Date: 15 Feb 2021 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am very sorry about the loss of your husband and puppy. What you and your beta have written is very true. All stories on these sites can have similar plot lines because there is only some many ways to write a story. I enjoy your story and look forward to more chapters when you can post them. Take care of you and your family, my prayers are with you all to get through this difficult time.
Thank you! What you said means a lot to me.
Date: 01 Jul 2020 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Question why would she bed two purple camera's
Two purple cameras? Do you mean two purple Camaro's? Edward is a car collector and is starting one for bella. Not only that one is a classic Camaro whole the other is a newer one.
Date: 31 Jan 2020 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm enjoying your story so much!!!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Please don't make me wait to long! Thanks
Thank you for leaving a review! I make no promises on when I will be able to update again. My RL has a lot going on in it at the moment as well as my beta's.
Date: 16 Jan 2020 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hey Hap and Flamingpen,
I think you ladies are doing a wonderful job. Don't let the haters get you down. I'm happy when you do update. It gives me something to read during the day...LOL!
See you next time.
Thank you! I generally don't let the flamers get to me. It's just getting tired some of being told that my story is just like No Ordinary Proposal when it's not. There are so many stories with the same concept. it's just what the author does with it that makes them different.
Date: 04 Mar 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for the update..well done..They are going to love Disney World...I'm happy for all of them..until you post again
Thank you! It's been many years since I went to DW. That doesn't mean that I don't want to go back one of these days...
Date: 03 Mar 2018 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am so sorry you and your family have had such a hard time. Hopefully things will turn around for you. So glad you are continuing this story. You are a really good writer. I truly enjoying reading this story. Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you! The next chapter has been started. I just need the motivation to get it finished. I was also lucky that my beta was able to go over this chapter as quickly as she did.
Date: 26 Jun 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
DisneyLand and/or Disney World always puts a smile on my face! I totally understand how RL can be...don't let anything get you down!
Who wouldn't be happy going to either place? I know I would be if I got to go more often to Disneyland. :)
Date: 03 Feb 2017 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Why is Bella acting so immature if she's obviously smart enough to get in to college????
What 18 year old acts mature? Not a lot do unless there are circumstances that force them to grow up at an early age.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
: ) Sweet and to the point. Mmmmm!!!!! I can't help but smile. : )
Thank you! I try and my beta helps a lot. In fact I can never post anything until I have her stamp of approval. My prereader who also writes and has the same beta found out the hard way that one should never post without her stamp of approval. I found it quite funny and keep in mind that I value my beta as well as her friendship and our sisterhood. ^_^
Date: 02 Feb 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
First and foremost I always check out the reviews before I start a new story and I absolutely love that you respond even to the smiley faces. Second I love "No Ordinary Proposal " and your right many stories have similarities but it's the writers that make them there own. So f*ck people who b*tch about it. I started reading this little gem and I love it. I look forward to reading your magic. : D
Thank you for not only reviewing, but for at least giving my story a try and not telling me how it's like No Ordinary Proposal. So many stories with similarities, but you're right it's how the writer takes it that makes the differences and that makes it their own.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Very cute story. As for Goofy's Kitchen, I can confidently tell you that it is a must for anyone. The buffet is amazing and they have something called Peanut Butter and Jelly Pizza and it is incredible. We go there several times a year. At Disneyland you can also buy special tickets to watch Fantasmic ( it used to be above Pirates) and you got free dessert and coffee and such while you watched. I saw many engagements there! I don't know where you are located but if you have any Disney related questions, I worked there for 10 years, feel free to ask. FYI, ESPN Zone's food, meh, average. Just ate there Tuesday, still not super great but the atmosphere is fun.
Thanks for the review! It's been a couple of years since I've been to Disneyland. I live in So Cal and have been there plenty of times.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Can't wait to hear the story of the purple Camaro! How great that Charlie has moved to be near his daughter. Edward and his family will all like her dad, I'm betting! The trip to Disney was so much fun to read about, I thank you!
Date: 04 Jul 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sounds just like I would imagine a day at the happiest place on earth really would be!
If you happen to be there for more then just a day, then yes and you can take both parks at your leisure. If it's just for a day then it's more like get everything in that you can. It also helps to go when it's not busy.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Just this first little bit is fun, can't wait until they get to the really good stuff tomorrow! What do you suppose is the problem with FFN? Seems as if they are always having drama and turmoil over there!
Thank you for the review! The problem with FFN is that none of the authors can turn off the guest reviews anymore, we can moderate them. But when it get's to the point that someone feels that they can send death threats behind a anonymity guest review then that's when I say enough is enough. While I usually can tolerate the guest reviews, I will not tolerate getting a death threat by someone that felt they could do so without being logged in. With TWCS and FictionPad they need to be logged in to leave a review. Plus the fact that FFN does nothing for a long time about people that plagiarize others. If you feel the need to talk to me some more about this please feel free to PM on FFN as I still have my account there and my PM's are still turned on since I know we can't send messages here.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is certainly going to be a fun chapter! Bella being a big Disney fan makes this probably the trip of a lifetime! Wait until she sees what all Edward has bought for her, too!
Oh, it's definitely a trip of a lifetime for her. One of many as well.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
This whole situation must seem rather strange to Bella's dad. I wonder what is going through his mind right now? I'll bet he's thinking about moving, just to be closer to her in her new circumstances.
We shall find out, won't we.... ;)
Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is taking all the new people in stride, showing what a well balanced person she is, despite her age. Some of us are just born a little older than others, I guess. Everyone seems to like her and she likes them. It's definitely a good beginning.
Some people are just more mature then others at any age is my opinion.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward seems to be a natural caretaker and protector. This must appeal to Bella, since she made up her mind pretty fast. This situation is unusual and intriguing!
He is, but only with her has it came out.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, a pretty amazing proposal, proposition, whatever! He sure laid it all out so she knows what's expected. It really is a lot to think about. How bad could it be if he lets her dad stay with them? That should be reassuring right there!
It wouldn't be bad at all. :)
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I guess he took one look, one listen and fell hard! I will be interested to see if Bella takes his offer. Tanya got exactly what she deserved, too the incompetent bitch!
Yes, he did. I feel that justice was served when it came to Tanya.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
yours is the first actual response I have received, thank you! I love this story! I am curious as to Charlie's feelings with regard to Edward's offer. That would be a dream come true for a car buff like him! I hope for Bella's sake he takes the offer. Ilove your twist on all the characters...
If I told you Charlie's answer that would be giving part of the story away. ;) I guess we'll find out soon enough if he does move to New York or not. Wow, responding back to the readers review is quite easy. I should be thanking you for not only liking what's up so far, but for leaving the reviews that you have.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bummer-! I was all ready for Disneyland... I hope things are better in RL for your beta... selfish on my part- but really, I do hope they are. Ready for the new chappy!
Disneyland itself isn't exactly in chapter 9, Downtown Disney is though. Disneyland is coming up in chapter 10.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Charlie is really starting to like Edward... he may have had some misgivings but I think he is feeling better about it as he spends time with Edward getting to know him.
Charlie definitely feels better after spending some time with Edward.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
Quite a bit going on... I like the shake up on your characters with Seth and Jacob being in Edward's employ and not being a n enemy of his for Bella's attention. Also Charlie as a teacher and car buff... niiice...
Thank you for reviewing. It's always a nice change from Jacob literally always being a dog. ^_^
Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have read No Ordinary Proposal. Yours is definitely note the same... only the scholarship...
Thank you for not only the review, but for giving my story a try. I wish that others would realize that there are how many stories that have the same elements in them, but that the plot is what makes each one different.