Date: 26 Apr 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
Was it michael? I think edward and bella should have some mushy time together. She might need to be snuggled by edward.
Date: 26 Apr 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 26 Apr 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
NOOOOOO!!!! Don't leave us hanging!!!! Who got shot? I'm thinking Michael was there to kill someone. Hmm?
I was kinda expecting Bella/Marie to run into Janina.
Sherry
Date: 25 Apr 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow. Wow. I have no other words. I am in shock.
Date: 25 Apr 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
hmmm . . . now trying to remember who janina's father is
Date: 25 Apr 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my keep them coming. Excellent update.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
WOAW very sensitive chapter. Excellent one. Thank you.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well at least they have started some communication. But really Carlisle did hit her. Edward has terrorized her. I'm curious how they come back from this or how they move on. Great update.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Gahhhh! Prove to her how much u love her. Then strangle Janine!!
Date: 24 Apr 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward has to try harder and tell her everything. Why cant he get rid of Janina?
Date: 24 Apr 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
I feel sad for Edward. He finally realizes his feelings for Bella and she really wants nothing to do with him. I hope that your story has a happy ending. I am enjoying the angst, but I want to see the love ,too. Great story.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
wondering if e is even capable of redeeming himself. seems like he just keeps getting worse. wondering what plan he has with janina
Date: 24 Apr 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 24 Apr 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward has two personalities! He is his own worst enemy!
Date: 24 Apr 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really can't blame her from killing herself as that had to be terrifying and anything she might has felt for Edward has to be totally destroyed.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
More please so awesome
Date: 24 Apr 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Damn, Bella is one tough cookie.
Sherry
Date: 24 Apr 2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
what is janina'so purpose exactly? though I am whole heartedly against suicide I honestly would not blame Bella in this situation. What does she have to live for? Carlisle is awful. Edward is worse and a cheater. Michael is a dead man and kind of gives me the creeps. thanks for the update.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bravo bella. I agree he doesn't love her, shit he doesn't even know her...plus with a love like his who needs enemies.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well at least they have started some communication. But really Carlisle did hit her. Edward has terrorized her. I'm curious how they come back from this or how they move on. Great update.
Date: 23 Apr 2017 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Please update soon. Edward is a monster. They're is no redeeming this group. I hope Bella finds some peace if only to get them all tossed in jail.
Date: 23 Apr 2017 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow. Welcome back. Terrifying chapter.
Date: 23 Apr 2017 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Damn, Edward don't play, but why doesn't he realize Bella was reacting to seeing him with Janina. It wasn't Stefan's fault, it was his own she left. I really want Bella to confront Janina.
Sherry
Date: 23 Apr 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
I don't blame bella if she wants to kill herself. I would have done it along time aogo, but then again I would have went to Renee when given the choice. Edward doesn't love bella, she's just a possession to him. Heck at the rate he is going he will never earn her love just her fear.
Date: 23 Apr 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
hmm . . . wondering what be means by hopefully god would forgive her. in regards to stephen or is she going to try and drown herself?
Date: 23 Apr 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awe, she is going to kill herself but I think someone will save her. Will this nightmare never end for her? Will she fall in love with Edward, become the dutiful wife, some sort of Stockholm syndrome. She would fit the case.
does Edward have split personalities, bi-polar, I am beginning to think so and Bella is right Carlisl is like a wolf in sheep's clothing! Poor Bella or she likes to be called Marie where she has been staying. Oh how I do not like mob stories where it is all right what a man does, sleep with any woman even when he is married but if his wife or even girlfriend tries to even have a male friend that is the end of him and sometimes her. Do they not think this hurts them, to see their men being unfaithful.
Date: 14 Mar 2017 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
Whew! I have spent the last 2 1/2 days reading DINY and now MINY and I am so hooked! Cannot wait to read more!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
I don't like this Bella. She is bratty. Edward and her need to talk. She needs to stop running. Carlisle is a jerk to put her before his son.
Date: 24 Feb 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hi Cristina, I am thoroughly enjoying this story and can hardly wait for the next update. Hopefully it will be soon. â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Date: 13 Feb 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
LOVE this so much. I LOVE EVERYTHING YOU WRITE! Update soon please, I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2017 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
when will be an update;
Date: 10 Feb 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow just when I think he and his family can't get worse they do. I think she is suffering from PTSD or Stockholm Syndrome. I really hope she finds a way out. He really has no shame he has mistress in the same house as his wife. Does he not know what a locked door is? I'm enjoying your story. I also worry about Carmen something is not right there. The next time one of them raises there hand to her I hope she breaks it. There is nothing they can do they haven't except kill her and I'm pretty sure she's near the point where that won't be the most important thing. Update soon please.
Date: 08 Feb 2017 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really really hope he killed janinw & that is why carlisle was mad.
Date: 01 Feb 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
: ) Mmmmm!!!!! There's nothing like a good mafia story to curl up with and enjoy! READ YOU SOON : D
Date: 01 Feb 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ok I guess he's never heard the saying...."what's good for the goose is good for the gander. "NO???? guess not. The last 7 chapters were a joy to read I just wish the chapters were longer mostly because I never want it to end. READ YOU SOON. : D
Date: 01 Feb 2017 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Always where she belongs!!!
