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Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it very much thanks for sharing and update when you can....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 45

That is great that they were finally able to have the family that they always wanted.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 44

It is good that Bella has gotten better and is now thinking about the possibility of adopting a baby and not so focused on the fact that she can't have one of her own.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 45

What a nice ending, can't wait to see where the epi takes us with this couple...this has been one of my favorite stories to read update.  Although it took me places I didn't anticipate, such as the horrific car crash and its aftermath up to the adoption, I truly love this Edward and Bella and how you have written their love story - great job!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 45

How sweet Edward is with the baby. I would have loved to see the familys reaction to her.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 45

What?? Last chapter?
*sad face*
Great story!! Loved it from beginning to end!

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 45

What a great way to end it...Sad its over loved it.

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 45

great chapter

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 45

SWEET

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 43

AWE I LOVE THESE TWO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 45

So sweet..i have tears in my eyes! great job

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 45

That was perfect.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 39

I hope she can still have babies

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 45

Thats so awesome!!!!!! I loved this fic so much and I can't wait to read the epi!!!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 37

This is a great story, everyone should read!!!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 45

Such a wonderful ending! Looking forward to the epilogue.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 36

I am so sorry I have been such a lousy reviewer but I have been so caught up in it that I just keep hitting next, and then I saw you only had 387 reviews and that is so wrong because this deserves way more than that.

 

It is awesome!!!!!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 44

Lovely chapter.  I can't wait to find out what Edward thinks about bella wanting to adopt.  I love this story and will be sad when it's finished, but I'm so glad I found it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 44

I am so happy that Bella is getting back to being Bella.

Reviewer: SophieMasen23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 44

i lovee your story- and i also hate you. i have put off a weekend worth of work to finish reading this story, teachers are gunna be pissed lol

 

really great story! update soon xxx

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 44

So glad that Bella and edward are better now. I think its a good choice to adopt.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 44

thanks for writing a real story about people that have big problems and then work through them.

 

Everything is life is not always EASY.

 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 44

awesome story love it.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 44

I think I am going to miss this story so much when it is gone and finished.

Love this chapter.

Fiorella

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 44

Great one! So happy to see them back on track!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 44

lol Esme rocks! but not as much as that really hot scene in the living room moving to the bedroom! OOH! that was hot! I can't wait for more. I'm going to be crying like a baby when this ends but then I'll probably go back through and reread it again. I can't wait for the lemony outtake in the Dirty Cheeky Monkey o/s thanks again bye

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 44

So glad Bellas doing better and wants to adopt...YAY!!!!!!!! Post again soon

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 44

loved it thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 43

looved it thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 44

good chapter. glad to see them getting back to a form of normalcy.

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 44

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 43

look forward to more of the story. hoping they are on the right track now, it seems that way.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 42

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 41

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 40

glad she is awake.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 39

good chapter. Charlie sure is being kind.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 38

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 37

glad she got rid of spoiled brat jane.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 36

so exciting. change is good!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 35

thinking jane is up to something, now i am paranoid!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 34

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 33

hope he isn't her brother that renee gave up and kept secret.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 31

good chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 43

Bella needs to let her body heal and just love Edward. Miracles happen everyday when it comes to having babies. The doctor who checked her out was looking at a still healing damaged body. No one knows what can happen once a body has healed. She might have to have a c-section if she gets pregnant or stay in bed. No one knows. Bella just needs to heal first.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 30

great chapter. So I can understand Z 's unrequited love but still think she overreacted to the news.  She knew he would never be hers and while i can see where she would still have hope this is the best for her and her unhealthy love of him.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 29

sounds like a great honeymoon so far. look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 28

so sweet

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 27

how exciting!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

great chapter

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 43

aww those two are too freaking cute even with Bella's low self esteem. lol I love this story.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 24

good chapter.

