Date: 08 Jun 2017 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love how they are not letting her just walo in her shit she cant give up on life.
Date: 04 May 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Carlisle gave good advice. I'm glad Edward isn't giving up....
Date: 24 Apr 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
When are you planning on posting??
Author's Response:
As soon as I get the next chapter written.
Date: 17 Apr 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella needs to live while she can. Edward knows and he is sticking around.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 03 Apr 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad you're back with this story. I am enjoying it although I fear it is going to be a real tearjerker! Keep up the great work !
Date: 03 Apr 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad you're back with this story. I am enjoying it although I fear it is going to be a real tearjerker! Keep up the great work !
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2017 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward knows that she's dying, correct?
Author's Response:
Yes, he does.
Date: 01 Apr 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Gaaawd this story...has got my heart!!!! So good!!#
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
This story breaks my heart ... **SOB**
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
This is a great story. I can't wait to see how you make their time together special.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Can't say I blame her for not wanting people to get hurt the way she was when Charlie died....but Carlisle is right, she needs to live for now.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella's and hell everyone's position in this story would be sooooo difficult.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
Glad to see you back and I hope all is well or at,least getting there.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
So happy to see this update. Hope life calms down for you and stops being such a pain. Looking forward to when you are able to update again.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
Miss you. Thanks for the update.
Sorry to hear things are rough right now- Chin up and smile. Take care.
Date: 23 Feb 2017 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is so cute. He is a keeper. Bella needs to live life to the fullest.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Glad your back. Hope you are feeling better. I love this chapter and anxious for your next update.
Date: 11 Feb 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story, and I'm glad you and it are back. Take your time, masterpieces aren't made in a day.
Date: 11 Feb 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 10 Feb 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Excited to see an update to this story! Thanks for another great chapter! Anxious to see where the story goes from here.
Date: 10 Feb 2017 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
Good chapter ! Glad you got back to this one. Keep up the great work !
Date: 10 Feb 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it Bella has fire she was not going to let Mike get away with his mouth and Jasper WOW he was going to go all Cowboy on Mike. I think Edward just made it very clear how he feels about Bella.
Date: 10 Feb 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Glad you're back & feeling better!
great chapter. Love how Newton got hammered!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
I have to know. Does Bella die?
Author's Response:
I haven't decided how far I am going to take this.
Date: 29 Dec 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
Can't blame B for her attitude unfortunately. Why do I get the feeling I'm going to be bawling before this story is over?
Date: 14 Dec 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
My heart is just breaking for her she is worth it I love Alice.
Date: 13 Dec 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
Those are the exact reasons that I won't ever let anyone, family or friend, know anything about my health.
Date: 12 Dec 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
I soooooo do love this story!!!!
Although it is really sad :-(
I desparately do hope, that Bella won't die!!!!!
(Hope dies last ...)
Greetings from Germany,
leinchen
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
so terribly sad and agonizing......
Date: 30 Nov 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love this story! Hope you update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. Working on updates now.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ah ao now we know the disease at least
Date: 16 Oct 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
whoa what is happening to our lovely bella?xx
Date: 15 Oct 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank goodness she let him in I dont think he would let it go he is to worried about her.
Date: 15 Oct 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
i dont get it. edward has been an ass since she first met him.
he showed no interest in her except to antagonize her.
of course, you could say he was fighting the pull to her, but
that's just too easy. he was/is this cocky good looking athelete
who kept running into her but not really looked to be interested but suddenly
he wants to have dinner with her. now, he wants to somehow be close to her.
idk, i just cannt buy it. suddenly he is a nice guy after learning she has a condition,
is he just being compassionate? of course with bella/edward stories, it's b/c he feels for her...
i guess im just questioning his motive and his feelings just b/c he didnt appear very genuine at all.
Author's Response:
Edward is definitely cocky and arrogant, but that doesn't make him a jerk. He's attracted to her, hence why he basically forced dinner on her. So when she had th seizure, he was scared and needed to know why. Now that he does, he is trying to be a friend.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks. I was wondering what she has.
Date: 14 Oct 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I had to research it too; please dont kill her ...... Sniffle sniffle
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
So sad.... Edward seems to have taken it well
Date: 14 Oct 2016 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
In tears again😢😢😢d84;a039;
Date: 14 Oct 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
I like this Edward. He's very carefree but I think Bella has thrown him for a loop.