Date: 01 Feb 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
: ) Mmmmm!!!!! There's nothing like a good mafia story to curl up with and enjoy! READ YOU SOON : D
Date: 01 Feb 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
: ) Mmmmm!!!!! There's nothing like a good mafia story to curl up with and enjoy! READ YOU SOON : D
Date: 01 Feb 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
: ) Mmmmm!!!!! There's nothing like a good mafia story to curl up with and enjoy! READ YOU SOON : D
Date: 31 Jan 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Omg love this Chapter ! Can't wait to read more,great story love all of it
Date: 29 Jan 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Michal is dangerouse also. Edward is going to have words with his father also. was the blood on his hand Janina???
Date: 29 Jan 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
It has to be Janina'so blood and that is why Carlisle is mad. Edward killed her and Carlisle blames Bella. Edward, Edward, when will you learn that Bella is not that quite little girl anymore.
Date: 28 Jan 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
She didn't deserved the slap, but Edward deserved one, that's for sure.
Date: 27 Jan 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad she stop the kiss. Hope Edward forgives her. Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 27 Jan 2017 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
I surely wish there was more.. Please update soon
Date: 26 Jan 2017 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for updating. I love everything you write!
Date: 26 Jan 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Edward...... Nobody likes the taste of their own medicine. But right now you deserve a dose size of Texas. After Bella's done serving it to you, i hope she d*ck punches your sorry ass. You're So not my favorite person right now.
Date: 26 Jan 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Whose blood does Edward have on his hands?
Date: 26 Jan 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
I would be suicidal if I was in Marie's position. Or half crazy.
Date: 26 Jan 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, I'm dying to know who's blood Edward has on him. Though I'm hoping it is Janina's. I get that Edward was probably cornered by Janina but he should've put a stop to it before it got as far as it did to where Bella seen them. As well as he shouldn't avoid her questions when he's just as quilty. Love this fic... hard.
Sherry
Date: 26 Jan 2017 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wondering whose blood it is....and he didn't even try to defend himself. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :-)
Date: 26 Jan 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
I was really hoping to hear Edward's side but I guest I will have to wait to see what is happening in his twisted mind. I cannot believe Carilse.
Date: 26 Jan 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am at a crossroads I don't like the fact that he was with the other girl and I still don't trust Michael she was piss off at Edward and she let her guard down but she got her brains on check and stop him Edward and Bella need to communicate with each other and say it all
Date: 26 Jan 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
OMG Thanks for up dating this story is so awesome and get so good...Edward oh Edward he doesnt like that she is has a play toy too....:) plz update soon...
Date: 26 Jan 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
YEAH!!! You tell her Edward!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Two-faced bastard!
Date: 26 Jan 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Go Bella tell him.... edward you suck
Date: 20 Jan 2017 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love it! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, LOVE YOU!
Date: 09 Jan 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Please update soon. I really don't like Edward. I actually hope she dumps his cheating cowardly assistance. I don't remember if I've ever rooted against BxE HEA.
Date: 08 Jan 2017 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think things are not what they looked like with Edward. I think Bella is in trouble and dont know about it yet.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
This is not good and michael is def. going to die now. I don't think edward was cheating either or at least i'm choosing not to believe it.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 05 Jan 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
A little more freedom would be good for her.
I don't know what Edward is doing with Janina, but it's not good, at all.
Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
please update soon
Date: 05 Jan 2017 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
What secret is Esmeralda not telling. Love this chapter.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another great chapter. Always leaving me wanting more! Can wait for the next update!
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Now she doesn't care if Michael is hurt? She needed to leave but permanently.
Date: 04 Jan 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Don't trust mike Bella shoo I would have gone in the office and be like look bitch that's my husband you are trying to seduce
Date: 04 Jan 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for the update ...I love this story ....It's getting good in between Edward and Bella .they do love one another ....Hope you update soon...
Date: 04 Jan 2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hell is about to be unleashed. But Edward is kinda stupid for allowing himself to be put in that position. Plus I'm betting Bella has put herself in danger, I'm not fully trusting Michael is a good guy.
Sherry
Date: 04 Jan 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is a dick. He is married and fooling around in the same house his wife is at. I don't blame her for taking off. I wouldn't go back for a few days either.
Date: 04 Jan 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is a dick. He is married and fooling around in the same house his wife is at. I don't blame her for taking off. I wouldn't go back for a few days either.
Date: 04 Jan 2017 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is an asshole
Date: 19 Dec 2016 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved the chapter especially the last couple sentences.
Date: 19 Dec 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG !!! UPDATE SOON
Date: 19 Dec 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yes finally another update. Well this chapter was intense love it!!
Date: 18 Dec 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 18 Dec 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
What is that Edward killed somebody?
Thank you.
Date: 18 Dec 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
What is that Marie is going to be jealous?
Thank you.
Date: 18 Dec 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is going to be jealous
Thank you.
Date: 18 Dec 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
He really loves him
Thank you.
Date: 18 Dec 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bon chapitre.
Je vous remercie.
Date: 18 Dec 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Damn, maybe they are having a break through of all the BS that has been thrown in their way. Though he really needs to tell Bella about Janina, and what she was to him before someone else decides to fill her in. Bella's not stupid, so she knows but she doesn't have any facts, which she deserves. Bella is right, Edward is being hypocritical. I would love for Bella to treat Janina the way Edward treated her friend.
Thank you posting a wonderful chapter. Have a Merry Christmas. <3
Sherry
Date: 18 Dec 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
I was afraid that he would rape her, OUFFFF ! He didn't do it, and he still has a LOTTT of groveling to do. Great chapter, thank you.
I wish you and your family a great Christmas time.
Date: 18 Dec 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Break through of sorts?
Date: 18 Dec 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
<3 So glad to see the update!!!