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 43

I know Bella has dealt with alot but it is about time she got her head out of her ass and see what has been if front of her this whole time. I am still hoping she gets a second opinion later on down the road with a European Dr. hopefully. Miracles do happen and they both deserve one.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

moving is a bit drastic but if there really is nothing holding them there then why not.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 22

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

what a surprise ending to the chapter. hope they do!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

with emmett at her side I think some shenanigans will be unavoidable.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 19

enjoyed it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

great chapter. new tanya would be a thorn in their side. hope she gets what she deserves eventually.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 43

Speechless!  Awesome.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 16

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

sweet chapter. look forward to more family bonding.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

nice date. he's a keeper.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

rose took it well.  Interesting to think that in the span of a few weeks of dating one could go from strangers to essentially planning their future together.  Nice to think it could happen.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

maybe rose will accept him too.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 11

great chapter. sounds like a good plan just hope it actually works. i think jealousy will feature big that night.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 43

I agree with Jake she needs to quit the pity party.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 43

That was sad that she freaked out with her little brother there but she really has come a long way in that department from not wanting to be around him to watching him. How is it that Jacob helped Bella see that she can't just forget and leave Edward.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 43

I am going to hate this to end. I do hope you will get Bella up and in better health before you end this.

 

Good story.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

expensive evasion tactic. good chapter

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 42

It is great to see the old Bella coming back but only Bella could fall watching her husband get off in the shower.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 9

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 8

good chapter. somehow i think tanya will cause trouble for them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 41

It is so sad that they have had the one thing that they wanted more than anything ripped away from them. I really hope that Bella can get through this because it is a terrible thing that happened but Alice was right in her talk with Bella in that they can help a child the same way that Carlisle and Esme helped Edward and Alice.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 7

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

glad to see charlie warming up to him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 40

It is good thay she is awake!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

yay!! glad they are together.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

hope she chooses him even if she thinks she shouldn't

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

aw, no kiss and now 6 weeks apart will not a happy bella or edward make.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 39

Wow that is alot to take in. I am shocked that it was just a freak accident but those things do happen. I just hope that everything is going to be ok.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

good first chapter. Like the characters

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 38

That isn't good that something is wrong and Edward is around the world really far away.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 43

Finally!!  I was ready to come over to fanfic land and knock some solid sense into Bella's brain.  I know she doesn't think she's enough because, damn...he's Edward Fricken Cullen but she's enough for him and that's all that matters!

Hoping for the best....

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 43

AWWWWWWWWWWW She finally figured it out!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 43

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chapter..love jake :)

post again soon plesae

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 42

Awesome story, but im a little disepointed that Bella cant get pregnant. Cant wait for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 42

God, the poor guy.  I'm surprised his dick hasn't fallen off by now!  Great chapter.  Love the story.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 42

Well what a jump Edward made, you're hurt now so you're not going to NY with me. fabulous guy. lol Im so sad to see this go but hey we have two more chapters and an epi so I think I can live with that. :D I did read your outtake on Fandom and I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Ssinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 42

The sequel should be their life as a family in London, England. The story is too good to not continue, and if you do I will be exponentially sad! Great job, love reading! Please keep writing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 42

Get her to have sex and start therapy and move. She has to be healing, then end it.

 

Loved the story.

 

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 42

oh no i was looking forward to new york post again soon

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 42

AW MAN!!!! I WAS HOPING FOR A LEMON BUT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SHE HAD TO GO AND HURT HERSELF TRYNA SEE HIM WANK OFF!!!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 42

So sad no NY. Praying for continued improvement. Great job!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 42

I can't believe it is almost over. I think their is so much more to cover. I guess you are just going to jump.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 42

I am glad to see Bella doing better. About time Edward went off on her and made her get help.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it but still worried for her update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 42

Why does this stuff always happen to her. I sure hope once they get moved that there will be a miracle of some sort they both need a blessing in their life.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 42

well im glad that shes finally talking to some one ! and getting her life back ! 

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