Date: 01 Jun 2020 7:10 PM Title: Those Who Won't Help Themselves!
Not sure how i feel about alice/charlie and jasper/bella...i certainly dont mind jasper /bella mating but alice/charlie on top of that...it's not my favorite...
Just a week before, jasper was w/alice- husband/wife with intimacy
Now, they are w/a father&daughter combo...just not feeling it...i thought it'd be esme/charlie pairing
which may have actually been better but...π’π
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Yes they were still together, whether they were still intimate is open to personal choice.
But it wouldn't do if everyone liked the same thing xx
Alexis
Date: 02 Oct 2018 5:43 AM Title: Epilogue, Full Circle & Then Some
This story had some good parts but over all it was just too weird for me and ooc. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
sorry it wasn't for you but we can't all like the same things xx
Alexis
Date: 30 Sep 2018 12:14 PM Title: The Mirror Often Lies!
This story is a little strange...
Author's Response:
Thanks,
that was the plan, so I guess it worked, the Major explains it all though xx
Alexis
Date: 30 Sep 2018 6:16 AM Title: The End of Innocence Is Here!
A little confused on the whole age thing... If Bella is still in school and a junior at that it would make her about 17 and considering that Jasper is a doctor he would be 24?? Can't see a father letting them date.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
I did mention within the story he was pretending to play the savant, so would be younger xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2018 11:21 PM Title: Epilogue, Full Circle & Then Some
Like that everyone is getting their HEAs. ROFL at the Mallory piece.
Esme is a wonderful woman and leader.
Dragons?!?! oooh I like that idea.
Thanks for writing and sharing
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Well if Vampires and Werewolves exist, then why not dragons xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 10:23 PM Title: I Am Me!
LOL Pink is not my thing either.
Alice really needs to hop off that pedistal she's put herself on before someone blows it up with her on it.
Esme is just awesome. I love it. Surprise ending. And her mate is def a different one.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
It just linked in perfect I thought xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 10:11 PM Title: Red Or Blue
Woo hoo for waking up. Rehab is going to suck I bet. Nice that Alice got her what B would have picked out.
Sounds like LaPush is going back in the right direction. Leah is good for Sam, and Sam is good for LaPush.
Go Bella for standing up to everyone.
Esme is just freakin awesome. Bed sounds wonderful
Author's Response:
Thanks,
I really enjoyed doing the relatonship between Esm and Sam xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 10:01 PM Title: Quick Time Or Dawdle!
Like that Charlie is making plans for the future with Bella and Alice.
Wonder if someday everyone would allow Edward back for a visit.
Like Leah being allowed to be a strong woman.
Was wondering what he did with the sketch.
Think Alice just needs to be her friend, not a replacement mom.
Woo hoo for her waking up.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
glad you're enjoying it so far xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 9:50 PM Title: Hach ch'i Brother,Ciao Mate,Hey Darlin'
Glad Sam is taking a page from Esme's book with Jared.
Charlotte is such a trooper with Alice. Charlie is going to be such a good influence on her.
Sounds like Edward is realizing the extent of his mistakes. Hopefully he'll change for the better.
Wow a whale?!?! Never saw that one coming.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
I don't see why not, I just went with the natural elements and whales are revered in many cultures xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 9:28 PM Title: Where Exactly In The Queue, Were You?
Wow, Alice still thinks too highly of herself sometimes. Not very nice either.
Sounds like Billy will get what is coming to him.
Loved Charlie's chat with Alice.
Jasper's plans sound reasonable to me
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Charlie won't stand any of her crap xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 9:05 PM Title: In Quests For Power (Read Fine Print)
Wow Sam is going to be a powerful, helpful Chief. I like what you've twisted his story to be.
Nice that Edward reached out to Carlisle.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Yes I think the wolves got a bum deal in the books, they could have been so much more xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:56 PM Title: The Silent Can Overcome!
Loving this new ability of Bella's... neat twist. Billy is such an arse. Hope he goes away for a long time.
Edward seems to be coming around. Hopefully, it will stick.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
being in a coma is allowing her to play with it easily xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:48 PM Title: Life Likes To Bite You In The Butt!
wow Billy really needs to be taken out or sent away. What an arse. Like that Sam is stepping up and helping Jacob out.
