Date: 15 May 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it so much!! Sorry about your pc... I know how it is!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 15 May 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yeah but is that the end of it or will Royce be back for more? He doesn't strike me as too smart when it comes to Rose and the fact that he couldn't gt something that he wanted.
Date: 15 May 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Royce just doesnt get the idea when he is not wanted such a pig. At least someone else knows about them now Rose is going to be pissed when she finds out.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved the last line, it was just too funny. I cant wait for the Black and White Ball, it is going to be good.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
Alice had to get her car, lol.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
You everyone is going to find out, it is just a matter of when.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
I have a feeling Tanya is going to let the cat out of the bag.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
I liked how she changed his ringtone.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
You know Charlie would "see" that they were good together.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Just loved that Charlie was the one to find them on the side of the road.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
I loved the Mrs Roper comment, that was funny. I cant believe her mother is pregnant.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can tell they are not going to be able to stay away from each other very long.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I loved that he told her about the whole fake taking women home thing.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Seems interesting.
Date: 11 May 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
well i wonder when bella is gonna cave and tell rose and em? rose is gonna be pissed that bella kept it from her! or she'll be all 'yeah and... i'm not stupid ya know!'
christmas with the cullens should be soon.
Date: 11 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
alice is kinda freaky! i mean she's not a vamp with special powers in this one and that thing she does would be seriously creepy. awesome but creepy!
can't wait for eddie to meet momma renee.
Date: 11 May 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
yay eddie is home! and he bought her a cute car. glad she took it without too much trouble. the dinner party should be fun. but how will they set ben up when he already has jess? that is kinda sleazy. the meeting with renee should be interesting as well, all of those prego hormones running wild, she's likely to jump sexy eddie man before she knows the whole story.
Date: 10 May 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
wow this is anawesome plan. they can get over any embarresment issues while phone sexin'it up. then when he gets home it will be an all out sex-olymics!
Date: 10 May 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
so cute. i hope that bella tells chrlie about eddie pretending to be with tanya or charlie is gonna hunt him down. shoot first ask questions later.
Date: 10 May 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
so cute! eddie is so sweet my teeth hurt, but in a good way! yummy.
Date: 10 May 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
yay! bella was right that pretty much sounded like the majority of girls'wet dream!
Date: 10 May 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh boy a baby! wow! looks like we still have a few weeks to go before bella has to make a decision.
Date: 10 May 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
ok still doesn't count as giving in to what they are feeling but eddie almost caved first. wonder what bella is gonna think of all of this?
Date: 10 May 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
looks like eddie is trying to show bella his true self, not just what is shown to the masses. here's to hoping that she can see the real him...
Date: 10 May 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh this looks like fun! i wonder who will be the first to crack?
Date: 09 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yes, that's going to be really hard for both of them. To see the one they love on the arm of another. Love the story and can't wait for more.
Date: 09 May 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
YAY! I'm so excited! Man, their first kiss in the rain, declaring their love for one another. Loved it!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Please say she is not going to wait the whole six weeks before she tells the guy she likes him too? Poor ole' Edward. LOL
Date: 09 May 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just started your story and I love it already!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Lovin this story. Looking forward to your next update. Love this Edward!
Date: 08 May 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
I wonder how much FUN this ball is really gonna be. Sounds like a recipe for disaster to me, alot of pretend dating could lead into some real trouble.
Loved the Renee parts, and the way Bella is starting to open up to Edward and admit that she wants to try and have a real relationship with him.
Great Job.
Date: 08 May 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
Renee there is no other words for her LOL. I cant wait for the ball I dont think they will be able to not touch each other.
Date: 08 May 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh I love it!! Cant wait to read Edwards reaction to Bella all dressed up!
Date: 08 May 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
That formal sounds like a recipe for disaster. I can see Edward being jealous of Jacob and Bella jealous of Tanya. Lord knows what will come from that.
Renee was hilarious!
Date: 08 May 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love way Edward speaks it so hott!! Lol there is just somehing about English men that are drool worthy.
Date: 07 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh how I love this story, it's awesome to imagine being in that girls shoes! The secrecy sucks butt, but I'm sure it's a "it is what it is" situation. I was so happy to see an update...thanks!! Hope you find the time to update again soon!
:)
Date: 07 May 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I didn't think that Bella would have gone off on Renee like that but I guess it is something that she needed to do. But it made her realize that she is ready to have everything with Edward.
Date: 07 May 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
I think that she's going to have a better time then she thinks with Jake and that Edward is going to get majorly jealous. Should be an interesting night I can't wait
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Excellent chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
love it...cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 07 May 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow wow wow Edward is hot jealous. lol I love it. Its been forever since you've updated, what exactly are you doing? :) just teasing. Please update again real soon? Please PLEASE PLEAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!!!!! lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Psst... I'm updating again tonight... I've been on vacay ;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
Another amazing chapter!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved the piano sex!!!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
That is funny that he would buy a car just to get away from them.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
LMAO, omg i can't stop laughing because edward said "pecker" . i think this is the first story i have read that has edward using that word and it is so funny. great chappy.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please tell me i didn't wake you up!! here it's 5:30 pm and I am not used to the time difference which is WOW!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
LMAO... No worries. I turn my damn phone off so I DON'T get woke up in the middle of the night by a random alert notification or something :) I just was sleepy this morning because my son woke me up at the butt crack of dawn this morning. For no good reason... *sigh*
Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it!! What to do for the next chapter??
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll get it out to you later... after a major caffeine fix ;)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
Damn that has got to suck never having a private life! I for one have stopped buying the scandal sheets and tabloid magizines ever since the incident with Princess Di, my own little revolution.
