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Reviewer: Vitoria2204 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2024 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Continuar por 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so excited!!!  Thank you!  ðŸ’œ

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2019 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love this plot and your Edward and Bella!  I have you on alert in the hope that you'll decide to continue this story.  I have read and re-read and loved your other stories. I really really hope you do!!



Author's Response:

I am working on it....again.... ;-)

 

Reviewer: JordanY2k Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thank gonna update 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2018 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love it 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2018 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great update 

Reviewer: Mannco Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

Please please please please please please continue on with this Edward/Bella mafia story!! These last 10 chapters are not nearly enough!! Such an interesting storyline you have started. Please continue writing more chapters!! Thank you

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love the storie

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

it took me a while, but I finally got the story re-read so that I could read the new chapter. I like this one a lot and think they are very evenly matched! Happy holidays and I so look forward to more!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2016 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for this update!!

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

You are so welcome your highness please continue as you can I love your prose so much. You are so talented and brilliant.

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2016 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow! That was really hot. I can't wait until they finally get together. 

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2016 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 10

I do believe I'd have to turn him down on that offer! Lol

Author's Response:

lol...I know right?

yeah um no thank you for me too even if you are Edward... :-P

Reviewer: Romana973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for a great update!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is one kinky bastard. I can see Bella being intrigued by his fantasy. lol

Sherry

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2016 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

Has Edward taken any additional precautions during this excursion into Swan territory?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh Ms. Monkey I have missed your words. As your fan I will always wait for your updates. Thank You!

Author's Response:

awww thank you!!! xoxo

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2016 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow that is one freaky fantacy I think Bella is on board.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2016 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

good

Reviewer: PoseyRosey Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great to see this chapter up this is a great story, can't wait to read more. Happy Halloween

Reviewer: Romana973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: TriMom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am crazy about his story.  I can not wait until you write more and finish it.  You have so many brilliant ideas and quite the imagination. Where do they come from?  Nothing I have ever read before. Your spelling and grammar are impeccable and so excellently executed.  I truly am eager, excited, and just plain noting at the bit to see where the next part goes. Mason is an enigma and Bella is mysterious and the way you have presented them are spectacular.  Thank you, thank you, thank you for such an incredible beginning. 

 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2016 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

Omg ! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful story! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

His fantasy....I'll accept the challenge! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

That went better than I thought!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

Yes he is! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

Intrigued! 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

Hope you will keep writing:-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

I think Bella and Edward have the same fanatasy

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow that was abrupt even for mason...

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

He doesn't give anything away at all. I dare say his fantasy has just changed to what she wants only he will be the one giving it to her. Debbie

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 9

Rambo made archery sexy...and super effective LOL!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love Bella and how strong she is

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

After hearing Bella's,  I'm sure Edward's includes Bella. 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 9

Edward is an asshole.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Why do I think Masen is gonna fullfil that fantasy for Bella?

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

good :)

Reviewer: robin5589 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

I was so glad to see an update. I loved it and am anxious to see if Edward is ready to make that fantasy become a reality. Also curious what his fantasy could be. Lol loved Bella 's remark about the phone call she would likely receive regarding Garrett's fantasy. 

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Damn, Bella... That's a fucking hot fantasy.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 9

I think Edward is more than capable of making her fantasy happen.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

methinks your telling of her fantasy has been influenced by what you have just experienced at the hands, and body, of that well-endowed hunk you told us about. I am salivating. 

Bella is deceptive in her strength and skill. I love that! Love this story!



Author's Response:

Here is the really  creepy  part. I wrote  that  BEFORE I met Tony. And what really  freaked  me  out  is  that  all  of it was spot on outside of the up  against  the  wall  scene....remember  I did  a teaser  of it  in  my  group? I reread  it  and  got  chills thinking  did  he  read  this  before? I know  it's  hard  to believe  even  for  me but check the  dates  it  was  written  and  when  I met  Tony...I still shiver thinking  about  it. 

He is like excellent  at  what  he does. I get completely  lost in him  when  we close  the  door...it's mind-blowing  the  passion we have...he does these little things that  just....and  I do  things  to  him  no  one  else  does...he is dangerous....but so much fun....and sexy...Im kidnapping him  tomorrow night  lol 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bella fantasizes about an Alpha lover how will take control.  There's no one in this story that fits the bill is there?  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

He could easily give her the fantasy she wants! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

Was Bella goading him with that fantasy tale or was she really telling him her deepest desires?
Edward didn't really learn anything new from her private Facebook profile and pictures. It just solidified her capabilities as a soldier.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bet Edward makes her fantasy come true.

Reviewer: Karsata Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh but I would like to hear about his fantasy! *pouting a little* I hope he will tell us all about it in upcoming chapters! *grins* Thank you for this chapter! 

