Date: 30 Jun 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope carlisle is really dead...I'm doing the dance *the wicked witch is finally dead". I get hy edward is lying to bella, but it's gonna hurt worse when the truth comes out, it's just delaying the pain.....I think Id I was bella I wouldn't truly believe them and be visiting the grave...but then again ignorance is bliss.
Date: 30 Jun 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow. can't figure out if this was Edward's deal or someone else.
Date: 30 Jun 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well he didnt have to kill him. I think he needs to tell Bella the truth. Cant say I am sorry that Carlisle is dead he was an ass hole
Date: 30 Jun 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 28
Love your story can't wait to read more and more!
Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
At least Edward didn't have to kill Carlisle himself. I'm not sure if he should have lied to Bella though.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 30 Jun 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow! Each twist and turn more thrilling than the next one.
Date: 30 Jun 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
OMG!!! That bastard is dead!!!!! God I love this fic!!!
Date: 30 Jun 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good I hope Carlisle is dead
Date: 28 Jun 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
Well lhow lovely send her right over the edge she keeps herself at. He is as bad as Anthony
Date: 27 Jun 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ughhh I hate Carlisle. He is an asshole
Date: 27 Jun 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 27 Jun 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
Carlisle is a shit starter what an ass. Edward just mite kill him
Date: 27 Jun 2017 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG!! What a bastard!!
Date: 27 Jun 2017 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh carlisle doesn't want bella to have his grad child nope he wants a wedge between edward and bella so edwards monster can come out and maybe kill bella. Oh edwards gonna be pissed at his daddy
Date: 27 Jun 2017 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
She got his mind off of Michel. I think she is so confused but she does have feelings for Edward. She needs to tell him everything. I am sure Michel knows who she is he is a sneaky fucker.
Date: 26 Jun 2017 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
Anthony freaks me out. Bella is not a little lamb anymore.
Date: 26 Jun 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 26 Jun 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
Finally they will have sex. I wish we would have got the detail of the lemon. Now to get rid of Michael. I don't trust the creep. Also I don't want her to be with Anthony either
Date: 25 Jun 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG!! Lord I hope you update again tonight!! I'll go crazy!!! Need I say I totally loved it!! Yessssss!
Date: 25 Jun 2017 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awe man it faded to black...what can I say im a lemon whore lol edward summed it up now I guess I've been feeling he loves her in his own way. Im glad bella opened up and admitted how she was feeling, wonder if the sex was to stop him from asking about Micheal further
Date: 25 Jun 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Plz plz plz let Bella open up to Edward about he's aunt and Michael plz plz
Date: 25 Jun 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Its about time xx
Date: 24 Jun 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
I can't wait for an Edwards point of view. I want to know what happened in the bedroom.
Date: 24 Jun 2017 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh dear!! What went on with her and Edward!? What's up with Michael!? Lord this just gets better and better!!!
Date: 24 Jun 2017 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 24 Jun 2017 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hmm so Anthony developed feelings for bella it seems and he wants her for himself...I'm sure edward suspects that. I'm wondering what happened in that room between edward and bella that made he act spacy...did the yell and she cried cuz her shooting someone sunk in which edward comforted her or did they have angry sex...or did edward hit bella. So many question and I still cant tell if Anthony is playing a game on bella or really likes her, I have mixed feelings about the brothers.
Date: 23 Jun 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
Anyway we can do two chapters in one day :) I really want to know what happens next!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ding dong the witch is dead! Which old witch.. the wicked witch... muhahahahahahhaa!!!!!! YAY!!
Date: 23 Jun 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
Honestly, hope Bella shot both and that she will be allowed to speak her mind about how Edward has acted towards her with regards to Janina. Just hope she doesn't fall about or keep quiet
Date: 23 Jun 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm thinking Anthony didn't stop her cuz he was hoping for her to use the gun, he probably enjoyed it. Is is too much to hope bella shot edward or at least shot through him to hit janina? I at least hope she shot Janina though edward may be pissed while Anthony proud. Poor garrett shouted no cuz he didn't want bellas innocence to be tainted more than it already has been from the kidnapping. Urgh, has edward ever apologized for being high and basically trying share her with Anthony (I know it happened years ago, but I'd still want an apology lol
Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Ah man a cliff hanger!!!! Great job I was so into reading I didn't realize it was the end. Lol
I like how Bella is finely admitting what's bothering her. She is a smart women and needs to realize that.
Keep up the great work!!! I enjoy reading this story!
Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope she shot Janina through Edward. Why wouldn't he come to his wife first?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
That was the last straw OH SHIT please tell me she hit the bitch
Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more 💙!!! Love this story it just gets better and better!!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am glad she shot her. She was annoying.
Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
omg was it edward or janina and edward ? Is it his mistress? He has to see where Bella is coming from ... one step forward three steps back... I feel for Bella no one should be treated like that ...no one ...She has nobody that she can trust not her husband or brother in -law... ..the sad thing is that they kidnapped her and force her to this live...
Date: 23 Jun 2017 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMG!! Did she kill her!! Loved it!!
