Date: 02 Sep 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved it!! I hope you finish it even just an epi. Even if you don't i'm just going to imagine them living in total bliss!
Date: 01 Sep 2018 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was exciting!! I wonder if they'll run into Tyler at the game?
Date: 01 Sep 2018 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Heck friggin yeah she should just go for it with edward!!! When i read edward's words i want to read them with a little twang! I'm just lovin country edward!!
Date: 01 Sep 2018 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
What the heck! I want to junk punch felix!!!!! Poor edward isn't going to have much of a chance with him traveling so much. Her trust issues are not going to be able to handle him traveling.
Date: 01 Sep 2018 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
I know you said just go along for the ride but no matter how many great dates she has i'm still hoping for edward. :)
Date: 01 Sep 2018 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hot edward is right. And he is just a wee bit cocky too! Live him already!
Date: 01 Sep 2018 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! You actually made me like james just a tad bit!
Date: 01 Sep 2018 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Big screw up dude! Vickie just busted u big time!!
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story.
Date: 02 May 2018 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am enjoying this story. I used to live in Memphis, so it is like going home.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. I loved Memphis when we visited. It has been fun finding places to take Bella and Edward. Any suggestions are welcome!
Date: 01 May 2018 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter ! Lovely lemon ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 01 May 2018 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter ! Lovely lemon ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 25 Apr 2018 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm enjoying this story, I'm just confused about the timing of everything and the pacing throws me for a loop sometimes. I know that the divorce took 3 months, but how long has it been from there? A few weeks? I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Yes it has been a little over 2 weeks since she met Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Apr 2018 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm enjoying this story, I'm just confused about the timing of everything and the pacing throws me for a loop sometimes. I know that the divorce took 3 months, but how long has it been from there? A few weeks? I'm looking forward to more!
Date: 24 Apr 2018 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
OOh my they are moving along quite nicely. Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 24 Apr 2018 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad they are progressing a bit.
Date: 24 Apr 2018 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hopefully they'll get past all thier demons.
Date: 23 Apr 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wtf. It's been less than 24h dude. Seriously?
Date: 22 Apr 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it hope you update soon.
Date: 20 Apr 2018 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved it what a great date and what and end heheheheh
Date: 03 Aug 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
According to your above A/N, I won't be able to read this. I'm strictly E/B.
Author's Response:
I hope you kept reading. I wasn't sure where this was going but it is definitely an E/B now. Stick with me on this. I am very busy with school, work and family but I will work on this when I have time.
Thanks for reading and taking king the time to review.
Tracy
Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
They are so steamy and sweet at the same time .
Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
I was raised in Memphis, and this story brings me back home.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think I need a shower, a cold one! I love the anticipation and the fun of a new relationship. I think they should have fun and go with their feelings. I can't wait for the next date. Love this story.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
awww for the roses and the talk. The phone is great for really talking since you can't actually get distracted with the physical (in general).
Nice that he helped with dishes/cleaning up. His Mama raised him right.
Nice to know they are attracted to each other. Good place to stop I think
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad Alice is getting her back on the horse, so to speak.
Nice that E called about dressing appropriately. Sounds like they both have alot of trust issues to work through.
Yes since Jasper is not available ( I love me some J/B stories), go for it with E
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Unfortunatly many are die hard B/E peeps. But we'll see where you go with it.
hmmm Felix is acting a bit creepy (hallway thing). And the Kate this is disconserting. What a creep at the end.
Although she needs to realize that talking/texting one guy while getting ready for a date with another is quite rude as well
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok your opening AN kinda scares me. Glad she and E are talking at least. hmmm now I wonder if Vicky is E's college romance. Yea my brain is spinning.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Feel a little sorry for James despite what he did. Don't think that is the last we'll hear from her. Tyler sounds like a real peach....NOT.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOVED her decking Vicky, but sadly she could sue.
Surprised James is taking the blame like an adult. Yea I don't see Tricky Vicky going away quietly
Sarasota? as in Florida? I went to High School there. Riverview Rams!!
