Date: 02 Aug 2022 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is a great story, but what was the point of Angela turning if she never shows up?? Her transformation is something I was really looking forward to, so it's really disappointing to see that she's not involved like I thought she would be.
Date: 16 Jul 2022 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Please do not apologize for your mistakes. You do your writing on your own with no compensation and it brings your readers pleasure. Oh how I enjoyed Bella telling Jane off!
I am looking forward to Bella meeting the Cullens as a vampire no less Aro's mate. You have really thickened the plot with the evil escapees. Much to look forward to.
I hope you are in better health. I have family members with epilepsy and know it's not an easy for to hoe.