Date: 23 Jun 2017 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD. Please keep updating, this chapter was so good. I need to know what happened!!! Great job.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
Carlisle I'm surprised still trusts Anthony to make his drinks if he has put him to sleep before.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
So edward and bella only had sex before she left him, I'm sure that kiss got to him as it's been awhile for him when It comes to his wife....I wonder whose here.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
I still doubt edwards love, I believe he believes it I just don't think he does...how can you love someone who you don't truly know he loves prisoner scared bella cuz that's all she's been. Would he had loved her if he got to know before Anthony kidnapped her? Idk I think he has to let her go be free and let her find out who the new her is...then get to know her if she allows it. My dream is for bella to get free and have a say in who she wants.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor bella, she's experiencing stockholm and honestly believes she has no reason to hate edward and that edward is trying to protect her.......I hope she uses this freedom edward says she's free to get away and start over. Has edward explained why he cheated on her (though can you cheat on a wife who was forced into marriage with you and doesn't want you?) With Janine
Date: 22 Jun 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh lord, now what is Anthony up too!?
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
Bella didnt freak out to bad. Carlisle needed that sleep lol
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
can't wait to find out
Date: 22 Jun 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow! I have a feeling Anthony know a lot more.
Date: 21 Jun 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 22
Holly shit Holly shit Holly shit.
Date: 20 Jun 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ahhh. Don't leave us hanging for too long. This is getting so thrilling!
Date: 20 Jun 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG!! Who the hell is in the house!? Once again, left! You are so mean, but I love ya anyway!! Awesome chapter Cristina!!!â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Date: 20 Jun 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love this story Finally Bella is warming up to Edward. I can't wait for them to have sex. Its going to be explosive.
Date: 20 Jun 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
good story thanks for getting back to it.
Date: 20 Jun 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
I have been reading some reviews on this website and others and am I missing something, everyone seems to think Edward and this slut Janine are together and I do not think that at all. Sure he may have been tempted after he found Bella but she was ignoring him and a slut can make the strongest man weak if the one he really wants is always pouring hatred at him. Well deserved hatred but as much as Edward can he is trying to be good to Isabella. I think he was also weak for Janine the three years he did not know where Bella was. Mafia women are conning, they get what they want because if they were raised in the family they think they are diva's and princess's and all should bow down to what they want, Isabella is not like that, so hence the attraction both brothers feel for her. I am happy that she is wishing up, she better because with this life you are on your own to a certain degree and if she does not become aware of what is going round her it could get her killed.
As for the reviewers who say she is a hypocrite for yelling at Anthony about keeping his mother in the dark about not being dead and she will not even think about her parents, we'll all I have to say to that if you go back and read Danger In New York it was her own father who started this whole thing off. He surely was not thinking of his wife and daughter when he decided to turn in the CULLENS and he paid dearly for that decision. I think Isabella owes her father no loyalty at all, he knew what they were capable of doing and he was either stupid or very naive to think his wife or daughter would not suffer for his actions. I think it is best to leave her mother alone, she has probably gone on with her life, may have a new husband and if she is happy why drag in the dirt to just feel the pain all over again. Nothing she or Iasbella or Charlie or even the CULLENS can do to fix things, to make everything all right. The past is just that the past and Isabeela better start thinking about her future and what she wants out of it. Does she want to be part of the family? If yes, than she better take off those blinders she is wearing and live in the reality which is her life.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
You are killing me here!! THis story has gotten so exciting, can't you just post the rest of it .... hehehehe :) Love your work!1 XOOX
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2017 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great, great and great.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 19 Jun 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2017 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 21
Glad Bella wasn't left out in the rain, and that she's talking to Edward some.
Sherry
Date: 19 Jun 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
The cat or the Anthony is out of the bag lol. I dont trust Carmen she is up to no good. I am so happy that Bella is caring more now.
Date: 19 Jun 2017 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well it's out in the open now Esmeralda knows, but what is Carman up too!? Loved it Cristina
Date: 19 Jun 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
He's not ready to forgive her.....wow....that is messed up. They kidnap, torture and rape her. And he's not ready to forgive her. I'm impressed by the insanity of this family. I'm actually rooting for her to destroy them all. I hope she brings them down and does the jig as they burn and watch.
Date: 19 Jun 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
oh plz update soon
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2017 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm kinda feeling bad for the situation Bella is in. Girl can't catch a break.
Sherry
Date: 18 Jun 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
She has been used and abused by this evil family, now they abandoned her, at least she is free. Not a lot of victims are freed, most of them are just killed after their abuser are done with them. Hopefully, she will be able to recover and begin to live for herself. Excellent chapter.
Date: 18 Jun 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
About time she sees things the way they are now what is she going to do. I hope Edward is watching her
Date: 18 Jun 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 18 Jun 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
No, really she wants to be with this effed up family. Wow Stockholm Syndrome has taken root. Please have her come to her senses. She can't be in love with him after everything. He cheated on her and so many other things please he should after least have to win her over.
Date: 18 Jun 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow these chapters are getting very intense.
Date: 18 Jun 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
oh know....update soon
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2017 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMG ! Love it thank you for posting so fast .Cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG! Love your story can't wait to read more.