Date: 26 Mar 2019 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 64
WILL THIS BE A LITTER OF PUPS?
Date: 27 Jun 2017 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 65
Great ending. So happy that everything worked in the end.
Date: 17 Jun 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 65
I always enjoy your stories.
Would love to hear what happens with a Peter & Charlotte in the future.
Thanks for sharing with u
Date: 17 Jun 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Good for Edward to address the issue head on. It's good to see Bella finally feeling better about herself
Date: 17 Jun 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
I like that Edward had previously noticed her & knew that they'd be together.
Also, Jasper is giving him really good advice
Date: 05 Jun 2017 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 65
Always a great story from you. This was such an original idea. Your alpha Edward was wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 65
Amazing story! I loved every single syllable! Taking Bella from being an outcast and outsider and carrying her forward to being an Alpha female and Mom was outrageously brilliant! Thank you! I look forward to a sequel about Jasper and Alice! Truth be told, they are my favorite couple. Again, thank you for all your hard work and labors, they made it so much fun!!
Date: 03 Jun 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 65
Amazing story! I loved every single syllable! Taking Bella from being an outcast and outsider and carrying her forward to being an Alpha female and Mom was outrageously brilliant! Thank you! I look forward to a sequel about Jasper and Alice! Truth be told, they are my favorite couple. Again, thank you for all your hard work and labors, they made it so much fun!!
Date: 03 Jun 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 65
Amazing story! I loved every single syllable! Taking Bella from being an outcast and outsider and carrying her forward to being an Alpha female and Mom was outrageously brilliant! Thank you! I look forward to a sequel about Jasper and Alice! Truth be told, they are my favorite couple. Again, thank you for all your hard work and labors, they made it so much fun!!
Date: 11 May 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 65
This was a great story. The cliff hanger is killing me as I hate having to wait. LOL. I can't wait for you to start Jasper/Alice's story.
Date: 07 May 2017 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 65
awww for baby. TY for writing and sharing
Date: 06 May 2017 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 65
READ YOU SOON 🌺
Date: 06 May 2017 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 65
NOoooooooo, it can't end.
Date: 06 May 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 65
I am glad that things went good with Bella's pregnancy and birth.
Date: 06 May 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 65
:) loved this story
Date: 06 May 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 65
I am glad she is ok and the baby is here. There is more to the story
Date: 06 May 2017 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 65
Great story. I really like stories that are different in the supernatural sence. Thanks and I look forwrd to others in this relm, like what happened to Peter and Charlotte? A short outtake on how she adapted or added to the Jasper Alice story. Again Thanks
Date: 18 Apr 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
And this is where I say good by to your story. I don't mind the sex but if it is in front of an audience well to me that is just wrong. To me a mate pro t sects and he does not like others looking at his mate being naked and screwing her in front of a bunch of people. Good luck there seem to lots of people who don't mind having sex in front of an audience.
Date: 16 Apr 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow that was quick. So much for her fighting it.
Date: 16 Apr 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 64
Hmm the Jared thing makes me nervous
Date: 16 Apr 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 64
Why cant Edward smell the baby?? Where is Jard the danger is not over for Bella yet?
Date: 16 Apr 2017 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 64
Sorry it wasn't Peter it was Jared. So glad that they are going to have a baby.
Date: 16 Apr 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 63
I still don't trust Peter. I'm glad Edward killed the doctor though.
Date: 16 Apr 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 64
I love your story. I am always excited when I see you have updated. Keep up the great work.
Date: 15 Apr 2017 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 64
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 64
:) Happy Easter to you
Date: 15 Apr 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 64
Yay 😊
Date: 15 Apr 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 64
Love love love this chapter. As always I want more!!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2017 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 63
Loved it can't wait for more💙
Date: 12 Apr 2017 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 63
Loved it can't wait for more💙
Date: 12 Apr 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 63
Way to go Edward!
Date: 12 Apr 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 63
I am glad that he saved Sapphire bit he did not find out who was behind the good doctor. While was the doctor working for? Maybe they will find some paperwork or evidence before they burn it down.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 63
Ugh Psycho men.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 63
Woohoo. Very good
Date: 12 Apr 2017 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 63
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 12 Apr 2017 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 63
The doc is one crazy old man. Who was he planing on ruling next to?
Date: 10 Apr 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 62
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 07 Apr 2017 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 62
Where is she! Bella wont stop till she find her if it's the l last thing she does
Date: 06 Apr 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 62
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 06 Apr 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 62
Glad E listened to her reasoning on this.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 62
Much too short but a good chapter.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 62
Glad they saved the women. But where and what did they do with Sapphire?
Date: 06 Apr 2017 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 62
Glad they found the other women.
Date: 31 Mar 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 61
Thank goodness she has been rescued.
Date: 30 Mar 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 61
Loving this story!!!! Please update more soon!
Date: 27 Mar 2017 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 61
Glad he's letting her help/
Date: 25 Mar 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 61
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 24 Mar 2017 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 61
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 24 Mar 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 61
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 61
Thanks for the update!
Date: 24 Mar 2017 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 61
I was wondering why no one knew Bella was pregnant. I knew they could smell the different changes in the body. Hope they get to the females in time. Hope Sapphire is ok.
Date: 24 Mar 2017 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
He is just freaked out poor guy
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 60
Oh poor Edward. He needs to really realize he had no control over being able to protect her.
Date: 23 Mar 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 60
I'm still curious if she'll have a pup or a kid.
Date: 22 Mar 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 60
Kinda saw that cheap shot by his opponent coming.
Date: 22 Mar 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 60
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 60
Together again!
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 60
Poor Edward. He feels so guilty. Glad he has her back in his arms. Can't wait to see what his reaction is going to be when he finds out she pregnant. He is going to be soooo over protective of her and the pup. He will drive Bella crazy. Lol.
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 60
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 22 Mar 2017 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 60
OMG he is going to blame himself poor guy. She is back he will not let her out of his sight.
Date: 21 Mar 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 59
Can't wait for your next update. This is really getting good. Jared deserved what he got.