Date: 29 Jun 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow James didn't waste any time. Talk about arsehole
Date: 29 Jun 2017 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Best date ever. Wish I had a date night like this.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sadly women can be just as cavalier about cheating as men can. Poor B.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think they are moving perfect speed. Good chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad they are giving each other a chance.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad they are giving each other a chance.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow they are on fire their brains say slow but their bodies say fast heheheheh yumy
Date: 08 Jun 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think she should go for it with Edward. They understand each other and although there will be bumps and curves in the road, I think they can maneuver them together. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 08 Jun 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think they should start slow and get to know each other, before they go all in. I don't mean they should date other people because it seems Bella has bad judgement when it comes to men. I like this Bella and Edward, and I hope they get a HEA.
Date: 08 Jun 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Beautiful. These two are gonna make sparks together!
Date: 08 Jun 2017 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thats a great date
Date: 07 Jun 2017 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
I loved it they both have been hurt but maybe they can help each other more please
Date: 07 Jun 2017 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
I loved it they both have been hurt but maybe they can help each other more please
Date: 07 Jun 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Go for it Bella. Get your Edward
Date: 07 Jun 2017 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
After hearing his backstory, I'm surprised Edward took a chance with Bella after she told him she was going on a date with someone else. I guess her being up front about everything let him know she wasn't going to do things behind his back.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Keep in mind he met her while she was on a date with someone else as well. He wants what she wants, someone oppen and honest. She didn't hide anything from him and she didn't really owe him anything since they had just met.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Date: 07 Jun 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
I like hurdles and bumps to every story it builds the charcters. But I would be happy to see more Bella and Edward lol
Author's Response:
LOL! There is no turning back now.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow poor Bella that had to hurt now will she still go out with Edward and if so he will have his work cut out for him
Date: 07 Jun 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story already, I just want a HEA with Edward.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well better she found out about Felix before they got serious. I feel bad for her though. Give Edward a chance.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! That's a really fucked up thing to do to someone! And then he still wanted to drive her home?! Yeah, thanks, but no thanks! I'm proud of Bella for realizing that she's not the one with the problem. But, I can most definitely understand not being able to trust anyone. As a woman who has been divorced for over a year after 25 years of marriage to a man who cheated, I most definitely understand Bella's point of view. Can't wait for her date with Edward. Wonder if she'll tell him about her date with Felix?!
I hope your courses are going well! Until nextime,
Virginia
Date: 07 Jun 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter. Im happy that she didnt stau with felix. I am routing for Edward and her. But i am so ready to just sit back and see how it goes.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's better she found out sooner than later.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really hope Edward is a good guy and helps her to trust again. I guess we all have to endure some crappy dates before we find the right one.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hopefully Edward will help her to gain some confidence and trust.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
She won't even try to trust Edward because of the two jerks? I hope she doesn't cancel her date with Edward.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 26 May 2017 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story, can't wait to see where this takes then.
Date: 25 May 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful, love it.
Date: 24 May 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story, and can't wait until the next update!
Date: 24 May 2017 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story so far.
Date: 24 May 2017 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm going to ask for a spoiler. Is this a B/E HEA? If not, I would appreciate the heard up. That's what I read. Thanks.
Author's Response:
I won't give you a spoiler but I will say that the plan is always for a HEA and for her to choose Edward. I won't promise that because Bella is directing this story but that is my plan.
Date: 09 May 2017 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the story already, I love it when Bella is a strong person and not the weakling. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 08 May 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting date.
Date: 06 May 2017 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! Great beginning, can't wait to see where it goes from here.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 05 May 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
He didn't wait long to bring his mistress into their home, he's just destroyed any hope of a reconciliation!
Date: 05 May 2017 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to read more, really enjoying this story.
Date: 05 May 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
That was great ðŸ‘
Date: 05 May 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
That was great ðŸ‘
Date: 05 May 2017 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Better stick to reading and not guessing. Good story
Date: 05 May 2017 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
I saw the link on Cheatward's Spot, too. Love that group.
I enjoyed this chapter.
I usually read on fanfiction.net but alerts aren't working there.
Date: 04 May 2017 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
YAY! Edward must really be attracted to bella, anytime a man is looking at you during a sports game means he must like you. lol.
Date: 04 May 2017 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Tried to contact you via fb but it wouldn't work. I would be thrilled to pre-read for you.
