Date: 16 Apr 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
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Date: 16 Apr 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved getting to meet Carlisle.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 10 Apr 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Riley will be looking for Bella now more than ever.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Will Riley's human spirit return to the body after Lucifer is through using him or is the body just a shell now occupied?
What did Edward mean by: Riley is out strengthening his powers?
Is Jasper a liability?
Date: 03 Apr 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad her therapist got the cop there. Her boss is a twit for not taking it seriously
Date: 02 Apr 2017 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
I sure hope Riley can be stopped, somehow. Why is evil always stronger than good? Jasper needs to get over his problem with Edward. Clearly he is wrong to hold a grudge! Thanks for another gripping chapter!
Date: 02 Apr 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
It's about time someone was able to convince Bella to press charges. Though, it sounds like it's a bit late for the mortal police to do anything. I'm placing my bets on the angels!
Thanks!
Sally
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2017 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am happy she pressed charges it needed to be done now will she be safe with Jasper update soon
Date: 02 Apr 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
I an not liking Ms.Cope. Does Riley have power over Ms. Cope? Can't wait for more.
Date: 28 Mar 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG the devil just cant leave her alone. Edward will take care of her and Alice will not let her out of her sight. So Riley was a evil guy in the first place that is how the devil was able to take him over?
Date: 27 Mar 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad E got Rose to pay up for being a witch. School system is going to get sued if they don't do something about the harassment situation Riley is causing.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
If Alice is swearing, Riley must be intensifying his pursuit of Bella.
Date: 27 Mar 2017 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
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Date: 26 Mar 2017 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad that Bella is staying with Edward. I'm worried about all of them with Riley now there all day long. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm loving this story.
Date: 26 Mar 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
If Riley is pure evil, pure Lucifer, how can they defeat him now? Love the line about Edward not wanting any more "wing holes" in his shirts. To me, that was funny. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2017 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Boy oh boy this is just getting harder for them to protect Bella but I think they will prevail in the end I love it more please
Date: 26 Mar 2017 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is one good negotiator. Rosalie couldn't refuse him!
Not looking forward to what Riley might be up to next, but I'm glad Bella is getting some therapy.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 26 Mar 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
Rosalie needs her butt kicked. Riley is more of a threat than ever.
Date: 23 Mar 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
aww nice christmas dinner and presents.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward has an unusual advantage over Bella, yet she doesn't seem to mind that he listens to her thoughts. He may play off her memories but he never takes advantage of her.
His gifts were so sweetly given.
When will Bella's power manifest βitself?
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2017 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow what a beautiful day he really knows how to make it special for her and now hehehe will she get Edward to let her pay for anything hmmmmm I don't think so but will they find out why the devil wants her
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2017 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Whoo hoo bella is moving in & felt some arousal!!
Date: 19 Mar 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
He has made this the best Christmas ever for her. I am happy she will be staying with him.
Date: 19 Mar 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Totally loved that he gave her that teddy bear. It will probably be more treasured than the new coat and accessories.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 19 Mar 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love how he's taking care of her. All the Christmas stuff was a nice thing to do for her. How are they going to bring Riley to judgmant if he's more powerful than Edward? Last time he hurt Edward badly...
Date: 16 Mar 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
aww for A&J decorating for them.
Date: 16 Mar 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Glad Alice and Jasper are there for them.
Date: 16 Mar 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad he's telling her about himself. You are scaring me with that ominous warning at the end.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Mind blowing sex could be a really good christmas gift for both!!!! Haha
Date: 07 Mar 2017 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
How sad. Bella has had a rough life. Finally, she is loved!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 06 Mar 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am really enjoying this story.
Date: 06 Mar 2017 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
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Date: 06 Mar 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
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[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
They need each other they are so sweet together
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2017 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Will Jasper ever come around?
Maybe Bella is the key to mending the relationship between he and Edward?
A much needed respite for both wounded bodies and souls.
Alice is very aware of how critical this bonding time is to the fragile mind and heart of Edward's mate. And Edward for that matter.
