Date: 21 Apr 2017 11:31 PM Title: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!
Love the story but it's kind of weird how every time someone talks it ends in an exclamation mark unless its a equestion
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it,
exclamation marks can denote a point made or a statement of fact,
it's not just to imply someone is shouting, but when they are I embolden for effect.
You would be surprised how many times in a conversation we actually are making a point or stating a fact.
It's not as if they are all sitting around having tea and discussing knitting patterns in this story xx
Alexis (P.s I purposely left out 4 exclamation marks from my answer to your review)
Date: 12 Mar 2017 11:17 PM Title: Best Decision I Ever Made!
Awesome story. Loved the humor. Thanks you.
Author's Response:
Thank you, It was my pleasure, literally xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Jan 2017 9:15 PM Title: Best Decision I Ever Made!
Cool that they are all getting to work in fields they want. The movie thing is cool. They'd make a killing as stunt men/women
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's a plot bunny if ever there was one lol xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Jan 2017 9:09 PM Title: A Woman's Work, Etc, Etc!
Go Bella and Angela
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're liking it xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Jan 2017 10:35 AM Title: Best Decision I Ever Made!
i love this story thank you for shairing it
Author's Response:
Thank you, it was my pleasure xx
Alexis
Date: 22 Jan 2017 10:19 PM Title: Fuck, Fuck, Fuckity, Fuck, Fuck!
Omg......I love this!!!!! Please continue to feed my addiction!
Author's Response:
Thank you, last two chaps up now, so enjoy xx
Alexis
Date: 20 Jan 2017 5:53 PM Title: Fuck, Fuck, Fuckity, Fuck, Fuck!
Glad Rose got the Denali's to back off. Wonder if Alejandro has another power up his sleeve.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Rose's bark is worse than her bite, but she will bite, that's what scares them lol xx
Alexis
Date: 20 Jan 2017 7:27 AM Title: Fuck, Fuck, Fuckity, Fuck, Fuck!
can't wait
Author's Response:
Thanks, kicking ass and taking names next time xx
Alexis
Date: 17 Jan 2017 6:21 AM Title: New Order, Old Enemies! New Treaties
Glad plans are getting into place. Thinking this trip isnt going to go as easily as he thinks it will
Author's Response:
Thanks, no it's not, but that would be too easy xx
Alexis
Date: 12 Jan 2017 11:41 PM Title: The Volturi Decide!
Glad Edward is getting the help he needs. I think it would be good to separate him from Carlisle though. Needs to learn to be a real vamp too.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I think Aro will make sure of it xx
Alexis
Date: 10 Jan 2017 9:30 PM Title: Let's Fly, Soon Be Time For Alice To Die
LOVE that Bella speaks Italian. Caius is hilarious.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Caius needed a bigger part in the films xx
Alexis
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:31 PM Title: Let's Fly, Soon Be Time For Alice To Die
i love it 10 out of 10
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad your enjoying it xx
Alexis
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:49 AM Title: Hello, You Okay? I Have To Kill You Now!
Yea Esme has an idiot for a mate.
Author's Response:
Thanks, yes to busy playing human to remember he's not xx
Alexis
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:43 AM Title: My Mate Is Human?
LOVE the bat!!! At least Sam and the elders have sense. Oh Carlisle, you've stuck your foot in it now.
Author's Response:
Thanks, just a little tougher than normal Bella xx
Alexis
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:36 AM Title: Welcome To Bedlam!
sounds like Malice is going to have a lot to answer for.
Author's Response:
Thanks, yup she's been bad xx
Alexis
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:29 AM Title: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!
LOVING the start of this already. Love me stories with Peter in them.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you like it xx
Alexis
Date: 04 Jan 2017 2:27 AM Title: Hello, You Okay? I Have To Kill You Now!
is thr dr nuts or what
Author's Response:
Thanks, he's so immersed in the fantasy, he can't see his errors xx
Alexis
Date: 01 Jan 2017 2:22 PM Title: My Mate Is Human?
stuped dr
Author's Response:
Thanks, yes not to bright xx
Alexis
Date: 01 Jan 2017 2:35 AM Title: My Mate Is Human?
this is getting so good ๐‘๐‘๐‘
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope you continue to enjoy this xx
Alexis
Date: 28 Dec 2016 2:24 AM Title: Welcome To Bedlam!
oh you go to it jasper
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're liking things so far xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Dec 2016 11:40 PM Title: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!
great start
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you like it xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Dec 2016 4:01 PM Title: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!
๐๐๐
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you like the start xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Dec 2016 12:37 AM Title: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!
Another great read can't wait
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope you like it, lots going to happen xx
Alexis
Date: 23 Dec 2016 11:49 PM Title: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!
Love this view point. Trying to figure if Edward's mate is Angela or Jessica. LOL
Date: 23 Dec 2016 11:48 PM Title: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!
Love this view point. Trying to figure if Edward's mate is Angela or Jessica. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you, aha! all will be revealed soon xx
Alexis