Author's Response:
If you are on Fanfiction.net use it to Private message me.
Date: 04 May 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loving this story.
Date: 04 May 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh I'm so glad James got his ass kicked
Date: 04 May 2017 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Men. They can't be friends with another woman. The other woman won't let him. James allowed it to continue past a simple lunch until it turned into an affair. Vickie fell in love with him and he didn't stop it from happening. I hope Bella(?) can find happiness in a man that wants only to be with her. Someone who considers her to be enough.
Author's Response:
You are correct! He got taken in by a manipulative woman and now he is dealing with the aftermath of that. Bella will be just fine, she just needs to find herself. She has been with him since she was 19 so she has to figure out who she is without him. The dating will be fun though.
Date: 04 May 2017 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor bella..I have a feeling Vicki is gonna be trouble and talk James into contesting. Thank goodness for a prenup...Vicki must of thought James had money and is pissed it's actually bella.
Date: 04 May 2017 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love you, don't leave me.
2 minutes later he Texts V.: she is gone come over.
Clueless cheating bastard.
Glad she kicked him to the curb.
Divorce his sorry self and get a new man. Many of them.
Date: 04 May 2017 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Technology is not James's friend. He is a piss poor husband.
Author's Response:
Right! Unfortunately, he was a great husband but seems to have been snowed by a manipulative woman. He made a series of bad decisions that will ultimately cost him everything that was good in his life.
Date: 04 May 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well James is out! He is not very smart to have his mistress at his house after telling Bella how much he loves her and how bad he feels. He is just a jerk! Well he is a homeless jerk now! HA HA HA! Can't wait for more!
Date: 04 May 2017 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
That rat bastered 😤😤jasper should have gone over and kicked his sorry ass up and down the street. But well down Bella I hope she punches him
Date: 03 May 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
So much for James remorse, he didn't even wait a day to play house with his whore. I would of grabbed her by the hair and threw her out, then I would have given him an hour to get his shit out of my house while I waited. Fucker probably had sex in their bed! I would then call jasper and let him kick his ass. Poor bella is gonna be leery to trust another man.
Date: 03 May 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Take pictures Alice take videos evidence people evidence
Date: 03 May 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it,please update soon
Author's Response:
I hope you are getting the update notices. I have added two chapters and will probably add another today. Thank you for reading.
Date: 03 May 2017 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Why would James ever think she could overlook what he did? He is a very stupid man.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
I don't think he expected her to overlook it, he was just hoping she could forgive him. I think he actually planned to make it up to her in some way but Victoria had other plans. Keep reading.
Date: 03 May 2017 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
She should have punched him then left
Author's Response:
That's not really Bella's thing though. She loves him. A lot. So she has to process this.
Date: 03 May 2017 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story so far. I wish it was on ff.net because this site just never seems to send me updates when there's a new chapter.
Author's Response:
It is on Fanfiction.net. Thanks!
Author's Response:
It is on Fanfiction.net. Thanks!
Date: 03 May 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I found this through Cheatward on FB
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Cheatward has been a huge help for this story!
Date: 03 May 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cheating is one of the worst betrayals.
Author's Response:
I agree, especially when there isn't any trouble in the relationship. Thanks for reading.
Date: 03 May 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow.. this is great. Are you going to continue this? I really enjoyed it.
I am one of the admin's at Cheatwards Spot on Facebook. (its a cheating Twilight or FSoG stories. Since James cheated on Bella, I will be rec-ing this story there!)
Looking forward to more. Please feel free to join us, and you can post teasers, or chapter updates :D
Author's Response:
Yes I plan to continue it. I am not sure where it is going but I want to build Bella up and maybe see her thru a period of dating before pairing her off. Thank you for the recommendation I just requested to join the group.
Date: 03 May 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor bella.
Author's Response:
I know right. It hurts so much more when you get blindsided like that.
Date: 02 May 2017 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more please.
Author's Response:
No worries about that yet. This story has taken over and I have a little time right now to spend getting it on paper. The chapters are flowing quickly so I can knock out a chapter in a few hours. I have never had a story go so easily before. I still need to work on Saving Natalie though so I may get a few more chapters done here and then work on that one a bit. Thanks for reading!