Date: 09 Dec 2017 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love it. I would love to see more on this story and how they met
Date: 15 Mar 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was great, thanks and loved the misdirection, I really enjoyed it xx
Alexis
Date: 15 Mar 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jings, Crivens, help ma boab! I love it xx
Alexis
Date: 14 Mar 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my! xx
Alexis
Date: 14 Mar 2017 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'll hold him, while she punches him in the nuts lol xx
Alexis
Date: 14 Mar 2017 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Smooth, he's real smooth xx
Alexis
Date: 14 Mar 2017 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ooh, Lauren the bitch, no matter where or when lol xx
Alexis
Date: 14 Mar 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Liking Jade, she's obviously got her back xx
Alexis
Date: 14 Mar 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice, I know I'm gonna enjoy this xx
Alexis
Date: 02 Mar 2017 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
I hate that Bella and Peter got hurt a little, but glad that they are together again. I do wonder what Mackenna will do to her traitor husband.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh hell....You're gonna give us another twist. Can't wait to see who else dies before James gets given to Billy Black.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well that was yummy! ;)
Date: 02 Mar 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Carlisle was a little evil troll and his kid was just like him. ugh...
Date: 02 Mar 2017 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh hell...You surprised the hell out of me. I love being shocked at a turn a round or expected ending. I do hope Demetri is OK and not really hurt though. I do like him and Jade.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait to read how this came about. I loved that Edward was beaten to a bloody mess. Does that mean I am a secret sicko??? nah.... LOL
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh hell...half way through this chapter, I was hoping Bella was dreaming. I hope Peter still likes her.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
Still am glad that Bella has Jade in all this cluster fuck. Carlisle seems smarmy. ugh......
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
I like when Jasper and Peter are protective of each other, trust each other , but let each other handle their own dam shit.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hopefully Carlisle and Esme will kick Edward's dumb ass in different ways.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
I laughed that the only things that really upset Bella this chapter was being woke up at the ass crack of dawn and the thought of having to call fuckward. LOL
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder if Bella knows Peter has 'claimed' her. hmmmm..... I'm glad Nahuel and his sister will be safer now.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
I liked Maria laughing with Bella. Bella isn't haveing to pretend at all really, she's just being herself mostly. I wonder why Charlotte would care who looked at her brother.... hmmmm.....
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
So we know some of the crooks are worse than others, but I really despise crooked cops. I'm getting that feeling from Carlisle's desparation.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Everything about this whole thing seems shifty to me. I'm glad Bella has some 'qualified' people that know what is going on.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well I am glad that Emmett and Demetri didn't forget about Bella......I was going to be mad at them too.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Bella has at least 1 friend that she can bitch too about all the stupid pig men that are surrounding her and will surround her.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm starting to think Carlisle may be more than stupid, he maybe an ass as well. Poor Bella.......
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sounds like Edward is even worse than I thought and the chief is even dumber than I thought.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Human Edward is slimy?? That's new and I hope he and his dad get theirs.
Date: 26 Feb 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it!
love all your fics!
dont ever stop writing!
...please...
ty...
Date: 26 Feb 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow,
what a twist!! brutal on edward...
after i finish this fic, i cannot help
but re-read with the full understanding of
bella's true ID... it makes the story
different than the first read...
well done...never would have guessed!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome story!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the plot twist. I just wish there was more.