Interesting having Charlie in the dream world with the girls.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
sometimes a girl just needs her daddy, even if she is unconsious xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:40 PM Title: Sometimes It's Staring You In The Face
Glad Seth got to Sam and Leah in time. aww for letting him imprint on her.
Sounds like Edward is starting to come around a little bit. Guess we'll see.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
I never understood the need for the love triangle with the wolves xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:29 PM Title: The Ever Changing Way Of Things
Hopefully B and Isa will merge completely soon. Billy is a real PITA who probably won't change soon. Esme is awesome.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Yes she's my best Esme ever xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:21 PM Title: The Scent Of Hope Is In The Air!
Jasper is doing a wonderful job of helping B but not pushing too much too fast. Glad Alice is making some decisions and choice for everyone's benefit, not her own desires. Go Sam
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Glad you like it x
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:59 PM Title: The Dog Days Are Over!
Yea sounds like Billy needs to grow up and let someone else lead the pack into the future.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
He's greedy, selfish and manipulative xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:48 PM Title: I'm Ready For Home Sweet Home!
Jasper sounds like he made excellent progress with himself. Yes Alice needs a firm hand and a No once in a while. Wonder if Charlie's plans for the pack will be that easy.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Charlie's the type of guy, when he speaks everyone listens xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:12 AM Title: Those Who Won't Help Themselves!
Sounds like E is going to be lucky to remain alive if he doesn't grow up. Alice is such a sweetie in this.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
glad you enjoyed it and for once a nice Alice xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:57 AM Title: Invites and Insights!
Glad that Carlisle is admitting to his faults and apologizing.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
eventually they see the light xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:43 AM Title: The Mirror Often Lies!
Love that Esme put C in his place. Sounds like things will be changing in the households. Glad Peter and Charlotte are there now too.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Not before time xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:07 AM Title: Let's Lay All Our Cards On The Table!
Nice talk Charlie had with everyone. Yea Carlisle needs to be knocked off his pedestal a bit I think. I love Peter.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
No matter the age Charlie is the father xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:55 AM Title: And Then There Was Four, Or Six!
i always thought that Charlie would have known more than let on in the books/movies. Glad they are all going to give Bella time before pushing her into something she's not quite ready for.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
me too, I hated SM's portrayal xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:42 AM Title: Open Doors!
Glad he is putting Charlie at ease as well as Bella.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
yes they bond over her xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 5:59 AM Title: The End of Innocence Is Here!
wow Edward is a wanker. Hopefully he doesn't cause more trouble for Bella and the others. Wonder if Rose really is sorry. Guess we'll see.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
only time will tell xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 5:48 AM Title: Did You Feel Me Watching You?
Poor Bella. Glad she was able to protect herself in the end. Phil got off easy. Sleeze. Sounds like Edward is going to be a real PITA. Nice that Alice is acting as a true friend to Jasper.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
So people never grow up and he is eternally 17 xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Aug 2018 5:37 AM Title: Just Another Day, Maybe Not
wow what an interesting start. Too bad she didn't listen to her instincts about Phil. Go Alice!!
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Yeah but hindsight is 20/20 xx
Alexis
Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:33 PM Title: Epilogue, Full Circle & Then Some
Very intersting twist on everything. I really liked it. THANKS
Author's Response:
Thank you, so happy you liked and enjoyed it xx
Alexis
Date: 04 Jun 2017 12:02 PM Title: I Am Me!
Very interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope you enjoyed it all xx
Alexis
Date: 30 May 2017 10:25 AM Title: Red Or Blue
OMG!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I guess you liked it lol xx
Alexis
Date: 22 May 2017 2:32 PM Title: Quick Time Or Dawdle!
I LOVED IT!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad it's going over so well xx
Alexis
Date: 17 May 2017 8:01 PM Title: Hach ch'i Brother,Ciao Mate,Hey Darlin'
I loovvveee it!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thanks, only 2 chaps to go for this one xx
Alexis
Date: 13 May 2017 5:37 PM Title: Where Exactly In The Queue, Were You?
