Date: 27 Mar 2018 5:00 PM Title: Surprises revealed
interesting but there are waaaay too many questions with
not enough answers to form any real opinion.
the only thing i can say is that i am confused.
obviously these 2 know enough about each other to
have gotten married with a child now. we know that the
father was not present during the whole 9 months of
the pregnancy while life continued for bella, which must
have been quite difficult dealing with the pregnancy on
her own as well as working full time? i assume. meanwhile,
she did have some people who cared about her ie. esme and
perhaps carlisle...she was also aware of edward's family since
she wasn't too surprised to learn of his father's behavior or their
involvement with mafia organization. and let's not forget no one in his
family knew of his wife except for esme and carlisle.
that seems to be all we know which doesn't give us a whole lot of anything.
so, though this may be somewhat intriguing, i can only say, Huh? where
the hell was edward for the last ~9 months when she needed him?
Date: 11 Nov 2017 5:08 PM Title: Surprises revealed
Great story.
Date: 14 Apr 2017 1:16 PM Title: Surprises revealed
Wonderful. Now all I want is the back story.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:59 AM Title: Surprises revealed
Wow that was a surprise for all. I hope Edwards dad is not a prick like he is acting now. Why didnt anyone know Edward was married?
Date: 07 Apr 2017 4:36 PM Title: Surprises revealed
So Dr. Isabella Swan is married to the Heir Apparent of the Masini Mofia Family.
(Is the name Masen interchangeable with Masini?)
Esme is her mid-wife/sister-in-law. That makes Dr. Carlisle Cullen her brother-in-law. Emmett was about to say his last name as Cullen before the phone disconnected. Is Jasper related or a made-man?
Who's covering for Bella at the hospital? Can Carlisle make that happen?
What will be the new heirs full name?
Did Edward lie to Bella about his relationship with his parents because of the Masini Mofia title?
Definitely need more!
Date: 07 Apr 2017 4:09 PM Title: Surprises revealed
OMG! Love this story you wrote ,wish you continue writing more.
Date: 07 Apr 2017 10:56 AM Title: Surprises revealed
A great first chapter, so much happened in it. I really look forward to reading more of this and wait in anticipation of the next chapter.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 5:39 PM Title: Surprises revealed
LOVE IT!!!!
hope this is just the first chapter of something good
Date: 05 Apr 2017 2:37 PM Title: Surprises revealed
:) loved this. I hope there will be more
Date: 05 Apr 2017 9:51 AM Title: Surprises revealed
Great story - I would love more. A lot more :)
Date: 05 Apr 2017 3:39 AM Title: Surprises revealed
Love it.