Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 8: Truth
Great chapter! Between Leah and Jacob, Rachel finally got her head on straight! Of corse, Paul's cd din't hurt, either!
Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 7: Surrender
That was as amazing as I knew it would be between them! I'm so glad they have both said the words, also! The last part must have been overpowering, her lover first , followed by her brother! So, now the whole truth can come out!
Date: 10 Jun 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 7: Surrender
Guess the wolf's outta the bag! Hang in there, Rachel, it gets better :)
Date: 10 Jun 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 7: Surrender
really
you end it there?!?!?!?!
cant wait for the next chapter!!
so glad she finally gave in
Date: 21 May 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: Dismissal
This woman is just kidding herself if she thinks she can just blow off the way she reacts to this man! She can call him highschool boy all she wants, but that's not what he is. I wish he could tell her why they are so drawn to each other! I also wish she could get over this age thing, too!, it's not that big a deal!
Date: 14 May 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 5: Gravity
The end of this chapter makes me want to say"the plot thickens"! It must have shocked Rachel to have Jake pop up out of nowhere! The pull between her and Paul is growing day by day. She is just going to have to accept what she's feeling, despite his age. Of course it would help if she had a clue about imprinting!
Date: 06 May 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 4: Crutch
I really liked their interaction at the cemetery, even though it made her cry. Him talking to his mom was just so sweet, as was the fact he had left flowers for her mom, too! I see that the secret seems to be creeping closer to coming out. You can almost feel Rachel's attitude changing toward Paul.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: Evasion
I really like the growing feelings between them. I think Rachel is just going to have to accept that Paul is her future, in so many ways!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 2: Marked
Poor girl thinks she has some control over this , not knowing there will be very little she do to fight these feelings! I know she will try, though, being the stubborn soul she is.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming
Looks like Rachel better prepare herself for mystery, and not just her brothers' disappearence! That time stopping moment when their eyes locked will have far-reaching consequences!