[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2019 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 36
Eine sehr gute Geschichte.
Schreibst du bitte weiter.
Ich würde mich sehr freuen.
Date: 15 Jul 2019 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 36
I started over at the beginning and read straight through to this point! I’m on the edge of my seat and then I realize I’m caught up. I hope you update soon. I’m on pins and needles. I’m so glad I started over because I fell in love with the story all over again! Til next time...
Date: 10 Jul 2019 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 36
I knew it was Carmen! Oooh can’t wait to see how this plays out!
Date: 09 Jul 2019 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 36
They better get Carmen. She needs to be gone. I hope Bella uses her brains to help instead of mess things up again. She is such a problem.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2019 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 36
OMG Love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 09 Jul 2019 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
So thrilling. Rivited and can't wait to read more.
Date: 09 Jul 2019 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2019 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 35
Omg! Love your story can't wait to read next chapter .
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2019 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter! I was waiting for Carmen to come back into it. Bella’s instinct s we’re right. What a fluffy, yikes. Poor Edward. He doesn’t deserve this, and I wish Anthony would stop touching her!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2019 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow!!! does it ever end.. I remember how Carmen was acting earlier on did kmow she was working with Liam...I hope those boys save her and don't get hurt in the ambush, unless they already know...well done..until you post again
Date: 04 Mar 2019 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 35
This has to be the stupidest Bella ever. She will never learn. She does one dumb thing after another.
Date: 02 Mar 2019 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 35
oh no.. and how low until the next update?? So much information I have to reread..
Date: 02 Mar 2019 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter
Date: 02 Mar 2019 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 35
What is with everyone always trying to force things with bella,its the reason why she so mess up. You would think edward would have her follow even after what Michael said.
Date: 02 Mar 2019 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 35
Good chapter. Twisty.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2019 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 34
OMG ! Love your story can't wait to read next chapter,and more.
Date: 22 Jan 2019 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 34
Soooo good! Love you,update soon please and THANK YOU!
Date: 18 Jan 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 34
Edward needs to chill and Bella needs to be smart. I know that is hard for her, but she needs to try.
Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter!! Please update soon!! So enthralled in the story. Wonderful work
Date: 12 Jan 2019 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 34
Wowzer! Cant wait to read more. So thrilling a journey.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2019 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 34
OMG!! I can't for the next update..Thank you for the update ..Well done..until you post again
Date: 11 Jan 2019 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oh this story is so good . plz let them have a HEA and for Edward not to kill her or Anthony. Hope you had a wonderful holiday..
Date: 11 Jan 2019 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 34
Was she playing Michael or Edward??
Date: 10 Jan 2019 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 17 Dec 2018 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 33
I'm glad Bella came to her senses. She is so frustrating.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2018 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 33
Hurry up you need to finish this story
Date: 14 Dec 2018 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is such a bitch. She has more evil in her than Edward.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2018 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
Anthony is like a cat with his 9 lives
Date: 26 Nov 2018 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 26 Nov 2018 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 26 Nov 2018 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 33
YAY a new chapter. Keep them coming please.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2018 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 32
Please do not let edward walk in & see that kiss. E& b are finally making headway!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2018 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
Anthony always causing trouble! I start to think he might be likable & then realize NOOOPE!
Date: 28 Sep 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is so stupid. Can she not learn? Why could she not just stay with Edward? She says she loves him. She just figured it out, then she does turns stupid again and lets Anothony kiss her. She will get everyone killed because she is a selfish spoiled brat.
Date: 28 Sep 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is so right. Bella is the one making her life so horrible. If she is kidnapped or killed it is all her fault. She is one stupid little girl.
Date: 28 Sep 2018 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
I really hate Bella in this story. She is such a brat. I really can't see why Edward would even like her.
Date: 27 Sep 2018 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
God, I hate "Marie" right now. She knows Edward loves her. He did what he had to do to fix Anothony's mistake and be able to be with her.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2018 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 32
I can’t wait for the next chapter. HURRY UP
Date: 24 Sep 2018 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
That girl just keeps making baaaaad choices. One step forward and then a leap of a clifff. Ahhhh. But that’s what makes it so good. ;)
Date: 24 Sep 2018 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 24 Sep 2018 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 32
Anthony is dreaming of kate
Date: 09 Sep 2018 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 08 Sep 2018 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
It's Carmen.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2018 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh my..what will happen next..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
Date: 08 Sep 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
This is making me mad. Why won't she tell him the truth? They would know who is after their family if she told the truth
Date: 03 Sep 2018 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
I wish she would forgive Edward already
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2018 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 30
She needs to tell him all about michael & be done with it. That guy is trouble!! Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2018 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more!
Date: 28 Aug 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2018 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
Anthony is a hot mess..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh yes!!! Your back bless you for the chapter. I've missed your brilliant work. I will always keep Crowned on my favorites. Hope the muses inspire you going forward with your wonderful stories. Ajfflady
Date: 15 Aug 2018 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2018 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for the update. Well done!!!! ! !Anthony is a hot mess..I wonder will Carlisle pull through....Edward is going to lose it when he wakes up and Bella is gone...until you post again
Date: 13 Aug 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Anthony loves to fuck with Bella he is like a kid on the play ground. I'm not gonna lie I think I like Anthony better because he is upfront and truthful about himself.
Date: 13 Aug 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Anthony loves to fuck with Bella he is like a kid on the play ground. I'm not gonna lie I think I like Anthony better because he is upfront and truthful about himself.
Date: 12 Aug 2018 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 29
Glad for the update. When you update next I will have confidence you are going to finish it
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2018 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 29
Anthony must be wanting a beat down! Thanks for this update!!
Date: 28 Apr 2018 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
I love this series of stories. What an ending with Carlisle being killed. I didn't have much sympathy for him but do feel sorry for Esme and the boys even though they fought.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love the story. Do you plan on continuing it?
Date: 11 Jan 2018 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Update soon please.
Date: 18 Jul 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 28
Carlisle deserved getting shog. He is pure evil.
Date: 17 Jul 2017 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Shape up buttercup. Bella is just so stupid. I hope she wakes up and realizes what is going on before she is dead.
Date: 17 Jul 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
This Bella is so stupid. She causes a lot of her own issues. She needs to stop being so cruel to Edward.
Date: 05 Jul 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
wow edward was so violent :( i would be afraid to move
Date: 03 Jul 2017 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
SO GOOD!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
I think him being dead is better than edward & bella having sex. Now my only hope is that anthony left the property & did his own drive by and shot his father. :) when they figure out this is all carmen. She is going to be in a world of pain!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
Please someone kill carlisle!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
FREAKING FIIINNNALLLY!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bad anthony is coming out. What did edward do to her in that room?
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
I knew janina was going to be dead! She had messed with bella for the last time. Anthony wanted her to do it to.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
I can't beleive i like anthony now.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am so shocked that the three of them are somewhat getting along! I loved the shooting scene!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
FINALLY!! Carlisle is Dead, I hope. Man, what a cruel man he was to his "family". Uhgg, hopefully now Edward and Anthony can stop with the mind games. Although Anthony has it built into his personality. I am so glad I came back to this story!! Keep up the great writing! Can't wait for the next chapters!! Thank you
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
Remember the phone call bella!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope anthony saves her.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2017 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
It just hit me maybe she ends up with both of them?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my goodness!! I really can't decide which brother she should be with.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
Looks like bella is going back into hiding!