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh, I love your Bella. She is amazing! Edward is so going to have his hands full with her. She is going to kick his ass while making him fall in love with her at the same time. Loved this chapter, sweets. xoxo

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

There was so much to love about this chapter. First of all, I'm a hugh Garrett fan, and his banter with Bella over the handcuffs was so funny. I love how you keep throwing in those BDSM terms, girl. You can't help yourself, can you? lol The whole underground compound rocks, and all of the equipment... so cool. This Edward is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Who wouldn't love a bad ass Mafia guy who is as good with a computer as he is with a gun? You create the best characters. I can't wait for more. xoxo

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

WOW!! Bella has huge plans!! When you come up with a plot, girl, you don't mess around. i can't wait to see how this all plays out. I'm hoping this is going to be a very long, long story. ;)  I can't tell you how much I'm loving this. xoxo

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wouldn't mind a vacation home like that one *drool!*

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 5

You gave us so much good stuff in this chapter, babe! I loved the part about Charlie and Bella when she was little! And then you give us two mysteries...what does Masen Sr. want to talk to Charlie about concerning Bella, and who is following Bella. Then we have the anticipation of Edward and Bella going to LA together. I can't wait to see what happens there!  I am worried though about what Charlie said about Bella breaking Edward's heart. But I trust you, and I know you will give us a happy ending. Loved the chapter. xoxo

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

Every chapter keeps getting better and better.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 8

They are perfect together, I wonder when they will realize that. 

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Good grief, woman! This story gets better with every chapter!  These two are like fire and ice; I just can't decide which one is which. lol  And shame on you for not telling us what Edward and Charlie were whispering about. I think I know, but sometimes your devious little mind fools me. This story is making me so happy. Thank you for writing something in my favorite genre. Love the new blog, by the way. xoxo

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

A transfer of power........
Edward has taken back the edge. But only by a small margin. Lol
Bella has compared Edward to Charlie and admires his courage, Edward has discovered the hold she has on the men in her life; this mental exchange has allowed their emotions to be controlled a bit tighter than before when their knowledge of each other was limited.
Does Bella have plans of ever going legit after cleaning up the streets?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

Edward is sitting back, taking in all the connections and power that Bella wields. But, at some point, he needs to regain control of this operation. How will he continue to observe?
Does Garrett think Bella is heading up this deal? Does he think he is still second in command? He will be schooled in that area soon by Masen.
Who, from his team, has Masen's back at this moment?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad Edward took a little control back. Bella needed to realize she isn't his boss. She seems so spoiled to me.

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

love it

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loving this fic.

Sherry

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love how these two interact.  Definitely a love, hate waht to kill you want to have sex with you type of yo yo feelng.  I think there is more behind Bella's wanting to help too. 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved the chapter!   Thanks for the Playlist on the Rogue blog!   Awesome song 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

I am soooo looking forward to them sparing in the bedroom!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

He is jealous of all the men around her. He just needs to play nice a little longer.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Badass Bella.  I'm digging it already.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love the fireworks between Edward and Bella, both the physical ones and the business ones! This is going to be so much fun! You have come up with a great plot line for these two. I can't wait to see them work together to take over LA and take on the Cartel. But, woman, did you have to brand my poor Edward? lol You know I love all of your stories, but a Mobward will always be one of my favorites...next to Purrward, of course. Great chapter, sweets, as always. xoxo

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

She must trust him at least a little to let him drive her to a place she didn't know about. They are well matched. I wonder if someone close to her was involved in the human trafficking as a victim. Maybe that's why she feels so strongly about it. Love the teaser and Edward's response to fighting her next! Thanks and see you next time!

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

Lol, she always gets a reaction out of him in some way. I'm surprised she didn't pull a move on him when he had a knife to her throat. Let's hope she calls her crew about where she is or someone is likely to flip. Debbie

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love the teaser for the next chapter.  I love the way they are together when they stop trying to be in control of everything.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

CHICKEN.. last line. LOL

 

Love it.

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

They seem evenly matched.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: Karsata Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

wow, this chapter was really impressive! Can't wait to read the next one! ;)

Reviewer: Sue2265 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loving this Edward and Bella. 

Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing first chapter!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ok two funny parts to this story the rings. Haha if they even knew. Wonder which hand they put them on. Then another is the green bug. 

 

Cute part is her thinking Masen is like her daddy. I guess apple doesn't fall from the tree. Glad your back with a new story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

Love you this story is the best love the play and killing does that make me mental lol.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

I love E/B's banter.

Sherry

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

Charlie almost lost a man, Edward is wondering if this endeavour may be bigger than they can achieve, Carlisle thinks his father has lost it by wanting an arranged marriage between Edward and Bella, and Bella is full steam ahead on her goal to clean up this country. What could possibly go wrong? Hahaha.

Author's Response:

EVERYTHING!!! Laughs!!!

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

good chapter

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

I was totally lookin' for a pic of the shit green VW LMAO! Edward's not on his home turf so it's understandable he's susceptible to teasin', although Garrett ought not to push all his buttons...just sayin'!

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

All I can say is wow, I really can't wait until the next chapter. I like reading about bad a** Bella's. And Edward is definitely jealous of each man he's met so far especially Garrett.

Melissa

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward is jealous of G, and OMG boy bands and Brittany to friggin funny.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

I think he was a wee bit jealous.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

They both have methods of tracking.
Charlie shouldn't be too worried. Edward has her back.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

Curiosity will eventually kill the cat.
What a dangerous pair they make.
Charlie does keep some secrets from his daughter.

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Is Edward's family being sucked into a trap of colossal proportion?
Who now controls Italy?

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

The proverbial gauntlet has been laid.
What is Charles Swan's ultimate objective?
Is he thinking his daughter needs to be partnered with leadership for the final phase of taking over? Or is he looking to the future of his lineage?

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

good

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

Who'd have thought he was a jealous SOB. Any male who gets close to Bella he either wants to put a bullet in them or beat the shit out of them. Poor guy is going to be so wound up during any of the field ops. Debbie

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