Date: 14 Oct 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am glad he is staying and spending the day with her. This just breaks my heart. I can't wait to see where this goes. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 14 Oct 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
This disease sounds so bad. It is heartbreaking to think she will have such a terrible death. She can't plan for a future. It is so very sad.
Date: 14 Oct 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 14 Oct 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
So, of course I had to Google this. It's related to Batten which I have actually heard about. My daughter had two students with Batten. This is fiction so I am hoping Bella is misdiagnosed!
Date: 11 Oct 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good thing E was there since she waved of Alice.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great start to the story, I haven't read one of your stories in a long time. I haven't looked to see what is new lately, just been reading the ones on my list and not adding anything new. Plus RL has been keeping really busy. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
I feel so bad for Bella. I am sure Edward is freaking out about now too. I am sure he will get her help though. I can't wait for more! Great job....thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have no idea what she's inflicted with.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love your story can't wait to read more ! O and thanks for leaving us hanging! LOL
Date: 07 Oct 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
So much for a easy night
Date: 07 Oct 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
OH Shit Edward is freaking out but so glad he is there with her.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww. The end killed me. But good chapter. I'd just like the diagnosis though.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
Uh oh....now Edward will know.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 01 Oct 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm Ms maybe?? you go girl tell him off he so deserves it
Date: 01 Oct 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
my heart hurts for bella
Date: 01 Oct 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
bad edward he is not nice :( something very bad happen to bella
Date: 29 Sep 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thinking B needs some counselling. She's not handling her illness well.... of course, I don't know if I wouldn't act the same.
Author's Response:
Yes, she does. Thanks for the review.
Date: 29 Sep 2016 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is so sure of himself and so worried about her.
Date: 29 Sep 2016 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is fighting her attration to him the cocky asshole.
Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
If you need assistance, born & raised in Hawaiian & part native Hawaiian
Author's Response:
Thank you. My A/N was in regard of a guest review on FF who didn't like that I haven't introduced any native Hawaiians.
Date: 29 Sep 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2016 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
So what does Bella have?
Author's Response:
All in due time, sweets. I promise!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward's cockiness is not making me like him in any way.
Author's Response:
It's hard to write him like this. I usually write my Edward's much more loving and caring, but for this story, I'm trying to branch out.
Date: 28 Sep 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
What disease does Bella have? Will we be finding out soon?
Author's Response:
I'm honestly not sure when you will find out. It just depends on when it fits into the story.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
I enjoy reading this because I can envision my time spent on Maui some years ago. When I die, that's how I picture my after life.
I'm chomping at the bit to know what's wrong with Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. My life dream is to visit the islands.
Date: 28 Sep 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
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[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2016 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great story! Love it so far can't wait to read more .
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ok so what does Bella have??
Date: 20 Sep 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 17 Sep 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
EDWARD IS AN ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
She has a illness I've got that much figured out. First I thought it was a surfing accident, now I'm more convinced some sort of illness. Regardless, really love the storyline
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
I thought she might have MS but I can't remember if seizures are part of it.
Date: 17 Sep 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
Dying to find how why Bella is so weak? What did Charlie died of?
Date: 16 Sep 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
When r we going to find out what disease Bella has?
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Bella isn't falling for his cocky bullshit! I am wondering what the hell bella has though.
Date: 16 Sep 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can understand her bitterness, but she would enjoy life more if she was kinder and lived each day like her last.
Date: 16 Sep 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok, Looks like ALS I know there is no cure yet but hope there is some HEA.
Date: 16 Sep 2016 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
She's a tough one... Trying to figure out what she has and the only thing I've come up with is MS
Date: 16 Sep 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm Sounding like the ending is going to have me bawling when she dies too soon. Sounds like Lou Gehrig's disease to me....guess we'll find out eventually.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the story already
Date: 12 Sep 2016 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
OK I get that Bella has anxiety attacks. This doesn't make it OK to be a bitch to everyone.
Date: 11 Sep 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am super curious to find out what happened to Bella and why Edward is being such an ass. Great story so far, really drawing me in. Looking forward to your next update!
Date: 08 Sep 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome story so far....as usual, I am hooked.
Date: 07 Sep 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 07 Sep 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great story so far. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is so good
Date: 06 Sep 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
ok so mean, no clue so far as to what she has?