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Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

would have loved to have bella beat her down a bit more...

and how about edward pushing her off and getting away from her

a bit more? i know a guy cant hit a girl, but how about having a body

guard do it for him? edward sounds like he has so many excuses...

it wasnt my fault...she ambushed me... just how many times will he allow her to kiss him before he puts his foot down,,,somehow??

wished we could see maggie be oh so humiliated...what happened in the meeting

is obviously not enough...


Author's Response:

This was written for the Down Maggie Down contest for Me and Mr. Cullen by Catastrophia. It has nothing to do with the actual story for that you would need to read MaMC.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)  loved reading this again 

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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