Date: 16 Feb 2022 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved this. Such a sweet story!
Date: 10 Jun 2018 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet sweet story!
Date: 12 Feb 2018 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Found on twifanficrecs. Lovely story
Date: 12 Feb 2018 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet story! I love how he used all the gum wrappers. It made for a shoot touch. Thanx for sharing!
Date: 12 Feb 2018 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was too sweet. I loved it.
Date: 27 Jun 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
So sweet
Date: 15 Jun 2016 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love that commercial. Love your story more!!
Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks Clo now the men are doing Elvis in persona nation which is giving me a headache cause they are singing way of pitch.
Just to let you know are cold water challenge month is coming up and we have bets on your story.
KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒
Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) loved this. Beautifully written
Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved this story.
Date: 10 Jun 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed the commercial but your story was so much better. Seeing him forget their 'I love you' anniversary and how it hurt her was heartbreaking but not as bad as her leaving for NY. But the proposal all but made up for it!!!! Perfect little one shot!!!
Date: 10 Jun 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Loved it! My heart is bursting. Absolutely yhe most romantic story I have tead in a long time.
Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another amazing story , Thank you.
Date: 10 Jun 2016 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was so sweet Thanks so much
Date: 10 Jun 2016 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love that commercial. I enjoyed reading about it too.
Thank you.
Date: 09 Jun 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, this was just such a sweet story. I love that commerical.
Date: 09 Jun 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awwww!!! I love this sweet story!!
Date: 09 Jun 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cute. Thanks for sharing
Date: 09 Jun 2016 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was soo sweet!
I loved it :D
Date: 09 Jun 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
It is one of the most beautiful commercials that I've seen in a long time.
Thanks, I loved the story!
Date: 09 Jun 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, thank you for sharing x