Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow you are def keeping me intrigued with what her backstory is.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
So what is wrong with Bella?
Keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella. What is wrong with her?
Date: 06 Sep 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
IS THIS GOING TO BE HEA OR IS BELLA DYING IN IS FIC
Date: 06 Sep 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
That is so sad she is very sick? Edward is an asshole why?
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2016 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Omg ! Love it already ! I can not wait to read more.
Date: 02 Sep 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great story so far! Cant wait to read more!
Date: 30 Aug 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
What's wrong with Bella?
Date: 30 Aug 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ohhhh , I really like this story so far ! And it just got much more interesting ! What is wrong with Bella? Keep up the great work !
Date: 30 Aug 2016 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! OH AND EDWARD IS AN ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
And Edward's behavior is one of the MANY reason I hate professioanl sports of any kind. hmm I though she just blew out a knee or something is why she can't professional surf. You have my interest peaked as to what she has
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
I started reading over on Fanfic, but switched to here. I'm wondering what Bella has, I'm thinking it may be MS or something like that, but am hoping it is actually something less serious than that.
Date: 29 Aug 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is a pure ass hole WOW.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice foundation you're laying. Nice that it's in Hawaii- born & raised so if you need any ideas....let me know
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excited to see where this goes, especially the location since I was born and raised in Hawaii, North Shore of Oahu, the surfing hot spot.
Author's Response:
Oh, I may need to pick your brain! I'm totally goin on what I can find online.
Date: 25 Aug 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it already. really promising sotry, i'm sure it'll be a great one... as usual! can't wait for more
Date: 25 Aug 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more. Is this fic anywhere else?
Date: 23 Aug 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yummy Edward and Jasper playing beach volleyball. Sounds good to me.
Date: 22 Aug 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. So we have asshole Edward and I am sure Bella will give him a piece of her mind next time she sees him.
Date: 22 Aug 2016 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving your new story. Thank you.
Date: 22 Aug 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 20 Aug 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story but is someone pre reading it for you? You have several errors that made reading it a little bit difficult
Date: 20 Aug 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Seems to be the beginnings of a great story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I'm hooked. Love the story line. Can not wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love It! As always love your Work! Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2016 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
This brings back memories of my time spent on Maui.
That won't be the last time she has a run in with the asshole. That's going to be interesting.
I'm glad this is posted here. I prefer this site.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds good so excited to read anything you write. Edward is a dick lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love beach volleyball. I can't wait for more. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can you update more often? Love it so far.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Happy dance!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Can't wait for more.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start love that Bella and Esme are sisters hope you post soon
Date: 19 Aug 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Was this inspired hy a fb request?
I saw someone mention the Olympic volleyball comp and fic.
anyway that was very rude of Edward
thank yiu
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the sounds of this new story!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Even paradise has its snakes, or so it would seem!
Date: 19 Aug 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I can't wait to see where you take me this time.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
pas mal pour un premier chapitre vivment la suite
Date: 19 Aug 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Edward was very rude and he made her break her lens. She should take some really unfavourable photos of him. Is it men like him that make Bella hate her new job?