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Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is great! Please update!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella just needs to end her new life. Her dad was a creep.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love the story so far, but it is the title that leaves me perplexed. I think you should go with Daddy Long Legs instead.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2017 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love it

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

She's really figuring it out.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

I have not read daddy long legs but the movie was one of my all time faviorits I think I was about 7 the first time I saw the film.. Now having a little girl of my own I look forward to first showing her the animated version first then the fread Astaire one... I love when writers make references to old movies or songs... Your doing a great job

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait until the next chapter!  ๐Ÿ˜Š



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I just posted!  Yay!

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update.  Edwards really keeping her in a fish bowl.  



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Thank you for reading!  :) 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh Edward Edward



Author's Response:

LOL!  :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

OMG cant wait till she finds out about what is going to be her future



Author's Response:

Me, too!  :)

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, hopefully this one has a HEA. Really didn't like the way the  one shot ended



Author's Response:

It will be a HEA.  I am ALWAYS Team Edward.  :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2017 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

At thirteen she has realized this.  All the intense animosity makes complete sense now!  Edward is going to have a mess on his hands when he thinks he will get to control her!



Author's Response:

He definitely is!  Thank you for reading.  :)

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2017 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Didn't take her long to figure this out did it?  Clever girl ....  Thanks for update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2017 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  :)

Reviewer: handsonu22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2017 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Nice job! Well written, I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!!  :)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

As always you've pulled me in๐Ÿ˜‰ looking forward to Alice and Bella building a friendship over the summer vacation ๐Ÿ˜„



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!  It means everything!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2017 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella she has to feel so alone and scarred to death.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!  I really appreciate it!  :)

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella.  She is beginning to figure some things out.

 



Author's Response:

She is a smart girl.  :)  Thank you so much for reading!  :)

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

well i wood not take that laying down lol



Author's Response:

You can never have too many cats!  :)  Thank you for reading.  :)

Reviewer: Midnight Angels Say Goodnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

I wonder how Edward is going to deal with her attitude.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

OMG, Update soon.  Please.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2017 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great, awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting place



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2017 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

::))



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

So happy your going further with this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for this update!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for sharing this with us...looks like it's going to be fun!

Xxx T



Author's Response:

Thank you!  <3

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2017 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

can't wait to see were this goes



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  <3

Reviewer: kwnblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

It is an interesting story ! I would definitely want to see more soon !



Author's Response:

Thank you!  <3

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the next post so glad you wrote me this is going to be a great story



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Congrats on this first story!  I'm excited to see where you take it!  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: verosan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Im so happy you are going to continue the story I cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I plan on posting a new chapter each week.

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

You got me....the story reads well and I am curious as to will happen next.  I must say I am nervous to read because you are new. How often will you update.  Please tell m plan to complete the story... I enjoyed the story.

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I am a new writer, but I have two veteran writers who are mentoring me. I do plan on finishing; I currently have 3 chapters finished and will post once a week.  

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