Author's Response:
Haha, I had to study up on the tabs & blogs before I started this because I'd stopped reading them, too. Thanks for the review!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
buy a car to get away from press people wow It should be interesting him meeting Renee. Would Bella want him to give up his career for her or maybe she just need to come out of hiding and be his women.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you ... I needed that ... Love your story
Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
aww that was sweet. who knew it would cost Edward a hefty sum to see Bella's mom and meet her? lol. I love this and where its going. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 08 Apr 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
The ups and downs of our couple. Sigh! I love the normalacy you have given them and the everyday issues that they are dealing with. Tho not those of a typical couple they are real. Great job! I can hardly wait to see where we go next.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
Very real fears on both their parts.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am totally obsessed with this story. You must update quickley..
I love english Edward..
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Date: 07 Apr 2010 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awesome!! I loved the audi!! I'll send you the outfits for cp 10 later on!!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 07 Apr 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Rose is going to be so pissed when she finds out. So glad he is home and what a homecoming and comin and comin some more lol. ya I think I am funny sometime. They will not be able to keep things secret for long will they. Should be interesting meeting Renee cant wait for more
Date: 07 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
great update and i just love these two together. i can't wait for angela and ben to meet. and i really think it is time for edward to step up and say that he wants their relationship to go public...and screw the media! and bella needs to understand that the media can basically go to hell...lmao!
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
aww that poor couple. :( I love where this is going though. I loved the hot kinky sex in the kitchen and I can't wait for some Edward and Bella moments on the red carpet or Edward trying not to be with Bella when they're in public. I can't wait. thanks again bye
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
Aww. they are so sweet and Bella got a new car even if she didn't really want one. I am glad that she wants Edward to meet her mother.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Another stellar chapter
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
I have a bad feeling about this. I think Edward should at least "break-up" with Tanya and claim that he's dating someone who wishes to remain anonymous. If not, then should the media find out about Bella, they're going to portray her as "the other woman" instead of "the mystery woman." This is an awesome story, by the way. There's so much emotion and thought put behind this story, which makes it all the more worth-while to read. :)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Amazing chapter!!! I loved it!! And sorry for the delay again!!!
I can't wait for Ch 9!!! Do u want me to put some underwear in the set??
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow. Awesome, love this! The phone sex is pretty hot. Oh, and I loved what you had about no one ever calling Edward beautiful, that was sweet:) Plus, the poker and him choking. And, Jacob! Keep up the awesome work!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
that was great loved it
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
that was good they can't fight it much longer loved it
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
that was really good loved it
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well helloooooo! Great chapter. I have to say that I don't think I'd mind cruising around in a Vanquish. Drooling frat boys, yes, but the Vanquish, nope. I love the phone conversations. The poker playing scene had to be my favorite though. I can only imagine Edward choking on his drink and half spitting in in someone's face. I can't wait for him to get home!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great story, eager to read more.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
That is way to keep spice in the relationship.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
This was such a sweet chapter! LOL @ Edward spitting out his drink when he got Bella's text during the poker game! I liked how you wrote the scene with Bella coming out of class and being the subject of mad speculation because of the Vanquish.
Can't wait for the next installment!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
sounds exciting Bella almost cruched she gets to drive his car how hot is that and then phone sex WOW WHAT A GOOD DAY LOL. Sex sceane with tanya bummer .
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Bella! The gate now hates her too. I was cracking up though when he told her to take the astion.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Bella! The gate now hates her too. I was cracking up though when he told her to take the astion.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awww loved it, they're amazing! Hope edward goes home soon
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Okay, they have to get through Charlie...I love the drama, but this seemed to work out to quick. I really hope there's more drama than just convincing Charlie to think that their relationship is a good idea.
Of course, there will be!
I thought I read in your bio that you're from Indiana...I love the "englishisms" you have coming from Edward's mouth.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yep, from Indiana :) I write it all myself and have a couple Brits from FFn check it before I post it.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like it that Renee is pregnant! Great twist...none of the stories I've read have ever done that before.
This six week thing is depressing, though!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
That dog is going to be the death of Bella!
You got me confused...6 weeks away! Some romance!
Okay, go ahead and laugh!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow...that was totally hot! i really wished that they would not keep the relationship in secret! there is nothing to hide and i really think edward should retire, he has enough money. i would hate to see my boyfriend making out with another woman even if it was acting.
Author's Response:
Actually... retirement is a topic of conversation in a future chapter.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
So not cool to leave me hanging like that! haha great chapter :)
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really hate reviewing stories that have a lot of chaps. because I always want to make predictions of the future of the plot. If there are tons of chaps ahead, I always feel like the author is laughing at me!
Anyway, very interesting! Jacob and Mike! I liked the way you woosed up Mike! He doesn't even stand a chance...
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
awww how sweet are they in a hot kinky way? lol I love it. I liked the poker game and Bella's whole gate crashing her car deal. that was funny. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really suck at reviews. I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying it. The story's interesting and it's well written. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
great two updates and i absolutely love those two together. they are so hot, passionate and so funny together. i love how they keep open communication with eachother, those 3 weeks are going to be very long. please update soon.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really like this story! I'm all caught up and wishing for another update. I so want to know whats going on...love it!!
Great job,
Thanks for sharing...
Me
Date: 31 Mar 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
gah i love Edward. Can't wait for u to update again
Date: 30 Mar 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Perfect! Now it will be highly interesting seeing how they skirt around L.A. not being attached. This should prove for some interesting conversations. Thanks for such an entertaining story!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
perfect how are they going to stay apart for three weeks?
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
keep it coming this is an awesome story i can not wait till they are together for good eventually engaged and married would be good notify me of next chapter i await
Date: 29 Mar 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awwwww I love edward and bella! They are so cute even if they are 17 years apart!! I can't wait for the next chapter I look forward to these updates
Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter!! I liked it very much!! Do you want me to do sth??
xoxo
Marianne