Date: 22 Jun 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVE THIS, OVER BEARING ALICE IS THE WORST!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it xx
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[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am so glad someone else had the same thoughts as myself. Alice's visions are based on desions not fact. If an outcome is not to her liking then it get changed till it is. I'm glad that in this version Bella relied this. The Cullen"s always went along with what she said because she said " I saw it " . I wish I new more stories like this one!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, yes just one of the many little things that annoyed me,
I always thought the big visions that stopped her in her tracks, yes,
but if she had to look for it then no it's her perception only xx
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Date: 16 Jun 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to the follow-up.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it xx
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Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww there should be more :( like Bella actually telling Alice off! Any who I still loved it. Maybe you should write one about the birthday party too :). Thanks for the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you, there will be an Alice part later xx
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