Glad to see growth in. Alice
Author's Response:
Thanks, she's learning, slowly but it's happening xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2017 11:58 PM Title: Just Another Day, Maybe Not
What an exciting beginning. Everything was very sped-up with urgency. I can't wait to see what this setup was foreshadowing.
Thank you for sharing. -RoseE. x
Author's Response:
Thanks, so glad you liked it so far xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Apr 2017 5:33 AM Title: Life Likes To Bite You In The Butt!
Ohhhhhhhh....... Billy gonna get it..... And I'm loving the way you have included all points of the story without taking an entire chapter for each part. Oh! And Isabella's powers are awesome!!! Impatiently waiting on your next update!!! π
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's the thing about being a short story writer,
a lot gets done in one chapter lol xx
Alexis
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's the thing about being a short story writer,
a lot gets done in one chapter lol xx
Alexis
Date: 19 Apr 2017 11:19 PM Title: Sometimes It's Staring You In The Face
Awesome story. love Esme here, she is perfect, actually all your characters are great.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I don't always flesh them out so much,
must have been feeling in a good mood lol xx
Alexis
Date: 19 Apr 2017 7:44 PM Title: Sometimes It's Staring You In The Face
OMG.... THAT WAS AWESOME.... I'm so happy Bella is almost back with us and that Edward is finally seeing reason. Been Sam's imprinting on Leah make me so happy!!! ππ
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you like the pack and Edward sections xx
Alexis
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:13 AM Title: The Ever Changing Way Of Things
Omg... Nooo you can't leave me on the edge like that π
Author's Response:
Thanks, a couple of things coming up for the tribe next chapter,
hope you like it xx
Alexis
Date: 09 Apr 2017 3:18 AM Title: The Scent Of Hope Is In The Air!
Love it!!!!! Impatiently waiting on the next undate!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm happy that you're happy with it xx
Alexis
Date: 05 Apr 2017 9:50 PM Title: The Dog Days Are Over!
I loooovvveeee this!!! πππ
Author's Response:
Thanks, so glad you're enjoying it xx
Alexis
Date: 04 Apr 2017 2:57 AM Title: The Dog Days Are Over!
Loved the meeting with the tribe
Author's Response:
Thanks, there is a little more to the meeting in the next chapter as well,
just wanted it to be a little different this time round xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Mar 2017 9:40 PM Title: Those Who Won't Help Themselves!
OMG......... π°π°π°
Author's Response:
Thank you, so happy you are enjoying it xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2017 8:15 AM Title: Invites and Insights!
This is very different and I love it, more please !!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, yeah trying not to rehash the same old same old xx
Alexis
Date: 14 Mar 2017 5:51 PM Title: The Mirror Often Lies!
can't wait for more love it so far
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you like it xx
Alexis
Date: 14 Mar 2017 10:10 AM Title: The Mirror Often Lies!
Omg.... Idk why this makes me so happy yet so frustrated that there's not more.... βΊπ£
Author's Response:
Thank you, so very glad you like it xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2017 6:55 PM Title: Let's Lay All Our Cards On The Table!
i think i'm going to like peter in the story
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it xx
Alexis
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:16 AM Title: Let's Lay All Our Cards On The Table!
I love Charlie
Author's Response:
Thanks, yeah I think it's more believable xx
Alexis
Date: 04 Mar 2017 1:36 PM Title: And Then There Was Four, Or Six!
Love that Charlie made the connection.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hate that SM made him appear thick xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2017 3:42 AM Title: Open Doors!
can't wait to see what you come up with next
Author's Response:
Thanks, yeah Charlie isn't finished yet, he's more like Bella than anyone guessed xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2017 8:04 PM Title: The End of Innocence Is Here!
i glad at what happen to edward i love that part 10 nout 10
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you liked it xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2017 5:55 AM Title: Just Another Day, Maybe Not
What a cool take on a story. I also love Bella subconsciously moving with Jasper's positioning.
Very cool indeed.
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're liking it xx
Alexis
Date: 18 Feb 2017 12:26 AM Title: Did You Feel Me Watching You?
Cannot wait to read more. Please update again soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you are enjoying this one xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2017 8:00 AM Title: Did You Feel Me Watching You?
i glad that she killed him he got what was comming to him
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it xx
Alexis