Date: 07 Aug 2018 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Are you going to finish the story? Love the first few chapters hopefully you will
Date: 27 Jul 2017 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Is she gone from the hospital or is she dead????
Date: 27 Jul 2017 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella. Lol. I can't believe the guy was trying to hit on her. Too funny.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella and Tia must have inherited stupid genes from Charlie. They are idiots. Thank God Edward is there and has brain cells.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella is so stupid. When she looks in the mirror all she sees is a doormat. Edward loves her so much. More than she loves herself. He was around she just kept avoiding him. Her misery this past year is her own doing. Wake up girl.
Date: 18 Jul 2017 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder how Tia got away? I can't wait to find out.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 17 Jul 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
i feel so bad for bella still edward is right though she can't change them
Date: 15 Jul 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad edward is not walking away from her.
Date: 14 Jul 2017 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Take it tia left on her own against medical advice
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
Maybe the idea of Tia needing a cop father will pull Charlie out of his self destructive pattern.
Edward has finally broken into Bella's heart and head again.
Date: 14 Jul 2017 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
So, is Bella going to stand up and demand the real reason for his return. She's correct that it wasn't just for her, It's his job, would he have come back if it was for following leads? Not sure she should allow him the right to be around her especially since he left her once. You can't help who you're family is.
Date: 14 Jul 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Tia is in deep shit. Charlie is so sad Bella has to let him hit his bottom on his own.
Date: 14 Jul 2017 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
And the plot grows
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
So she has the balls to stand up to someone willing to take make her safety as a priority but god forbid she tells her low life sperm donor or sister to grow the fuck up. SERIOUSLY!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
So she has the balls to stand up to someone willing to take make her safety as a priority but god forbid she tells her low life sperm donor or sister to grow the fuck up. SERIOUSLY!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Just as I figured she's an enabler and she has no self preservation. Right now I think Edward is being unrealistic Bella obviously enjoys being used or as she may justify she likes behind needed.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say you are soft hearted cause I would have the balls to say Tia is an adult and owns her choices. Bella owes her nothing!!!! To allow an adult to come between my man and that type of bullshit Sorry my life is top priority. I couldn't do it. You say Tia has issues her dad is a drunk well pit seems Bella has drinking issues as well. : (
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say you are soft hearted cause I would have the balls to say Tia is an adult and owns her choices. Bella owes her nothing!!!! To allow an adult to come between my man and that type of bullshit Sorry my life is top priority. I couldn't do it. You say Tia has issues her dad is a drunk well pit seems Bella has drinking issues as well. : (
Date: 06 Jul 2017 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Short but.... it's obvious he still has feelings for her.
Date: 06 Jul 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sad but hopeful .
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Is Bella's father even home? If he was, why has he not come outside to Bella's aid?
What is Edward keeping from Bella? It's something huge from the tone of your storyline.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
She think Edward is using her I dont think so I think he broke up with her to protect her and now he knows he has to be close to her to protect her. He is so pissed
Date: 02 Jul 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you! Thank you for this uodate! Even though this cliffie SUUUCKS! This is probably one of my most favorite stories right now and i get sooo excited when i see an update even though i know a cliffie is probably coming. :( Have a great weekend!!
Date: 01 Jul 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
You always gotta love the big guy
Date: 27 Jun 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is so good and she should choose him over her losers family. Why does she have to be the martyr. They Don appreciate her sacrifice. Bella needs to wake-up.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
If Tia ends up dead, that's one less dependant, life sucking, family member out of the picture. Cruel, but true.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 11 Jun 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
So excited to get this update. Can't wait to see where you take this story.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Omg that was so intense. Love it cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Every part of this Edward screams YUMMY!
Bossy Edward = YUMMY
priVate eye Edward = YUMMY
controlling Edward = YUMMY
tying bella up with a belt = YUMMY x 2
thanks for the update!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great job the tension was vary much felt
Date: 10 Jun 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Its a good thing he knows her so well. Her family needs to grow up she is not there mom there is only so much you can do for them if they wont do for themselves.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
This might be my most favorite story u have ever written! A bossy edward is the best!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Eems like someone has been keeping an extra close eye on bella w/o her knowing!!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope Edward decides to check on her!!
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Why did Edward give up on their relationship? Or was it Bella's decision to put her family first instead of her boyfriend? Has Edward continued to watch over her from the shadows?
Is Jasper Edward's partner in business or an employee? Bella sure liked his looks. Hehe
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Why did Edward give up on their relationship? Or was it Bella's decision to put her family first instead of her boyfriend? Has Edward continued to watch over her from the shadows?
Is Jasper Edward's partner in business or an employee? Bella sure liked his looks. Hehe
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward knows so much more than he is ready to tell Bella.
Tia is mixed up with someone that Edward believes to be dangerous. And she led the guy to her sister's front door.
Date: 18 May 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
So glad you're posting on this site as well.
I prefer it to FFN.net
Date: 17 May 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am assuming that Tia' s boyfriend is someone that Edward is investigating. Can't wait for you to update.
Date: 17 May 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
What in the world just happened? He just walks back into her life and her bed without an explanation. He's got some explaining to do .
Date: 17 May 2017 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward better talk fast or she will run as fast as she can to get away from the pain NOT
Date: 17 May 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
hoping she stand up for herself some more . . . e is pretty bossy and based on what we know so far, is acting like an ass, even given the circustmances. hoping she doesn't give into him so easily
Date: 16 May 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
So glad to get this new story from you. Can't wait to see what you have planned.
Date: 16 May 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm thinking Tia is involved with someone from the mob or something like that. I don't trust Edward.
Thank for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 16 May 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
So Edward is some kind of a police officer? I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 16 May 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
That must be really hard...being so close to someone you love that really broke your heart!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 16 May 2017 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love that he called her out
Date: 16 May 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
He has been keeping a watch on her. His job is more than what she thinks it is
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
What information is Edward withholding from Bella?
Has he been keeping tabs on her daily activities?
Is there such a thing as a friendly stalker?
Can't wait for more of this story.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
All right, another story!
It's already angsty, but feels like it's going to be a wild ride following Bella and Edward through the wake of their break up. And hopefully, make up.
Was Alice commenting on Jasper?
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
All right, another story!
It's already angsty, but feels like it's going to be a wild ride following Bella and Edward through the wake of their break up. And hopefully, make up.
Was Alice commenting on Jasper?
Date: 15 May 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Just take charge there haha haha
Date: 15 May 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
wondering what is going on
Date: 15 May 2017 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Edward has been keeping an eye on her. He loves her still what was he thinking leaving her.
Date: 15 May 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Already know this is going to be good
Date: 15 May 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
good start. can't wait to learn e's side of the break-up
Date: 15 May 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
good start. can't wait to learn e's side of the break-up
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Date: 14 May 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing already!! I bet Edward is more then he is telling and that is why he left her, to keep her safe!!