm stance on waiting until an agreement is signed and his insistence on her living arrangements, I think she would reserve the pout for a battle she might win. Haha.
Lovin the rewrite.
Author's Response:
I am so glad you are enjoying it the second time around! Thank you!
I Love the very interesting reviews u leave...I think you are in my head sometimes....
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good for him! His reasoning seems sound. I'm glad she agrees. I'm having a great time reading this again!
Author's Response:
grins! me too!
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is starting off doing great he put a stop to her and set the rules and explained why this the right way I loved it
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good first meeting and date.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
Full steam ahead or cautiously proceeding?
Learning from each other is how most relationships establish a firm foundation. A true partnership. Knowing full well what the other requires and when to relinquish the reigns of control.
Ebb and flow, push and pull. Balance.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad he was able to make their date
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad he's reading up and not just playing by ear
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ah so she doesn't know Carlisle... Interesting. Love how open and up front she is
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
They are rapidly sorting out the identifiable and very compatible qualities between them as a Dominant Daddy and Lg.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great introduction of our kiddos. Wonder when Carlisle will come back
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Carlisle is def dropping him in the deep end of the pool. Lol
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have noticed an ease of flow in your rework of this storyline. The transitions between settings and character ideas is more detailed.
How far do you let them physically go at on this first date? Will Edward put the breaks on calling on his new role as Daddy?
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome back to TWCS!!!!
I didn't get to read last time Round. Looking forward to it
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is already in over his head.
Will Carlisle be of any assistance?
Bella being the one to molkd him may noit be exactly what they need. She may find out her way of manipulating Edward is detrimental and not team building.
Edward needs a mentor.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella's decision to seek a daddy figure is far deeper than the absent sperm donor her mother found. Then again that relationship has not been expounded upon. Maybe it was mom's fault that daddy dearest was missing from their lives.
None the less, this is a part of Bella's pursuit of emotional well-being and happiness.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can he find the attributes in himself of the perfect Daddy to offer himself up for the job?
Date: 08 Mar 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward's minbd is reeling yet he feels drawn to the activities surrounding him.
Will the green eyes assist his curiosity?
Date: 08 Mar 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was enticed by your first version of this story.
I can't wait to see the nuances of a seasoned writer as you retell this delectable tale.
We all welcome you back. You are a huge part of this fandom and we appreciate all you offerer up from your gifted heart.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
: ) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it so sweet and sexy now when will they start playing
Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Let me say that I love your writing. You have some of the most inventive and creative stories I have read. Your writing has steadily improved as you have had more practice. When you first started you had a problem with homyns but you have vastly improved on that front. Having said that, please don't be offended by my correction; "my interest was peaked" should be "my interest was piqued".
As I said, please don't be offended. It was meant in the kindest way that constructive critisism can be meant. I'm a big fan of your writing. Please continue. My hope is to see you move into being a published author, because I think you're that good.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
You are changing this quite a bit, I think. I know you've said this, but since I don't remember details of the old version, it is difficult to really tell. I read 46 chapters before and only remember the generalities of the story. This just feels different. Good, but different. I like that you are putting your life experiences into the story. It only makes it seem better, more real...thanks!
Author's Response:
Yes it's changed quite a bit...not the story but my writing...i tend to repeat alot and I am trying to stop that... My writing is long enough I don't need to make it longer ...I'm going on my own here also my beta is still with me but she never worked on this with me before this was all me....we will see how it goes when I it up the first lemon those are my biggest issue right now...i seem to be unlike myself anymore..I'm just going to write it and let go.... Crosses fingers....
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
And I am so reading it while they re doing it!!! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks! I am so glad this is back ;)
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good for you! I'm proud you can identify with babygirl/sub.
