Date: 01 Feb 2018 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Such a good story. I hope you finish it.
Date: 11 Feb 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think she needs another kiss from edward to make her feel better of course!!
Date: 11 Feb 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think she needs another kiss from edward to make her feel better of course!!
Date: 11 Feb 2017 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow. (Good wow.) I'm interested in seeing what else you have planned for this story.
Date: 11 Jan 2017 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG!!! Brilliant! Love it. Need more of it.
Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG!!! Brilliant! Love it. Need more of it.
Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
No don't run!! Get up & go after her edward!! I'm sad i'm all caught up. :(
Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was a HUGE break through!!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
So edward makes it like they haven't tried to contact him& the cullens make it like he has ignored them?
Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is even better of a twist than i expected!!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
I thought edward was this chapter? I'm chomping at the bit!!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Get lost jake!! I do wonder did jake & edward play in the same band at one time?
Date: 11 Jan 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope edward is going to be at the labor day bbq!
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love in a family is complicated. Children feed off of the parents emotions. Sometimes that is not good. They really watch you more than listen to what you say.
Date: 04 Jan 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loving this story!
Date: 04 Jan 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
This isn't a story I'm reading right now that I look forward to an update more than this one!
Date: 04 Jan 2017 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
He has to be good to feel so bad about what he has done. If he were a terrible person he wouldn't care. I'm so glad Bella got to tell Edward all about his family in a non threatening environment. Maybe she can start to re-introduce family members to Edward one at a time, or maybe Edward's at Bella's home when a Cullen drops by unannounced. However you do it, it will be hard for Edward but rewarding in the long run. Can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Jan 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loving this story! Can't wait for more!
Date: 04 Jan 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
How long do you thing this story will be ? And is it going to be H.E.A? And how often do you update this story?
Date: 31 Dec 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Is James' Charlie father? Is he still in the picture?
What happens to Edward in college for him to be bitter?
Date: 30 Dec 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
when it comes to families you never know there is usually a mix of who is at fault. How to fix it is remember that life is short and just mend fences the best you can move on with what you have left.
Date: 30 Dec 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
still can not review on nook. Had to sign on to my computer to do this. Good story
Date: 30 Dec 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am reading on my nook can not submit a review. Sorry it will not let me although I am signed in.
Date: 29 Dec 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loving the story! Great chapter!
Date: 26 Dec 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! I wonder what effect Bella had on Edward.
Date: 26 Dec 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is awesome! More please! ;)
Date: 23 Dec 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great intro for Edward
Date: 23 Dec 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter. I wasn't able to access it from the update link that was emailed. got message said access denied unverified story. Had to go to site and open from there.
Date: 22 Dec 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am really enjoying your story! I can't wait for more!