[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2022 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
I take back what I said there was no reason for Angela to turn.I had hoped to see more of her, but she shows up once to get Bella to stop guilt tripping herself,then never again.
Date: 02 Aug 2022 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Nevermind, spoke to soon. Though she did show up late after she woke up. Angela could've been training with everyone else
Date: 02 Aug 2022 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is a great story, but what was the point of Angela turning if she never shows up?? Her transformation is something I was really looking forward to, so it's really disappointing to see that she's not involved like I thought she would be.
Date: 16 Jul 2022 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Please do not apologize for your mistakes. You do your writing on your own with no compensation and it brings your readers pleasure. Oh how I enjoyed Bella telling Jane off!
I am looking forward to Bella meeting the Cullens as a vampire no less Aro's mate. You have really thickened the plot with the evil escapees. Much to look forward to.
I hope you are in better health. I have family members with epilepsy and know it's not an easy for to hoe.
Date: 22 Feb 2018 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
dying to read the next chapter
Date: 26 Aug 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
nudge nudge next chappy please i know you might have alot going on but it is a really goood start and i wanna see where it goes.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think the story is great and the pov shifts are great and flow really well. I'm looking forward to whatever happens next. Have and awesome day!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Kinda suck that she got to leave her dad that quickly but guess it has to be done. Wow a physical shield manifesting already. Nice.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
While I don't mind the idea of Bella with someone else, seems a little fast with her kissing him.....but of course she's probably feeling the mating bond as well perhaps. No wolves guarding her house?