Here's to hoping you have a gentle, but firm, loving Daddy/Dom!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
I have to tell you I shocked myself when I found the idea of DD/ls so intriguing. I am not, nor will I ever be capable of being a serious sub, except for maybe in the bedroom/playroom. The very thought of letting someone have that much control over me enrages me. LOL :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm not in the BDSM lifestyle, but I'm always interested in people who are. Thank you for giving me a glimpse into what it's like. I've learned a lot through your writing. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am really looking forward to more of this. You are one of the best, Monkey. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor guy has no idea what hit him, does he? She is truly the one with all the power here and he will just be along for the ride. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm sensing that this will be the beginning of something big. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see who Edward meets. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's so good to look forwardto where you left off. 😊 Read You Soon.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
I loved it its like they were ment to find each other so great more please
Date: 05 Mar 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm loving this story. So glad you're back!
Date: 05 Mar 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love this story. Welcome back
Date: 05 Mar 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am so glad you have added this one back on! It was was one of my faves from you!!! I am looking forward to reading it again! Thank you! I have missed your stories!
Date: 05 Mar 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
So good. She's a bit of a tease, isn't she? I think he likes that.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Happy to have another chapter
Date: 05 Mar 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
I like the changes! It's like reading something new but familiar ;)
great chap! Continue please :)
Date: 04 Mar 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
What happened to the person that was Beta-ing for you before? I do notice that this doesn't seem as familiar as it once was, but can't pinpoint the changes. I am amazed at your growth as a writer, but I shouldn't be and don't mean anything derogatory about your previous writing. I am enjoying this story a lot. I am enjoying very much having you back in the FF world, writing, again!!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
This has a definite allure to it. Not for myself, I'm not a baby girl, not at ALL, but the dynamic here is fascinating! Thanks!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sweetie all you did was improve your magic. Truly worth the wait but....PLEASE! don't keep us waiting too long. READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 04 Mar 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I worried you'd come back once it was too late for me to enjoy all your stories to completion. Thank You for coming back I'm sure it was a difficult decision to return but maybe it's what will make you smile again. I missed you as I'm sure many other readers have as well. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 04 Mar 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love it even the changes and for it not being beta it's really well written thank you
Date: 04 Mar 2016 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
So great to be reading your stories again, Thank you!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
love it!!! can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh I love it she knew just what you say to him so sexy
Date: 03 Mar 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
pleased your back really enjoy your writing, patiently waiting for more plz
Date: 03 Mar 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
You have me hooked all over again I keep looking to see if you posted another chapter
Date: 03 Mar 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
He didn't get her phone number! Thanks for writing!
Date: 03 Mar 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Its so nice to have you back
Date: 03 Mar 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
I have missed them and you so much!
Date: 03 Mar 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great start.
I keep reading about previous stories. We new readers want to read them too.
Please reload your older stories for us to enjoy. ...Or at least where can we find them.
Author's Response:
If you are on face book friend me and I will add you to my group where alot of my stories are posted...even some that have never been published online...
here is the link to my facebook and the group link
https://www.facebook.com/R0bsHandMonkey
https://www.facebook.com/groups/318493874836042/
Date: 03 Mar 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am so excited to see this up and going again! Can't wait for more.
Date: 03 Mar 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Carlisle spanked Chelsea? I don't remember reading that. Guess I missed it, but I don't ususally miss things like that. I like that she seems to be intelligent along with being sexy. The way she explained the meaning of fetish told me that. I'm guessing he might like that also.
Author's Response:
Garrett spanked Chelsea....lol....♥
Date: 03 Mar 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love that you use KS for your Bella. So many writers don't, these days. For me there is nobody else to picture as Edward and Bella blut RP and KS. Lovely introduction in this chapter!
Author's Response:
In my world there is no other Edward or Bella but Robert and Kristen...otherwise to me they aren't Edward and Bella...I agree with you...
Date: 03 Mar 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my GOD! You are amazing! I have loved all your stories and this is setting out to be no different. How do you do it? So perfect. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
aww thank you!
Date: 03 Mar 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
This lady knows what she wants, but does she know "who" gets a trial run, too?!
Date: 03 Mar 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
So.... they met;)
I think its awesome how much chemistry they have right from the start