Date: 05 Mar 2017 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think she is begining to believe life can be good.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2017 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
great chapter keep on writing
Date: 05 Mar 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
This was a sweet beginning of Christmas for Bella. Good for Alice and Jasper for doing all the decorating and gift buying.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 04 Mar 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
A nice, loving, drama-free chapter. I love that he's able to share what he is with Bella. I wonder how he can protect her when Satan, disguised as Riley, can cause him so much damage. Thanks for all your lovely words...
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hate her being in limbo. It's a perfect time for riley to make problems!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
The key point, for me, in this chapter is that Alice told her about the possibility of her turning to the dark side because of all her abuse. With that knowledge in mind, and with Edward and Alice's help, perhaps she can stay strong long enough to ward off evil. I'm hoping so. Thanks for the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella she has lived in hell most of her life does the devil has something to do with it hmmmmmm now what will be next for them will Bella see she can love and be loved
Date: 26 Feb 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella. She just can't get a break. Such a horrible life. Hopefully she will let Edward love her and will have a much better future.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
She has most of the information now. What she does next is up to her.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2017 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
How much time does Bella have to make her decision about being with Edward before Riley/Lucifer attempts to finally break her will?
Date: 26 Feb 2017 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
My heart just breaks for her. She does not trust or love herself.
Date: 23 Feb 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving your story, looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Merci pour ce bon chapitre.
Baisers
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
How far away is Alice?
You've introduced Carlisle as Alice's guide/creator, will the rest of the twicrew show up as well?
Date: 19 Feb 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great learning about Edward's history. Very interested to learn about Bella's.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 19 Feb 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love your take on the afterlife here. It is good that Edward told her his story. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my poor Edward but I think the will heal each other and win over evil
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2017 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
How will they compete with Lucifer's powers? He seems very strong and Bella doesn't seem in the right frame of mind to be able to fight back.
Date: 19 Feb 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella took that easy she is so sad.
Date: 19 Feb 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Another awesome chapter!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Feb 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Sigh... love this.
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm really glad she knows everything now!
Date: 19 Feb 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
We heard Edwards story and now I'm afraid to hear Bellas.
Date: 15 Feb 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
oooh wonder if Alice will get in trouble for revealing herself and Edward
Date: 15 Feb 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sucks that Riley gets all the power
Date: 13 Feb 2017 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
I missed this chapter WOW. Edward is in bad shape.
Date: 13 Feb 2017 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
Older than dirt lol. Bella has to be in shock WOW
Date: 13 Feb 2017 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 12 Feb 2017 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good for Alice for giving Jasper shit about his attitude toward Edward! I'm glad she went and risked herself to Bella so that Bella would come and heal Edward. Now that they've declared themselves to each other, Bella can hear Edward's thoughts? Interesting. Thanks for this story and another entertaining chapter!
Date: 12 Feb 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
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[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
I would like to know Bella's history.
Date: 12 Feb 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Beautiful! She is so broken and I hope Edward's love can fix her.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is his human equivalent name. Old English meaning: fortunate guardian. His ethereal name could be just about anything.
I need you and I'm yours aren't really words of love filled with devotion. But more of a deep need for comfort. That was all Bella had to do to help Edward? Not how I thought a mate would have to respond in order to begin the healing process, let alone complete it.
Why is Carlisle needed?
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter, keep writing
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love that she can hear him too!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Looks like he might have to tell bella what he is. And then the fun mating can happen.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Skank brigade! Very funny!
Date: 11 Feb 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
She finally knows that he is an angel. Can't wait to see what is all in Edward's past.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
I Love this story.... Sooooo much!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank goodness that worked and I can't wait to read his past and how Bella takes all of what he has to say update fast please I need to know
Date: 11 Feb 2017 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 07 Feb 2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh I hate this Bella has to get fast post soooon π’π’π’π’π’β€οΈ
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Does Bella have the ability to sense Edward's need of her? Or is it one-sided, her need for him is stronger right now.
If Riley is so powerful, why is Edward, a single Angel, the only thing standing between him and Bella?
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2017 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward needs to have more faith in Bella.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Your writing of Riley is truly creepy and evil. Well done! Hope Alice can get Edward to Bella quickly.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 05 Feb 2017 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Why would Riley think that Bella would accept him? She can't stand him! Oh, and the tool that squeezes is a vise, not vice. Great chapter !
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh snap will Bella be able to help him will Alice get to Edward in time update fast please I need to know